you found me

Description

Reality, some times it can be scary, no?

Re-written, turned into a one shot.

desipher this yourself. it's up to you to see it as you wish. 

if you want to know how i saw it as i wrote it, just ask, i'll explain my view.

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Picture above is from here

 

Total word count: 2,227w

 

Foreword

I shut my eyes; there was nothing I wanted to see, nothing I could see that would make the pain go away. I was lost, disoriented, scared. The white walls of the room seemed too bright. The façade of clean and warm were blatantly shown to me. This was not a happy place. Not a place you wanted to be. 

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gwiboonivy
#1
Chapter 4: So so beautiful
Confusing but in the right way and totally made and possible to be interpreted.
I took a special liking for the whole wall thing, that somehow hit me in a totally different way. You did an amazing job♡
aniangel07
#2
I just added this to my jongkey rec list.^^
Kasumichan
#3
Wow, your writing skills amaze me sometimes.

You said this was in rdd era so 'she' was key's grandmother? And he's all depressed she passed away. At the end did kibum kill himself, or did jong pull him back?
Jinlicious
#4
I like it but i'm a little confused ><
The 'he' is clearly Jjong, cause off the puppy eyes but who is the 'she' and wath happened to her? poor Kibum <3
keyshineeluver #5
:') sad and touching :) did key kill himself??? and who's the other guy on the roof with him??? <3
chippawabrike
#6
:O did Key sue-a-macide?<br />
Really nicely written - interesting prose! ^^<br />
<3
aniangel07
#7
hm...I really love this, but I`m a bit confuesed. I guess I have to think about it a bit. lol so "he" seems really to be jjong I guess (because of the puppy eyes lol). and "she" is maybe... I don`t know. lol is jjong an angel or something? but on the other hand there are the other shinee members too. so when jjong is an angel, how did he become one? @.@<br />
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but I guess its not really important? don`t mind me, I`m thinking too much. lol<br />
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great story.^^
aniangel07
#8
I really like it so far. sounds like some amazing angst. I wonder who "she" is. I think "he" is jjong?
just-milk #9
ö-ö i wonder why key's like that... i'm loking forward to read more ^^
noljjane
#10
i loooove the way you write!!