I Don't Wanna Be In Love

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What are you gotta do, when you have nothing to lose?

Foreword

Oh dear, I'm actually publishing this.

I have always been a frustrated writer, and I have always loved onkey. In a period of being unmotivated, I decided to listed to a random song, and got a bit of inspiration. So here I am. 

This is my first ever fanfic, and it's ONKEY! onkey stans please forgive me for this crap. 

Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy this. So sorry, as this is unbeta-ed and I wrote this on a whim. 

 

Comments & votes are loved, harsh criticisms are welcome! 

P.S. I'm trying to get my hand on writing after spending many years reading a lot of fanfics. I just decided, why not? Hahaha. 

Help me improve my writing, please? Leave me messages~

 

Love you all <3

 

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Jinkeyk #1
Chapter 1: This is actually good. Please make it a series. >\\\\<
nedy90 #2
Chapter 1: I want more pls.. This really need a sequel..
MissMinew #3
Chapter 1: I'm .. so confused. o_o Like I just need to savor this for a moment, hold on...

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So .. I guess they had a one night stand? I'm just so confused with how they .. kind of ... remember each other's names because they seem so drunk? Anyway, uhm.. Regardless of the ... cheating?
Damn, both Jinki and Kibum cheats while their partners do so as well - what a big mess that is.

I actually really liked the heartache in the beginning, though. The aching was so real. Taemin who never has time because all he wants is Jongin (srsly tho, why don't he break up? what a little ) and Jjong whom I'm suspecting is having an affair with his secretary (altho that is entirely my idea lmao) and therefore forgets Kibum. I mean, I know the text is "I love you, it won't happen" blah blah jjong, you smooth little liar.
But I just ... yes, the heartache was really real, you know? That was just so perfect. </3

Beautiful story, get back into writing again! :3
luvstars #4
Wow I loved this!
CcamKkey #5
Chapter 1: Omg i liked this, I wanted more T_T
AlexRoze #6
Chapter 1: That was so bittersweet, i loved it <3 but it did leave me wanting more
I would love a follow-up chapter, you know, to see whether they finally got the courage to end it or something ^^
Ennuiness #7
I think you should have more of these 'on a whim' stories.
The build up to the pair meeting and the morning after scene was so satisfying,
My only gripe is that you left me wanting more..s o much more.
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