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Promises for Pride
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Kim Seokjin died on 14th April in 937, a year after Myungeun's death. After Hubaekje's annexation, the three kingdoms were finally united and he had been a king for more than a year and a half when he got shot during an unnecessary war between the new kingdom and Chang'an, the capital of Tang. He died on the spot as an arrow was shot through his heart. How ironic was his last thought before he fell to the ground and closed his eyes for one last time.

He didn't want to become a Sin; he was chosen to be one. He couldn't do anything though; he would suffer even more if he protested against the demons’ will. Nonetheless, since he was now the Pride himself, of course he wouldn't mess it up and face failure because that would make him feel unworthy of his title.

After all, Pride was said to be the most foremost and serious of the Seven Deadly Sins. Pride was what changed angels into devils. It was the only Sin that had a virtuous side. Everyone knew that a well-balanced self-esteem was more of a gift than a curse but when people took it too far or they had the potential to take it too far, that's when his job started. Although the start was a bit like walking on a thorny road for him, he eventually managed to enjoy his life as a Sin and truth to be told, it couldn't have been better.

He saw as people turned into narcissist s who picked fights with everyone, merciless bosses who took their employees' diligence for granted, pedantic parents who set high expectations for their kids because they couldn't be satisfied with less than perfect and youngsters with dangerously corrupt selfishness who bullied their classmates because they thought that they had every right to bully them.

Humans were so easily manipulated. Seokjin didn't really have a hard time messing with their thoughts and vision. If whispering into their ears and living with them like a second voice weren’t sufficient enough, he would use mirrors as his ultimate weapon. He could make everyone believe that they were perfect, they were beautiful or handsome, they were loved and he could also make them see unrealistic (but undoubtedly seducing) alternatives.

Let's say that there was a girl with braces at the age of 13, feeling totally worthless. She convinced herself that she was ugly and fat and no one would love her thanks to the naughty comments that she got by her classmates. Yet, when Seokjin showed up, he made sure that she felt the opposite. She was special because she had braces and this way she would be even more beautiful. Therefore she's better than all her bullies. She can bully them now that she knows that she's better than them.

Note that Seokjin used tools to manipulate them but it was the girl that let him take over her thoughts and behaviour. He showed how she could change her life and instead of using his words only for self-comfort, she got carried away and totally turned the tables. If the human wasn't strong enough to say no to him, it was a piece of cake to play with their feelings and ruin their lives.

It would be an understatement to say that he was glad to play his role; he lived to be Pride. Just like his name suggests, he was more than happy to take everyone with him on an evil ride and show what happens at the end of the road; when you start to believe in yourself. Of course, with Seokjin's assistance, people believed in themselves too much but humans couldn't stop, they were just as obsessed with Pride as with food, money, appearance or achievements. It wasn't difficult to use them as his toy

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KimHaeRa
#1
Chapter 16: I bawled my eyeballs out during the ending gah but still it's a beautiful story! Good job!
MinYewon
#2
Chapter 16: Darling,
It was a beautiful roller-coaster, I did enjoyed it really much. You are super nice and super talented so you really deserved the lovely comments under this short story. Jin was an amazing Sin. My heart aches due to his death but it was beautiful and left my out of breath. Poor Humility. And that bastard lower demon! His dirty secret... aish. But on the other hand, I happy. Thanks to him Jin didn't become Lucifer, didn't lose his feelings etc. Ah, I cannot find more words. Sorry for this lame comment. I love you so much ♡
Have a nice day xx
MinYewon
#3
Chapter 15: Darling,
Finally, we had the chance to see them in action (against each other, how excited!). It was fun. I enjoyed the whole chapter just like the previous ones. JIin and his princess make a good couple and the ending! I cannot imagine Humility's death. Jin won't kill her once again, I'm so sure right now. He is just like he used to be. He needs love and she loves him. Lovely yet tragical!
Have a nice day xx
Ps. I cannot believe that the next chapter will be the last, too. :/
MinYewon
#4
Chapter 14: Darling,
Wow, Lucifer himself. Actually, I imagined him as a funny guy as well so I was totally satisfied when you described him. The dialogues in this chapter were my favourites and this whole situation is so frustrating and intense. He had to make her sin :( Frankly, I have a bed feeling about is. What if Humility will make him a not utterly sinful soul instead? Will he die in the arms of his love? Damn.
Have a nice day xx
MinYewon
#5
Chapter 13: Darling,
Well, I think your story is a perfect medicine for my hangover because this day I was so tired I became tipsy over a fruit flavoured cider. It was like strawberry.
Hmm, Jin's sudden decision took me by surprise. I didn't dare to think that he would like to kill Humility in one way or another. I mean come on! Please don't be so cruel and love her (haha.) I hope he won't find that other way (maybe a relic could kill her actually like that hairpin that would be able to kill Greed just because it's a meaningful object from his past). I really don't know what to think.
I'm so scared right now because I accidentally saw a few comments about the last chapter and I already know that your ending will be epic. Please don't kill them both :'(
Have a nice day xx
MinYewon
#6
Chapter 12: Darling,
Wow, wow, wow. Even though I knew lots of thingd about your story, you managed to surprise me. So that's why Lust's hunter looked for Pride. It's all make sense now. Wonderful.
Jin's and Humility's reactions were amazing. I did enjoyed them. They were passionate and intense. Like an italian drama, really. And this ending! Just like a little boy when he couldn't find the right words. (Sorry for my English, I'm a bit drunk right now but I felt that I have to continue this story in the way back home in the train).
Have a nice day xx
MinYewon
#7
Chapter 11: Darling,
Omg, the last part of the chapter was so cute that I'm already in love with the present. I hope Jin's reaction will be flawless or at least huge. Oh, and I'm so curious about why my little virtue waited so long with this meeting. I wish I shouldn't start to dress up right now. What a pity!
Have a nice day ♡
MinYewon
#8
Chapter 10: Darling,
I'm kinda sad because of Jin's point of view when it comes to his previous life but I think it's normal. Otherwise, he doesn't act like a real demon. Speaking of which, that certain sentence hurt my pride. Poor little demons who fell in love in their stories. I hope Jin will taste this sweet feeling sooner or later and he will actually change his mind. They are not pathetic :')
Since I know the plot twist I cannot wait to read the next chapter. You are amazing ^^
Have a nice day xx
MinYewon
#9
Chapter 9: Darling,
First of all, thank you so much. I'm not so sure of that how much information you have but the writing part was my most successful part of all (so thank you so much, I believe that I couldn't make it without the Seoulmate page or this collab. These things helped me a lot.
However, this chapter. Well, it was like a summary but I liked it oh so much. I'm so proud of Jin. (can I say something like that?!) He is an excellent Sin and oh... I just realized that Tae is older than him. What a shame they never had the chance to meet. They would be a great duo. ^^ I cannot wait to see what's coming. I know you already uploaded the whole story but I made an oath not long ago and it's already past midnight so I go to sleep.
Have a nice day xx
MinYewon
#10
Chapter 8: Darling,
I'm so sorry for being late once again. I want you to know that I never abandoned your story just because Jin became a whole new person. It was his destiny. The curse of being one of the most wicked Sins. His story was cute than cruel. You did broke my heart with Myungeun's death. Really? Was it necessary? Poor souls. At least, Jin realized he did loved her. I hope they will have a new chance in the future (present) and they will live with it. ^^
Have a nice day xx