chapter 16

BLACKSTONE
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''Will you be okay?''Sunggyu asked Woohyun while the younger was preparing himself.

''Yeah,don't worry about me.I am a trained soldier.Honestly speaking,I might have a lot more field experiences than you.''Woohyun casually answered.

''I am not talking about that.I am talking about you meeting Riel again after...''Sunggyu explained.

''I will be fine.''Woohyun cut Sunggyu off before he walked away.

 

''The bodyguards are leaving.''Sunggyu informed the others from watching the monitor inside the van with Sungjong.

''This is Alpha 2.We saw them.Alpha 1 are cleared to enter.''Myungsoo said,sitting on one of the coach in the hotel's lobby while Sungyeol was sipping a cup of coffee,leaning against the wall near the elevator.

''Alpha 1 entering right away.''Woohyun said,moving in with Hoya.

''Alpha 3 is already on standby backdoor.''Dongwoo said.

''Roger,remember proceed with caution.''Sunggyu said to them.

 

''We are closing on target.Breach in 30 seconds.''Hoya updated the rest.

Woohyun gave a signal to Hoya,preparing him for the breach.Both of them reach out for their guns and put on the silencer on the gun carefully and then Woohyun started counting to 3 before they break into the apartment.

''Korean Military.Riel you are under arrest for associating with Black Iris.''Woohyun announced.

Riel was caught off-guard.She was surprised of the breach and at the same time seeing Woohyun.However,there are no times for emotions.Riel quickly reached for her gun on the coffee table before crouching behind the sofa,taking cover from any possible attack.

Woohyun and Hoya splitted before rounding the sofa.However,after they got behind the sofa,no one was there.Suddenly,they were caught off-guard when Riel headlocked Hoya and placed a gun beside his head.

''Put the gun down.''Riel ordered Woohyun.

''Long time no see,Captain.I honestly don't expect you to be here.I thought the Commander would tell you about me much later.''Riel added.

''Why are you doing this,Riel?''Woohyun asked,tightening his grip on his gun after Riel dragged Hoya wi

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I did some editing on the foreword.I want to declare that this is woogyu fic.
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closedbook7 #1
Chapter 27: To be honest authornim, your concept was good but its execution was not at all up to the mark. I want to give my sincere opinion on this work of yours, which had the potential to be a worth reading story. I feel this story lacked a lot of crucial scenes or you can say elements to show the developing emotions of Wooggyu as well as it needs a smooth transition from one incident to another. A lot of things were happening haphazardly in a short period of time and thus everything felt too rushed, as if I watched a whole movie in 3x speed.. Most importantly, I feel that there was little to almost no chemistry between Woohyun and Sunggyu. I hope that you take my words in a positive way and try to improve your work. I actually anticipated from a long time to read this story after subscribing it, but saved this story for reading it leisurely, you know like taking my time to enjoy each chapter. I think my expectation was too high which indeed resulted in a huge disappointment and I apologize for that. Please don't be dishearten by my comment. I just want to help you by pointing out the mistakes. I hope to read your better works in the future. Till then stay strong and keep writing ! fighting!!
hamstree_baodeer #2
Chapter 27: When i saw the description, i'm so interested with your story. Read it in one go. But, forgive me before for this long sentences.

Your work lack of many things. There're plot hole, the times didn't flow so i can't feel what you're gonna say. When a supposed chapter hold a tragedy in one or two part, you divided it to many chapters. It's annoying to press next button everytime i'm going to swim the story. Beside plot hole, the progress of character are lack too. Like, Sunggyu's feeling to Woohyun. There aren't any sentence that show his, then on last chapter Riel know his feelings and Woohyun started opened up? They're not even converse beside the mission-related.

I'm not going to say your work are bad, since the idea itself are great. I know what you want to write, how some scene supposed to mean, but the way you describe it aren't good enough. Even your punctuation mark weren't used like it supposed to--i love spaces.

I hope you want to made some changes. Like adding the romance more bluntly, add another scene to connect the situation. You can combine those super short chapter to a long one and made it worth to read. I know, as a writer you already do your best, and i'm just some rude readers. Heck, even i can't write something in english with good grammars, since i'm not native. God knows how many errors this one comment had. But, isn't that what your reader for? To critics and show where you lack? I'm not going to say the story are amazing, i barely enjoy it. I know it's so rude of me.

I'm sorry if my words are harsh. I'm not intended to offend you. I'm just disappointed that the story didn't match my expectation. With such a good idea and description, i'm hoping to meet a really great story. But after i'm read it, i can't help this long rant.

Once again, i'm sorry for my words. I'm not offending you, really. Your idea is great, and i love it. I hope you won't get mad.
tinydream #3
Chapter 5: Am confused like.. Seriously confused. But i'll keep to reading it~
Foreverins #4
Chapter 27: It is the last chapter..thanks for writing this amazing story.hope you will write a sequel for this..
About the woogyu journey.
Simran20 #5
Chapter 27: It's already end.good job author nim. Hope you will continue with more fics.
peychee457 #6
Chapter 27: ahh that was nice! how did Sunggyu fall for him though? haha
reader_28 #7
Chapter 27: aww.. it's already end???
RaniahMing #8
Chapter 27: So "woogyu" is the ending! Thanks i enjoy this fic.
Inspiritwer_11 #9
Chapter 27: Thanks author-nim....it's a great story......
Foreverins #10
Chapter 26: This is getting more and more interesting..can't wait to see what will happen next.
I hope Hyun will be okay.
Will be waiting for the next update
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