You should create more scenarios. Maybe he's pissed that day and went drinking. Maybe he's doing it secretly and you found out about it. There's a lot of reasons one can go get a drink and it'll be cool to see all of them ya know?

Gaho is an awesome dog. Nuff said.

Cute oneshot! You should make a lot of scenarios with GD then. :] I think you can pull it off! It'd be much better if you made Jiyong really drunk and made him go crazy. He did say in an interview that he gets too energetic when drunk. XD Anyway, good job!

lol the part where gaho went between "me" and ji reminds me when i'm with my bf and his dong does the same thing as gaho did in your fic..XD cute!

Sounds interesting. Update soon!