Chapter I

The Longest Night
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In the dead cold of the night they sat on their haunches and observed the blackened world for its true intent. Three girls, alone. The youngest eighteen and the others not but a few years older. Here in this boundless arid wasteland devoid of purpose or navigation and across the blank wall of existence rose stars tiny and insignificant like calcite patterns painted over all the sky. Vast expanse of darkness without analogue to suffice where once there had been grassland pastures and shale rockfaces and the cool wind to brush against their moss underbellies as they slept. They felt like silk under your fingers. Soft and delicate and without equal and now never to be put back again. What hope in this rotten place but of one more night ahead of them and beyond no such afforded fortunes.

There came but once a frail howl in the cold. Wolves in the hills. These girls made no sound and they knew themselves in this wretched land to be the sheep. Vague shadows in the distant fog lumbered to and from like amorphous walleyed fiends conjured from some unreckonable atavistic biome where no man would ever prosper. Antecedents from whence their origins entirely unknown. Their presence like the arrival of some strange arcane horde. Three they were and yet they dared not wander from the hill even when the snows fell and the night grew longer and colder. The youngest among them crouched lower and drew a finger across the ashen silt. She imagined herself the author of some scripture or parable for precious future generations to decipher in years yet to come. Dear curious stranger, our plight carries us further than we dare go and we find no refuge anywhere and all is darkness.

Their death all but assured should they wait among such snow and ash. The oldest among them stood on a small incline overlooking the bleak and sightless prairieland beyond. She remembered in times long gone by the architecture of plains just like these. Green as can be. In those fields the sumac and the honeysuckle, pale and spiderlike limbs row on row like terracotta figurines in rebus to nature’s spectacle. Child’s idle wanderlust set to purpose. Her name called from voic

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iasb123
#1
Chapter 14: I'm kind of late, but wow this was really good. Everything was so bleak and miserable and you described it so well. The cold, the stench, the rot, the dirt, the pain. You used a lot of repetition, but it felt right because that's the world they lived it. Even though it's been years since I read it, I was reminded a lot of The Road by Cormac McCarthy. Man, did you get me feeling feels :'(
Discoball228
#2
Chapter 14: It’s one am and I can’t stop crying omg
hangryeats #3
Chapter 14: This was so heavy, how they found the strength in each other and that being the only reason for them to go on. I am curious what lead to the end of the world
Locksmith_13
#4
Chapter 14: Oh god. Im crying here in my room. 3:45 am. Help me
poplarbear #5
Chapter 14: I expected it will end like that but oh boy it's raining here. Thank you ffor writing this!
poplarbear #6
Chapter 5: Well written and interesting plot? Sign me in!
jjae96
#7
ugh, very well written!
thequietone
16 streak #8
Chapter 14: ohmy freaking gosh I need a moment. My heart is aching for all of them. It leaves such a big impression to me and also ever since I read about Seul's rotten feet I can't stop thinking/imagining it seriously you're description about it makes me weak :( i feel like I'm the one suffering from it. The deaths are just so sad knowing it couldn't be prevented and just watching them suffer and suffer hurts me. I love their bond! Meeting Irene and Joy makes them feel more I guess human? they feel a lil bit alive cuz back then they really didn't communicate much but after meeting them at least they get to enjoy some simple normal things they used to do back then brief human interactions also seulwenri!! their strong bond they love each other so much and I figured seul's will to live is just because of wenri they became her source of life and strength then she lose wendy and everything starts to crumpled her hope and strength slowly fading away to the point of hee just wanting to put an end to her life huhu a is crying. This is just amazing you're an incredible writer I wonder if writing is your profession. anyway thank you so much for this, I need to rest for a bit then read your other works too.
jjae96
#9
Chapter 14: figured irene passed too then yeri and seulgi but then yeah, all the ing death. i am upvoting. off to find some fluff. dang it, good job
jjae96
#10
Chapter 14: goddammit. i didn’t wish to read something like this but i continued on anyway. i wish it wasn’t half as good when you wrote and i would’ve stopped midway but again, it was well written that i couldn’t just abandon it so yeah, i am going to find something fluffy now. dang it.