001 Flame Keepers

Flames of Love
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 “Are you sure honey? You’ve heard this story at least a hundred times.” She sat perched on the side of his bed, her deep green dress contrasted beautifully against her curling dark hair that was piled in a delicate heap on top of her head secured with green and cream ribbons. She leaned forward and, with a pale hand, brushed back Taemin’s dark bangs from his forehead. Her drooping sleeve sported golden tassels that brushed against his cheek as she did so.

 

“Of course umma,” he grinned up at her with the dark glint in his eye full of the playful assurance he’d get his way.

 

“Aigoo, my little son knows just what he wants.” Smiled the beautiful woman, “Very well darling.” She got up off his crimson and gold coverlet. The dark, russet canopy that draped itself around his bed full of plump, black, and red cushions embroidered in gold, hung heavily around him; the large golden rope tassels swayed as his mother brushed past them. She glided silently over the dark wood floor and reached out to stoke the flames in the fireplace that protruded from the opposite wall. Sparks flared in the grate as she straightened and returned to her seat beside her son.

 

Taemin’s eyes never left his mother. The way the firelight illuminated her face, leaving parts in shadow fascinated him; she was the most beautiful woman he’d ever known. She was also the most talented story-teller he’d ever known. He was determined. He wouldn’t go to bed until he heard his favorite story from her. “Now umma,” he told her pointedly, “Tell me about the Flame Keepers.”

 

His mother closed her eyes for a moment as if she were trying to decide how to start the story. Taemin didn’t know why she did it; for dramatic effect perhaps. She knew, just as he did, how the story started. Slowly she opened her eyes and began…

 

Many millenia ago… our ancestors fought against the elements for survival. They lived in caves and small villages, and hunted in order to obtain food. Back then, we lived in peace with the Mages. However, the Mages were better equipped than we for survival in that dark world… for one of the Ancient Ones had blessed them with the powers of the land.

 

But we were not so soon to be outdone…One night, under the light of the full moon, an Ancient One came to us from the heavens.

 

“The Phoenix…” Taemin breathed in excitement, eyes wide.

 

“That’s right,” his mother his hair and continued.

 

The Ancient One was a creature of old magic. A large bird of prey made up entirely of flames. He was exceedingly powerful and incredible to behold. Made of embers and flames, ashes drifted behind him as he flew like a flaming shadow across the skies. He had observed our people and realized the Mages had the ability to manipulate the earth: forming plants for survival and protection, but that our

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snowtaems
#1
Chapter 9: This story plot is so interesting!
Two ancient ones shown themselves and shares their power... I’m really curious about the other ancient ones, how it would connect to Taemin and Jinki’s abilities so far... about his life in her small and quiet place :)
I hope I get to read the rest of your story one day :)
noomin #2
Yes yes yes keep updating love it
damnationSUruck
#3
Chapter 2: OK. Yep. I can't resist commenting despite not catching up to the latest update, but you really deserve to hear these words because so far, this story is fantastic! Your style of writing is really immaculate, and I'm enjoying your narrations way too much. Unlike a lot of regal AUs I've read in the past, this one actually seems real to me. It's very well-fleshed out, and I can almost imagine every little detail you describe; the one scene that stood out to me being when Taemin climbed the mountain and sat for a moment, looking out over his kingdom as night fell. I could imagine an incredibly picturesque scene, so vivid it just came to me like a painting or something. Ah, this is really a treat for the mind, haha.
The story as well is very compelling. I found myself immersed by the end of this, and I really can't wait to see what more happens! Taemin's family dynamics is also worthy of interest, it's really got me wondering about his father.

I'm excited to catch up, but I'd just like to say thank you for sharing this story because so far, it's a real gem. I'm enjoying every bit of it as I go. All the best writing!
britishtae
#4
Chapter 1: it seems it will be a very interesting story...i like how the plot is original, excited for more <3