by _saranghaekyuti;milkywave request shop

Title: (5/5)

It caught my attention due to the word "Audacious." I learnt a new word xD

Appearance: (5/5)

Beyond my imagination of the work! Hi-five to the designer of the poster.

Description/Foreword: (10/15)

It could be a bit better.

Plot/Originality: (9/10)

Seems really realistic and nice inspirations .

Characters: (5/5)

It is very well-done and descriptive.

Flow: (10/10)

Perfect in my eyes. 

Grammar and Spelling: (19/20)

I prefer you not to write "..." at the beginning or the end of the sentence.

Overall Enjoyment: (20/20)

Amazing (:

Total: (83/90) 92%

Comments: It's amazing. I love how you incorporated the flashbacks in between. Keep up the good work (: