Journal Entry One

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 November 2o, 2014

 I saw a pretty girl come to the shop today.

She was all big eyes and bright smiles

She was probably the prettiest girl I had ever seen….

I wanted to talk to her

But I was too nervous to even look at her in the eye

She came over and asked in the sweetest voice ever on whether or not if she could have a carp cake.

I was stationed in making them, my friend was able to hand feed her.

I’m not jealous, I’m so jealous

She left with a soft smile and a carp cake in hand

I never got to find out her name….

 

 

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someoneloves
#1
Chapter 10: i can't believe i missed alot of chapters! i read it all now, maybe it will take abit more longer to see an actual interactions of them in this story? waah!
i was just thinking this morning about this pairing and rmb your story! and boom! you updated! waah!
coz tomorrow(kst) will be kcon newyork and both w1 and exid will be performing! i'm hoping to see a real life interactions!!!
ayo_th
#2
Chapter 7: And now you made me craving for starwberry and cream. Why are you doing this to me author-nim? Hahahahaha. Btw, i really love this chapter. I'm blushing too!!!!!
someoneloves
#3
Chapter 7: waa.. Daniel being adorably shy then turn to be seductive man with that real smooth move haha his duality!!! kinda awkward with that tradition but if its cute guy like Daniel, we all don't mind to be fed lol thanks for the update! please be healthy, don't get sick!
Cinder123 #4
I love the story so far! Keep up the good work.
someoneloves
#5
Chapter 5: hi! at first i was confused i thought it was Daniel talking to himself, we all know he has that habit. makes me embarassed coz i really think i have low reading comprehension i sometimes get confused reading in some parts but i'm glad i'm actually getting the haste of the story. i can't wait how the story goes.. there was a fancam of lovely moment from mbc gayo when Hani talking about newyear Daniel was looking at her it was really short and yet very lovely! thats why as soon as this was up i'm right to subscribe coz i want know the sparks work beetween them even only in fiction.
ayo_th
#6
Chapter 6: Heeyeon will leave busan....poor daniel...
ayo_th
#7
Chapter 5: I love this. And suddenly i feel hungry when imagine the carp cake. Lol.
ayo_th
#8
Chapter 1: Can't wait to read your story! Fighting author-nim! ♡_♡