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The Name-Seeker
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Yoorae and Kyungsoo were both up before daybreak.  Yoorae was normally a bit of an early bird, but she hated it in winter because it meant she was up before the sun had risen, and it was always depressing.  Kyungsoo was somehow just always awake and sprightly no matter what hour he forced himself out of bed.

A thick mist hung over the capital city as they wound their way through the streets, punctuated every so often by the low-burning lamps.  The mist clung to the cobbles, making them slippery, and Yoorae grabbed at Kyungsoo’s elbow more than once to stop herself from going sprawling.

The docks were bustling with life by the time that they reached them.  As far as Yoorae knew, there were always people here there and everywhere at all hours of day and night when it came to the docks, though darkness did seem to thin the numbers quite substantially.  The tide was, however, going out, and lots of ships were prepping to set sail imminently.  Kyungsoo linked his arm through hers so that he wouldn’t lose her in the chaos, which Yoorae was grateful for as most of the sailors were significantly bigger than she was and a lot of them were carrying crates in their arms that prevented them from seeing where they were going.

There was a strange atmosphere as they entered the prison on Tarimay Wharf.    At first, Yoorae put it down to the knowledge that she really shouldn’t be there, especially not to talk to somebody on the morning of the day she was due to pass judgement on him, because that was malpractice whether or not anybody found out about it (and if they did, her position as magistrata could be in jeopardy), but various of the Name-Seekers had deemed it important to glean what was possible from the Nuisance about his encounter with magic.  It was not something Yoorae could grill him about in the courtroom without incurring a lot of suspicion, but, if he did start talking, Yoorae would be able to place a temporary stay of up to a week on his trial and then she and the others could question him at their leisure rather than having to get Yongguk to sneak them into the various prisons for interviews if the evidence suggested that was where Yoorae should put him, or it would save her from having to track him down again if the evidence suggested there was not enough to put him behind bars.

The jailer looked in equal measure relieved and alarmed to see her.

“Magistrata!” he gasped out as he sprinted up to them from the other end of the corridor.  “I’ve just sent for the city watch – there’s been a murder!”

Yoorae exchanged glances with Kyungsoo, but they both hurried after the jailer as he whipped back around and all but ran back to the cells.  Yoorae’s heart sank when he stopped in front of the one she had been into the night before, fumbling with the keys.  The inmates in the various other cells were all awake and as close to the passage as they could get, watching with interest.

The Nuisance was lying on the floor.  He looked peaceful, hands folded over his stomach, legs straight, eyes closed, seeming for all the world to be asleep – except for the neatly slit throat and the blood staining the straw.  Kyungsoo’s eyes were scanning the room immediately as he fished out a roll of parchment from his satchel and a piece of charcoal and started to sketch the scene in swift, sure .  Yoorae kept back so that she wouldn’t be in his way, gesturing for the jailer to do the same.

“When did this happen?” she asked.

The jailer shrugged helplessly.

“I was out most of the night,” he confessed.  “Only woke up a short while ago.”

Yoorae frowned.  “Weren’t you on night duty?”

“There was nothing I could do, magistrata.  I’ve never conked out on the job like this.  I didn’t eat nor drink anything, and I’m fit as a flea.  But nothing.  And it wasn’t just me, neither.  I remember you visiting, and after you another gentleman came in, and then after that, nothing until I woke up sitting in my chair by the door.  None of the inmates saw anything.”  He paused.  “And my keys weren’t taken and the cell was locked.”

Yoorae couldn’t help another glance at Kyungsoo.  He was finishing up his sketch intently, charcoal flying over the parchment.

“Whoever murdered this man could have taken your keys and put them back, if you truly remember nothing,” Yoorae murmured.  “And locks can be opened with magic, anyway.”

“You should check the lock for sigil markings,” Kyungsoo pointed out, having now moved from his sketch onto notes about the situation.  Yoorae crossed to the barred door and took out her stylus, carefully selecting the most useful sigils from her memory.  If sigil magic was used, it was sometimes possible to cast a small spell, provided it was in the precise area the original ones had been drawn, to see which sigils had been in play.  It did have to be done within a few hours of the original ones being drawn, and she wondered if perhaps they were too distant timewise for it to work, but she swipe her personal sigil across the ones she’d drawn nonetheless.

Nothing.  Which was predictable.  The jailer continued to prattle anxiously while Yoorae and Kyungsoo inspected the body.

“There’s no sign of a struggle,” Kyungsoo observed in a murmur, his eyes darting around at the straw.  “Looks like he was lying down when his throat was cut, too, otherwise the blood would have spattered, not pooled.  And his neck has been cleaned.  That’s weird.”

“It wouldn’t have taken him too long to bleed out,” Yoorae pointed out.  “And I’m willing to bet the killer took the time to put him in this position.”

“He was lying down,” Kyungsoo repeated.  “I wouldn’t bet too much.”

“Why, though?” Yoorae wondered.  “What reason was there to kill him?”

 

When questioned, the rest of the inmates all had the same story as the jailer.  There had been various visits to the prison the previou

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weird_fellaf #1
Chapter 4: Whooooa, I finally get to witness the Naming in action! So is it some kinda hypnosis or pheromone that make sure certain subjects/objects to obey the caster? And would we see the story from the Prince's point of view later on, I wonder...?
weird_fellaf #2
Chapter 3: I don't know why but I really love it when I got to read Kyungsoo in action! And nice conclusion, by the way, Kyungsoo. I'd love to got you to summarize all of my studies and stuffs. I think that'd be awesome for sure!

And oh, oh! The captain of Chen Madreen is getting the spotlight little by little! Goodness, this is so exciting! And by the way, your poets in the end really helps to set up the mood, I mean, like, seriously, I love them :DD
weird_fellaf #3
Chapter 2: I guess this whole idea of Naming still doesn't sit well with my brain hehe. I'm sorry, gimme a bit more time to sink into the story :'))

Aand, right. About this dangerous, secret rendezvous they're doing - The Name-Seekers, if I'm not mistaken? I wonder if a betrayer will turn up later on in the story... That'll surely lead to me thinking up some cuss words but that'd be a pretty awesome twist to the story, I imagine. But this story is all yours to create, anyway. And I believe your storyline would be awesome as always! >;D
weird_fellaf #4
Chapter 1: Ahaaahah, if you're sorry because you're not acquainted that well with neither boat stuffs nor poetry, I must say I'm sorry because I at understanding them stuffs more than you claim you are, Korey :')) I hope that my brain can process all this stuffs as the story rolled out, tho. :'DD
weird_fellaf #5
Well, I guess it's just me and my thick head. But I don't really get the foreword ;((
But for a pretty long time that I was a reader, a foreword that leaves me intrigued and not really understanding it usually has an awesome plot waiting! Soooooo, I'll just go drown in this story, then! >:DD
zan8901
#6
Chapter 4: I love the relationship between Yoorae and Kyungsoo. They may not end up being biological siblings, but their bond is akin to one and that's all that matters. And I felt so bad for her in the beginning, she has so many responsibilities and tasks she needs to carry out, that's so much hard work! "By the time Yoorae was finished for the day, the courtroom was so cold that her breath was condensing on the air." D*mn! How was she able to function? XD It's so sweet what they are risking to help out those children.

And with what Yoorae did, it was so nice to read her using her powers on the troubled children. Yeah, maybe in a way it's ridding them of their ability to make choices, but it's not like they don't want what they're striving for. They finally don't have to deal with the mental trouble of wanting to gain a better life whilst also falling back into a sea of crime; now, they can focus only on fixing their future. In the long run, it really will be worth it and they'll have safer lives that are meaningful and positive. Honestly, what more could you ask for? It was nice to see her mention the other kids she'd helped who managed to gain better lives because of her. "It was long enough for them to break bad habits and form good ones - long enough for them to get a taste of what an honest, good life could be." Exactly! Couldn't have said it better myself. XD Reading how the sigils act in the story and also just being able to read Yoorae use her naming magic was awesome. Can't wait for more of this amazing story and its characters. <3 Missed you lots, Korey. Hope you enjoyed the comments and they brought a smile to your face. <333
zan8901
#7
Chapter 3: "A thick mist hung over the capital city as they wound their way through the streets, punctuated every so often by the low-burning lamps. The mist clung to the cobbles, making them slippery, and Yoorae grabbed at Kyungsoo's elbow more than once to stop herself from going sprawling." Wow, Korey, it's the second paragraph and already I'm stunned by your incredible detail of the environment. I can picture the scenery so clearly along with our main characters interacting in it. I had to re-read it because I found it so beautifully done, and just had to comment about it.

So interesting to read about what happened to the Nuisance. I don't have a theory as to why he was murdered but it what happened to him. When finding out what occurred inside the jail, it highlighted how our mysterious murderer (cough, Chen, cough) is quite a dangerous opponent. Everyone passed out and couldn't remember who he was - now that's exciting and had me super absorbed into finding out more! And I was so happy to see that Yoorae was beginning to suspect Chen and his medallion. Then they couldn't remember of his details. I liked reading that part, it kind of upped the mystery and made Chen so much more of a powerful threat.

"So basically, he was handsome." LMAO Kyungsoo always coming in with them witty comments. XD Chen (and his lackeys) are really getting around! Now abducting historians? I can't wait to find out more of who he is and what exactly his plans are (after he gets those Lifestones. I mean, why would he need to have that much power? Either he's greedy as hell or has a plan for them.). Ugh, need I say more about your poetry? XD You know exactly what I'm going to say. <3
zan8901
#8
Chapter 2: Korey, you are so d*mn brilliant. Your mind still manages to boggle me and I have known you for how many years? I actually went back and checked and funnily enough, my first ever comment I sent to you was September 11, 2015. XD Isn't that insane? How time flies by! Reading this, I actually felt myself get goosebumps; it was like I was reading your writing for the first time all over again. I've said it countless times before but your writing still manages to blow me away and make me feel so happy because it's just so beautiful - the descriptions, the details, the flow and the writing itself. Korey, I swear I'm not kissing a*s, but you're still my favorite writer after all these years. <33 Your writing does stuff to my soul, and I love it. <333 Please don't tell me you've forgotten me, my senpai/queen. <333 I'm still your number one fan, just because I went AWOL doesn't mean anyone can take my place! XD

Anyways, onto the story! I apologize if I don't remember some details from chapter one. I wanted to start immediately where I left off and make some comments before I went to sleep. Very intriguing to learn more about Junmyeon and his history, as well as Yoorae's and Kyungsoo' speculation on being related. It's so sad to know that he had actually known his parents and felt the pains of loss because of the plague. =( I can't help but comment on how beautiful your descriptions were when introducing the new characters. It's just enough to gain an understanding of who everyone is without having to dump too much information on the reader so they become confused. What they're doing is pretty admirable, trying to help out the orphans so that they may better their lives. And then the ending, bringing up the "pirate prince". Oooh, I'm so excited now! Especially since Yoorae has actually seen Chen and the medallion - it just makes things so much more interesting.

"Oft at new moon he comes ashore. And prowls the darkened streets." "-but others that he's searching. As he hides within the throng. He vanishes like vapour. His presence like a dream - or possibly a nightmare - back to the Chen Madreen." I'm sorry, but do you hear that? It's nothing, just the sound of me screaming at my Queen's amazing poetry skills. <33 You could write two words and I'd still do my best to analyze the sh*t out of it and make a comment AT LEAST two paragraphs long. I could gush endlessly about how much I missed you but I'm going to refrain and continue to read the story or else I'll be here all night. XD <333 Missed you, girl. Hope you're doing alright (and that you've been managing without my amazing, lovely, lengthy a*s comments to brighten your day ;D).
exokexomkai
#9
Chapter 4: I can feel my gut bubbling. Ready for this story.
softsology
#10
Chapter 4: theses poems at the ends of the chapters are so beautiful!!
woaahh naming magic is so cool (and kinda scary!)