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The Name-Seeker
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It was another fifteen minutes of hurrying through the narrow, winding streets before Kyungsoo and Yoorae reached their next destination.  They were both out of breath, the last few hundred metres having been steeply uphill in one of the oldest parts of the city.  It was a nice area, too, since it was on the fringes of the sprawling university that had grown up around the ancient city library, and had long been considered the hub of the cultural and intellectual quarter, which now wasn’t so much one specific part of the city but manifested itself in pockets of various different sizes all over the place.

They stopped in front of a large, very old mansion that had stood the test of time extraordinarily well, and Yoorae rapped sharply on the door with the brass knocker.  It was freezing to the touch, and she had long since ceased to gawp at the exquisite workmanship of the dolphin it was shaped as, but she was a bit too miserable from the cold to want to do that anyway.  She and Kyungsoo huddled in the portico as they waited for the door to be answered, standing and shivering close to each other for a little extra warmth.  Yoorae was on the brink of trying to find her stylus to conjure up a little heat for them both when the door swung inwards, a familiar figure silhouetted by soft firelight beyond.

Yoorae straightened up.  “Name us,” she offered as the password.

“A name is precious,” the man responded, peering past her to check who her companion was, and then he stepped back to admit them.  “You’re late.”

“I know, Junmyeon, I know.  Sorry.”

At twenty-six, Junmyeon was four years older than both Yoorae and Kyungsoo and also painfully young to be in full possession of the family fortune.  Like so many others in the city, he’d lost both of his parents to the plague that had devastated the islands for a full seven years when they were children, and Yoorae sometimes pitied him because he’d actually known his parents.  She’d been left at one of the many orphanages in the city as a baby, the signs of plague upon her, but by some miracle had managed to survive.  The matrons who had looked after and raised her suspected that she’d actually contracted the plague before she was born, since there had been a small but noticeable trend of such babies living when the plague killed everybody else.  They’d also assumed for a number of years that Kyungsoo was her brother, since he had been left at the same time, bundled up a few feet away on the orphanage steps in almost exactly the same manner and materials.  While Yoorae and Kyungsoo had never managed to establish whether they were related, they had grown to doubt it with each passing year.  They looked nothing like each other, and Yoorae had a much keener sense of magic than most, while Kyungsoo, like a high proportion of the populace, could neither use or sense its use in the slightest.  The ability to use magic didn’t necessarily run in families, but Yoorae knew from extensive research that it was almost unheard of for somebody with such powerful magic to be closely related to somebody who couldn’t use it at all.  If Kyungsoo truly was her brother, he wouldn’t necessarily have been as powerful as she was, but he ought to have been manifesting some inkling of affinity with it.

They followed Junmyeon through the mansion, past the heirlooms that had been in his family for centuries, and down some stairs into a basement parlour that had been fashioned out of a disused wine cellar.  He must have been somewhere near the front of the house listening for them, because there was no way that anybody could have heard the knocker from this distance.

The others were already waiting.  Including herself and Kyungsoo, there were fourteen of them in total, some of whom Yoorae knew relatively well and others of whom she only knew by name.  Three worked with Junmyeon at the university, two as historians like Junmyeon himself and one who was an astronomer.  Junmyeon’s sweetheart, whom he’d met while he was a student, worked in the royal archives and went by the name of Mijin.  Yixing, a junior physician from Korelli Island, sat to her right.  Next to him were three men from the city watch – the only one that Yoorae knew at all well was Yongguk, who had useful connections with the city prisons.  To Yongguk’s right was the daughter of the man who ran Alta Wharf, the biggest and busiest harbour on the island.  On her other side was Yook Jaesung, a venerable old man who never raised his voice and was both one of the highest ranking nobles throughout Saurellis and one of the most accomplished sigil mages, and beyond him, High Magistrata Kang Seulgi, the imperious woman who had introduced Yoorae to the group.

They had all been talking amongst themselves when Yoorae and Kyungsoo followed Junmyeon in, but they quietened down now that the group was complete and several of them sent friendly nods and waves in their direction.  Junmyeon settled at the head of the table between Yook Jaesung and Kang Seulgi, and Kyungsoo and Yoorae slid into the last remaining seats, which had thoughtfully been left right next to each other.  Kyungsoo instantly reached for a stack of parchment that was on the table and dragged the ink pot and quill beside it towards him.

Kang Seulgi immediately took charge.

“We were discussing before you came,” she told Kyungsoo and Yoorae, “a recent arrest of somebody using naming magic.”

Kyungsoo’s quill was scratching over the papyrus at once.  Yoorae nodded, accepting a glass of water from a tray that Mijin slid across to her and taking another one off for Kyungsoo, though he probably wouldn’t notice until his hand started cramping from the rapid pace at which he was taking notes and he needed to take a break.

“What was this person doing?” she asked.

“Currently, we don’t know,” replied Jaesung.  “But we do know that it wasn’t a tip-off, because Seulgi’s supposed to be sitting on the case and the prosecution records mention that this man was tracked, not that there are any eyewitnesses.”

Junmyeon reached across to the tray and took the last glass of water.  “Surely that means the prosecution’s case is too weak for it to be forwarded to the high court and hope to win?”

One of the professors slumped in his chair with a sigh.  “My colleagues at the Faculty for Magical Forensics and Development have been getting excited over a new top secret discovery recently and I have a nasty feeling it’s connected.”

Everybody looked at him expectantly, waiting for him to expand.  He twisted a wedding ring around his finger – a nervous habit – before doing so.

“I don’t know much,” he admitted, “but what I overheard leads me to suspect they’ve created a sigil sequence they’ve managed to imbue into some substance or other that detects non-sigil magic.”

“Imbue

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weird_fellaf #1
Chapter 4: Whooooa, I finally get to witness the Naming in action! So is it some kinda hypnosis or pheromone that make sure certain subjects/objects to obey the caster? And would we see the story from the Prince's point of view later on, I wonder...?
weird_fellaf #2
Chapter 3: I don't know why but I really love it when I got to read Kyungsoo in action! And nice conclusion, by the way, Kyungsoo. I'd love to got you to summarize all of my studies and stuffs. I think that'd be awesome for sure!

And oh, oh! The captain of Chen Madreen is getting the spotlight little by little! Goodness, this is so exciting! And by the way, your poets in the end really helps to set up the mood, I mean, like, seriously, I love them :DD
weird_fellaf #3
Chapter 2: I guess this whole idea of Naming still doesn't sit well with my brain hehe. I'm sorry, gimme a bit more time to sink into the story :'))

Aand, right. About this dangerous, secret rendezvous they're doing - The Name-Seekers, if I'm not mistaken? I wonder if a betrayer will turn up later on in the story... That'll surely lead to me thinking up some cuss words but that'd be a pretty awesome twist to the story, I imagine. But this story is all yours to create, anyway. And I believe your storyline would be awesome as always! >;D
weird_fellaf #4
Chapter 1: Ahaaahah, if you're sorry because you're not acquainted that well with neither boat stuffs nor poetry, I must say I'm sorry because I at understanding them stuffs more than you claim you are, Korey :')) I hope that my brain can process all this stuffs as the story rolled out, tho. :'DD
weird_fellaf #5
Well, I guess it's just me and my thick head. But I don't really get the foreword ;((
But for a pretty long time that I was a reader, a foreword that leaves me intrigued and not really understanding it usually has an awesome plot waiting! Soooooo, I'll just go drown in this story, then! >:DD
zan8901
#6
Chapter 4: I love the relationship between Yoorae and Kyungsoo. They may not end up being biological siblings, but their bond is akin to one and that's all that matters. And I felt so bad for her in the beginning, she has so many responsibilities and tasks she needs to carry out, that's so much hard work! "By the time Yoorae was finished for the day, the courtroom was so cold that her breath was condensing on the air." D*mn! How was she able to function? XD It's so sweet what they are risking to help out those children.

And with what Yoorae did, it was so nice to read her using her powers on the troubled children. Yeah, maybe in a way it's ridding them of their ability to make choices, but it's not like they don't want what they're striving for. They finally don't have to deal with the mental trouble of wanting to gain a better life whilst also falling back into a sea of crime; now, they can focus only on fixing their future. In the long run, it really will be worth it and they'll have safer lives that are meaningful and positive. Honestly, what more could you ask for? It was nice to see her mention the other kids she'd helped who managed to gain better lives because of her. "It was long enough for them to break bad habits and form good ones - long enough for them to get a taste of what an honest, good life could be." Exactly! Couldn't have said it better myself. XD Reading how the sigils act in the story and also just being able to read Yoorae use her naming magic was awesome. Can't wait for more of this amazing story and its characters. <3 Missed you lots, Korey. Hope you enjoyed the comments and they brought a smile to your face. <333
zan8901
#7
Chapter 3: "A thick mist hung over the capital city as they wound their way through the streets, punctuated every so often by the low-burning lamps. The mist clung to the cobbles, making them slippery, and Yoorae grabbed at Kyungsoo's elbow more than once to stop herself from going sprawling." Wow, Korey, it's the second paragraph and already I'm stunned by your incredible detail of the environment. I can picture the scenery so clearly along with our main characters interacting in it. I had to re-read it because I found it so beautifully done, and just had to comment about it.

So interesting to read about what happened to the Nuisance. I don't have a theory as to why he was murdered but it what happened to him. When finding out what occurred inside the jail, it highlighted how our mysterious murderer (cough, Chen, cough) is quite a dangerous opponent. Everyone passed out and couldn't remember who he was - now that's exciting and had me super absorbed into finding out more! And I was so happy to see that Yoorae was beginning to suspect Chen and his medallion. Then they couldn't remember of his details. I liked reading that part, it kind of upped the mystery and made Chen so much more of a powerful threat.

"So basically, he was handsome." LMAO Kyungsoo always coming in with them witty comments. XD Chen (and his lackeys) are really getting around! Now abducting historians? I can't wait to find out more of who he is and what exactly his plans are (after he gets those Lifestones. I mean, why would he need to have that much power? Either he's greedy as hell or has a plan for them.). Ugh, need I say more about your poetry? XD You know exactly what I'm going to say. <3
zan8901
#8
Chapter 2: Korey, you are so d*mn brilliant. Your mind still manages to boggle me and I have known you for how many years? I actually went back and checked and funnily enough, my first ever comment I sent to you was September 11, 2015. XD Isn't that insane? How time flies by! Reading this, I actually felt myself get goosebumps; it was like I was reading your writing for the first time all over again. I've said it countless times before but your writing still manages to blow me away and make me feel so happy because it's just so beautiful - the descriptions, the details, the flow and the writing itself. Korey, I swear I'm not kissing a*s, but you're still my favorite writer after all these years. <33 Your writing does stuff to my soul, and I love it. <333 Please don't tell me you've forgotten me, my senpai/queen. <333 I'm still your number one fan, just because I went AWOL doesn't mean anyone can take my place! XD

Anyways, onto the story! I apologize if I don't remember some details from chapter one. I wanted to start immediately where I left off and make some comments before I went to sleep. Very intriguing to learn more about Junmyeon and his history, as well as Yoorae's and Kyungsoo' speculation on being related. It's so sad to know that he had actually known his parents and felt the pains of loss because of the plague. =( I can't help but comment on how beautiful your descriptions were when introducing the new characters. It's just enough to gain an understanding of who everyone is without having to dump too much information on the reader so they become confused. What they're doing is pretty admirable, trying to help out the orphans so that they may better their lives. And then the ending, bringing up the "pirate prince". Oooh, I'm so excited now! Especially since Yoorae has actually seen Chen and the medallion - it just makes things so much more interesting.

"Oft at new moon he comes ashore. And prowls the darkened streets." "-but others that he's searching. As he hides within the throng. He vanishes like vapour. His presence like a dream - or possibly a nightmare - back to the Chen Madreen." I'm sorry, but do you hear that? It's nothing, just the sound of me screaming at my Queen's amazing poetry skills. <33 You could write two words and I'd still do my best to analyze the sh*t out of it and make a comment AT LEAST two paragraphs long. I could gush endlessly about how much I missed you but I'm going to refrain and continue to read the story or else I'll be here all night. XD <333 Missed you, girl. Hope you're doing alright (and that you've been managing without my amazing, lovely, lengthy a*s comments to brighten your day ;D).
exokexomkai
#9
Chapter 4: I can feel my gut bubbling. Ready for this story.
softsology
#10
Chapter 4: theses poems at the ends of the chapters are so beautiful!!
woaahh naming magic is so cool (and kinda scary!)