Chapter 2: WAWAAAAAAAA!! i'm in love with this part i scream my lungs out when reading this. ya know, my heart went crazy when junhoe furiously kissing hanbin :'))) oh God how i want part in this chapter but- it's so fluffy and cute and i just squealing really a lot. i finally read this chapter and i really really really regretting myself for not reading this chapter days ago :'( I LOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!! it's very cute huhuh my thirst for junbin is getting higher than i expect to be. i love you wawa!
Chapter 1: This is wayyyy too cuteeeee. I really really deeply in love with Junbin here. You have no idea how much I love them being cute couple like that. Uggggh I love it!
This is your first story? It's good although you have some typo like "back" it's supposed to be "bag" right? Also, "at the end" it should be "in the end", "they both" to "both of them", also "still keep quiet" it should be "keep quiet" or "still quiet". But afterall, no serious mistake you've made on your first story. It's cute and very fluffy.
I love the part when you mentioned Bobby's part time job. Lmao SpongeBob indeed, working at Burger's place. Hahaha. The part when Hanbin asks for robot ride also got me squealing like a mom seeing his cute baby. It's very cute I might die because of fluffiness ughhh.
To be honest, I've been reading this story up to five times- or more lol. I really love cute babo Hanbin and boyfriend June. They are indeed the cutest ship on earth. Don't hold me lol. Keep writing Junbin juseyooo. It's cute. I love them. Thanks for making this cute story author! ♡
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