CHAPTER 1 :) too much excitement.

MY STEP-BROTHER MYUNGSOO HATES ME!

No one's POV

 

Kim SOO HAE (you) is easy go lucky girl.

She loves to cook, study and hangout with her friends. She's really friendly even with boys. so other's think of her is a flirt. but she dont mind it. coz' she knows that its not true.

She live in their huge house with their maid. 

When she's 4 yrs old her mother died because of tumor. Her father was working abroad and owner of a company.

they keep on communicating via Cellphone or Video chat.

Even Her father was far from her. she treated her father like a brother too, thats why they love each other. 

She knew that her father has a new fiance in abroad. 

she already saw her future mom via video chat. She's a beautiful Korean too. 

but her father said that her fiance has a son. which is older than her.

 

Soohae was shocked at first but she want to have a brother too.

 

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SOOHAE'S POV  :)  Early morning!!

I was cleaning My room. I don't want Kangsa to clean my dirty room (KANGSA : MAID)

As i was sweeping the floor under my bed, iwas really shocked.

"AAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!" I screamed. my eyes was really teary.

Then the cockroach started to climb up the ceiling. I continue to screamed until Kangsa came.

"Soohae!! What happened!??" Kangsa unnie asked.

I pointed out the cockroach.

She get her slipper and BOOM.

And the cockroach died.

"Komawoo kangsa unnie!!" I thanked while i whiped my tears off.

"Don't cry. cockroach wont do anything to you." Kangsa said.

"Your my savior." I chuckled. 

"I think its a better idea if you let me to clean your room right.." She laughed.

"Unnie, Is breakfast ready??" I asked. So  she wont asked me agian.

"Neh. just go downstairs" She said.

She was about to walk out but..

"kangsa unnie can you take away this F*ucking cockroach out of my room" i laughed.

"Neh!!" She said and i thanked.

 

 

 

"Unnie, what did you do with this cereal?? its tasty..." I said.

"Nothing.." she smirked.. and i laughed.

 

I continuously eating.. and my phone began to ring.

"woh.. it's appa!!" I said.  kangsa unnie looked at me.

"Appa!! neomu neomu BOGOSHIPO!!" I said.

"Neh i miss you too soo hae!!" He answered back sweetly.

"What's up dad!?" I asked.

"Uhmmm by the way soo hae im going back to korea." He said.

"Oh?? really. when is it dad??" I asked

" It's a surprise soohae!" He said. i giggled.

"Wooo.. i alwys love you surprise!!" I said.

"And ill come with your future mom and your 'soon' brother."

"Oh??  then how's your work? " I asked.

"Don't worry about that. " He answered.

"okay. as long as you're okay dad. so come soon as possible," I said excitedly.

I hang up and eat happily. "Soohae" kansa called. i know she wants an updatre.

"Dad, will be home soon" I said happily.

"Oh CHINCHA?? when??" She asked again.

"I don't know. Dad didn't say. he wants me to surprise, and i think you're much excited than me." I laughed.

" I just want to see you future mom and brother" She quickly answered.

"Oh it's sunday today, you dont have anything to do?" She added..

"Ahm unnie. im going to shop with my best friends." I answered.

" oh.. then take care. " She said.

"Neh.. ahmm you want any?" I asked.

"Ahmm nothing" She smiled.

"Oh don't be shy unnie." I teased.

"Just comeback early. before 6 pm" She said.

"Neh!!" I answered back..

 

Kangsa unnie is our maid. she's been working in our house about 4 years. I knew her well and she knew me well too. I also treated her like a mother and my older sister too. She always giving me an advice, reminding the things that i might forget. helped me that icant do by my self.

 

 

 

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Hyemi and hara (FICTIONAL)

Hyemi andf hara is my best friend. We always accompanied each other in everything we do. This time were going to the shopping mall.

"Look at tjis one.. its pretty cute right??" i showed the jeans.

"Hmmm" Hyemi said

"KiND oF" hara said.

"Eh?? I already red you mind.. then what should i buy??  You know my style.."  i said.

"I think you must be revelead sometimes..." Hara said.

"What??? " i asked. but none of them seems to bother to answer my question..

 suddenly hyemi asked me.. "By the way you brought your credit card right??" 

"neh.." i siited down and they took those shorts loose blouse and shoes, some accessories.

"Give me you card.." Hara said. i dont hesitate to give them coz' i trust them.

"Come on.. just follow us." Hyemi said.

So i followed them. then we are on tne CR.

"Change now" Hyemi commanded.

I take the paper bags and go in the cubicle i started to change.

I notice that the skirt is really short. maybe thhis is what the say 'reveal'. they dont know that i also wear this when i was home. I felt comfortable. then the loose blouse was also quite good. i also change shoe.

I came out the cubicle.

"Woah... look at you. i think you must get rid off your jeans. " Hara chuckled.

"No.. it's my style" I answered.

 

"Let's go" I said.

"Where?" Hyemi asked.

"Eat, play and have some fun" I said.

"eh??"  they both reacted.

"Please?? take it as a reward. MY TREAT. " I stated.

"I think it's a good idea." Hara said.

As we walk around the mall. I noticed that some people stare at as.

"Ahmm why are they looking at us..?" I asked.

"Coz' were beautiful" Hara answered.

We laughed.

We ate in a restaurant after that we go straightly in a karaoke room. We sung, We drink and We had some fun.

Im not that drunk so i can manage my self.

(To make the story short ^_^)

hyemi went home already. I think she has some appointment. Piano again..

Hara and i was walking around the mall.

Suddenly my phone rung.

"Kangsa unnie  wae?" I asked.

"It's 6:30 pm. i told you to go home early." She said.

"Neh im on my way.. don't be so silly unnie" I chuckled.

"hahah~ take care soohae." 

"Hara, Ill go first. Sorry if i cant take you ride tonight. kangsa unnie is in a hurry.."  I said. I kissed her in her cheeck.

"But. you're. drunk. can you drive??" hara asked. "Im okay still i can stand." I chuckled.

"Annyeong" She waved.

I run until i took my car.  (this is the car look like  http://www.green-blog.org/media/images/uploads/2009/04/tesla-model-s-electric-car-photo-1.jpg)

 

I make a 'beep' sound so kangsa unnie knew that i was home.

I quickly opened the door.

"Kangsa unnie." I called. But i stopped and froze what i saw.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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hanayasef #1
Chapter 8: Please update sooooon
anny774
#2
Oh my!! I like the foreword.
Update soon~~
Moonmika
#3
I wanna this story to complete first then i'll start teading...
Coz i dont like lifthanging for next chapter..
So update soon ~ :)
VmyungL #4
Update soon please :D