Chapter 1: Dawon seems like such a perfect character for this story to me, it's like all his reactions and facial expressions perfectly suit him, it was so great to imagine. I know I'm late authornim, but a sequel would be great!

Damn girl I didn't know you vould write such a scary story. I mean I know you nail all genres but that part with Chani was truly creepy and the ending was very much haunting. It reminded me of all those Russian books about Sin and Punishment and the symbolism revolving around it, so it was a really nice change for one to read a story like this instead of cliché Halloween ones. You go girl!

Chapter 1: Brilliant imagery!
I could visualise everything

Chapter 1: Omg this story... this is a real insight into how much of an impact we have on others with our words and actions. What might not seem like a big deal to one person, may be ruining the health and life of another.

This was an incredibly emotional and thought provoking story. Congratulations on writing something so amazing, biasmate !