Author Note + Explanations

Sea of Flames
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A/N, and a bit of an explantion and what I had in mind when writing?

 

Word count: 11,683

 

This is probably the most abstract story I’ve written, mostly because it’s a one shot, but… I’m okay with it? It could be better, but I can’t quite figure out where to fix it. I’ll still be polishing it.  

 

I’m not too sure what I wanted the Sea of Flames to represent — perhaps greed. Despite the gem being awful and cursed and doing more harm to Baekhyun than benefit, he keeps it because he’s greedy and he wants the immortality. And because he’s already sacrificed everything for it, he sees no reason to get rid of it. Despite knowing inwardly that he still is sacrificing things for it day by day — the ability to talk to others, make friends, have loved ones — he tries to convince himself otherwise and shuts himself out from other people. And despite knowing and acknowledging the fact that he really does hate the stone and what it brings, he still keeps it.

 

The curse on the Sea of Flames which prevents Baekhyun from basically loving anyone kind of shows the price of immortality. Because being immortal separates him from being exactly human, and because he’s chosen immortality over humanity, he lives his life secluded from others. But despite that, he still is a human with emotions and needs and wants and being alone for thousands of years have definitely taken it’s toll on him because he’s desperately lonely.

 

While the curse on the Sea of Flames grants him immortality, it restricts Baekhyun from living like a normal person. And because he cannot interact with others, it doesn’t allow him to really live.

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maybe_someone3
#1
Chapter 1: How come I didn't know about this masterpiece before.

I mean I have never read something like this fic❤️
Exosehunfanindia
#2
Chapter 2: It was such a beautiful story with a beautiful message.❤️❤️
Thank you for the wonderful story authornim ❤️
Baekkyoongja
#3
Chapter 1: They’re meant to be.. glad baek decided the right thing 🥺❤️
Blue_Parody
#4
Chapter 2: Hi! well I have more time now than before and since I've recently re-read Darkest hour and On angel's wings after recommending them to my friends, I decided to start reading storied in my reading list (which mostly means my chrome tabs) and of course your stories are on top of the list!!! and this story was the fisrt and I'm not disappointed as usual!
Immortality has never felt this useless in my mind! in the middle of the story I really wanted to know what triggered Baek to use this gem, how it worked in the first place and the whole background of why he would decide to live as an immortal... what did he have in mind back then? I'm also curious about Haewon's neckless, at some point I wished maybe it had some sort of power that cancelled sea of flames' curse, or if he told her about it it would undo the effects... I did so much talking again! it's a wonderful story thank you for writing it!!! also wish Haewon was safe and healthy at the end :D
bbhmystar
#5
Chapter 2: this is a wonderful story with values!!! thanks for writing them!
baekhyunislove123 #6
Chapter 2: This is such a beautiful story. I keep coming back to your work even though I've read them a countless number of times, they have such unique themes and plots its very refreshing.
Rozila
#7
Chapter 2: I found one similarity in your writing it’s always character second guessing and trying to find reasons but at last things happen by themselves and the characters don’t care. It’s like examples: he didn’t know if it was this or that? was it this or it was just... but it’s fun obvious but not really???
Cutiepies1228 #8
Chapter 2: It's truly a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Keep up the good work.
ariadne22
#9
I love your banner. I'll have to give this story a read when I have time. :)