a second look

A Second Look
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

"when we first met, i had no idea you would be so important to me." × "love at first sight is possible, but it pays to take a second look."

///

There really is no unique way to talk about the first day of school other than the dramatic staring out of one’s bus window while they listened to the saddest piano tune flowing through their earbuds, bidding goodbye to the sunshine of summer. Bae Jinyoung’s first day of high school was no exception.

Wake up at 5:30AM, wash up, change into uniform, eat breakfast, step out of the house by 6AM, board the bus at 6:10AM – Jinyoung’s morning was everything but extraordinary. No tripping into puddles so that his uniform was soaked, no forgetting his lunch at school, no oversleeping. With a sigh, Jinyoung laid his forehead against the bus window, wondering if the next four years of his high school life would be as uneventful. Even the girl who was frantically slapping the side of the bus, yelling directly at his window seemed to be having a more exciting morning than he was.

Wait.

Straightening up in his seat, he realized that the girl outside was trying to get his attention. His window was closed so he wasn’t exactly sure what she was saying, but with the way she was hurriedly hitting the bus he figured she was trying to get on. Without a second thought, he reached up and pulled the overhead cord signaling the driver to stop. The driver did. Upon hearing the creaking of the bus doors, Jinyoung settled back down into his seat and resumed his dramatic staring. There was plenty of space on the early morning bus since there were only two people there (not counting the river): him and another student diligently reading a Level 1 Korean textbook, so it was quite the surprise when the new rider approached him.

“Hi, is this seat taken?” she asked, gesturing to the seat beside him where his backpack sat. He could barely hear her say over the music he was listening to.

Thinking he didn’t hear what she said, she repeated her question, this time a little louder. Even Level 1 Korean looked up from his book. Jinyoung blinked a few times, glanced around at all the empty seats, then back at her. Without a word, he sighed and moved his backpack to the floor, kicking it under his seat so it wouldn’t take up space. She smiled brightly at him and squealed out an excited “thanks” as she slid into the seat next to him. Again, Jinyoung averted his eyes to the buildings outside.

But she wasn’t done. “Hi, I’m Hwang Sooji. Thanks for stopping the bus for me, by the way. I forgot to pack my bag last night and forgot where I put one of my textbooks so by the time I got out of my house the bus was already pulling out of the stop. Great way to start the first day of high school, am I right? Oh wait, you’re wearing the same uniform jacket… are you by any chance going to Lila too? What’s your name?”

Jinyoung hadn’t even realized she was talking to him until she tapped on h

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Champions27
#1
I really miss this storyy
gemcat
#2
Aaaaah, I hope to see you soon with an update hehe.
eugeoni #3
Chapter 23: i am crying this is so cute!!!!! i love it. thank you so much for the update! also for the reply to my comment! looking forward for the next chapter. good luck with school! ❤️
baejin15 #4
Chapter 23: YEEEEEESSSS ! Now I know... You like to make people cry don’t you ? <3 I’m so happy ! Unfortunately a comment isn’t enough to show how happy I am ! I L-O-V-E this fic. Jinyoung and Sooji my god TT <33 Can’t wait for the next chapter ! And welcome back <3
pookiemonx3 #5
Chapter 23: I’m living for Sooji and Baejin pretending to be a couple for a discount when a drunk is usually less than $2... broke high school students amirite...
Champions27
#6
Chapter 23: Omg talk about timing. I was thinking about how i missed your story and here you are! Aww sooji and jinyoung is pretending to be a couple just for a small discount, isn't that a sign? Lol
gemcat
#7
Chapter 23: aaaaaaaaaand you're back with an update ! i was honestly so shocked when receiving the notification and i ain't disappointed at all !!
i hope you still got to enjoy those past few months even if it must've been hectic, now i wish you'll spend a great summer time, i'm with you ;)

now back to the story; seeing your new update, i re-read the last chapter and damn, i teared up at the end of it 'cause i've been pushing myself a bit too much lately to "make my parents proud" i guess lmao, that was nice to read it again, you definitely know how to convey emotions through words.
and you know what, i've been smiling while reading the whooooole new chapter, i mean, this is so sweet and i love it. it's been months since i started shipping jinyoung and sooji together and now they're finally both looking for each other, i cANT HANDLE IT. call me whatever you want but the ending line was so smooth, i'm glad they decided to act like they were together,,, you know, they could've been like "well no, i ain't and will never be with this person"...

i'm sooo looking forward to the next chapter, i hope i'll see you soon, narcissistic nim.
enjoy your day, evening or whatever.
eugeoni #8
hi there! this is honestly my favorite and i'm still waiting for your update. i hope youu're doing well there!
gemcat
#9
Still hoping for an update... I hope everything's alright for you and that you're doing well !
nsama48
#10
I miss you narcissistic-nim please come back soon I hope you're doing fine T-T