A Letter To The Sun

Description

It wasn't much, but it was something. A last ditch attempt at forgiveness. A plea from across the world. She stared at the letter in her hand and then dropped it into the mailbox, wishing her heart wasn't so damn fragile

Foreword

This is a short story about what happens to the members of Mamamoo after they break up. Nothing can last forever, not Mamamoo, not their friendship, not even Byulyi's love for Yongsun.

I will include my character profiles at the end of this work as an extra chapter. They're not very important, but might give you a look into how I flush out characters in my head before writing.

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4s-BBbam #1 Mar 13, 2020 06:55:32

Chapter 3: Wow it hurts

jollie_mar #2 Oct 5, 2018 18:56:09

Chapter 4: Why are you so talented? :(( I mean oh God you are so good in writing stories. Always fresh and unique and original. You are a genius, Tom! :))

gay4pineapples #3 Aug 9, 2018 04:55:29

Chapter 4: h u h
ok, you’re a genius
after reading your authors note, everything makes much more sense
it’s like they’re stuck a little, maybe yong more so than byul, but they’re gliding on different paths and botth have reached a similar rough patch of ice
what you said about the expectation of moonsun’s “dynamic”, you could say, is so true. like, byul is the flirty (maybe a little shy) one, who is mr snatch yo lady and super handsome and iedjnfjrmemduryfnrmosmdi3urnfunfr, and yong is usually the one who gets super embarrassed by byul’s affections, acting a little tsundere after pushing byul away and insisting her lack of feelings for her (spoiler: she’s wrong). also, one of them always seems to be a ceo or a super good student?????? LMAO

moonsun750 #4 May 25, 2018 05:03:55

Chapter 4: This was perfect tom, as usual, over expectations :)

moonsun750 #5 May 25, 2018 04:53:45

Chapter 2: oh this is exciiitiinng

moonsun750 #6 May 25, 2018 04:50:13

Chapter 1: this really hurts.. i love it..

cjmoo_ #7 Feb 13, 2018 08:46:04

Chapter 4: I would say this story is successful in bringing out the message that you try to convey in this A/N. After I finished reading the last chapter, I went 'That's it?'; I felt like I was left hanging with such an open ending, but all open endings have a reason why they're left as so, and I enjoyed this open ending. That it was left like that gives a sense that life goes on for all the characters in their own ways (like what you've mentioned here) and that in itself is a beautiful ending. Thank you for this Tom!

esined-rm #8 Feb 7, 2018 15:38:33

Chapter 4: It's a unique story. I've read a lot of traditional moonsun fics. The best is definitely your notes. The way you thought of everything and how they feel and how it's supposed to be is amazing. I do wish byul and Gen all the very best in this universe.

katykatkaye #9 Jan 31, 2018 17:56:24

Chapter 4: I agree with you author. Actually, this was pretty good. I've been craving for a good story of MoonSun, didnt expect ill be able to find something nice and genuine as this one. It wasnt sad at all, the point that Yongsun checked Byulyi after the chicken and beer hangout was meaningful, in a way that Yongsun really is thinking about her despite of the long years she didnt show up.

P.S I really thought it was Byul who will look back at Yongsun lol i thought there was 0.0001% chance they'll be together because it was Solar not Byul ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

4dwaffle #10 Jan 30, 2018 00:17:40

Chapter 4: And that's what makes this story perfect. Yes i love happy ending moonsun too. But in real life there's nothing last forever. Your decision clearly made this story unique. Thanks for your amazing work. I came here to reread. And I'm sure I will come back to read again.