[1] RED RIOT

Punks In Pink: Death Match | A Graphic Contest
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prompt number: #03 hallyu wave
total kiss marks: 8
sent by: red riot
receiver: audience & themob
sent by: rose

for overall look it's good. the characters chosen & textures are nice. somehow I don't like the png using of these 2 characters. it didn't blend well. make the poster looks a bit off. typography is great. just work on more with your blending, and you're more than good! <3 
sent by: lisa

The characters seem choppy and they don't quite match each other appearance wise. the entire poster has this oily look to it but i'm not really sure if it helps the overall design or hurt it. the typography is not my favorite and the one you used for the quote is quite an eyesore. the cityscape in the background is something that i do like, the use of colors work in favor for you. 
sent by: jisoo

hi, the girl you used was pretty <3 anyway, this graphic was good. the colors and stocks you used were eye-catching (i assumed that you used a psd or perhaps made your own?), and the smoke effect was a great touch as it provided aesthetics and contributed to the overall appeal (oh and great choice of font! the effects were great too /thumbs up/). regardless of this, however, maybe you should work on blending next time. using lasso (i think you used polygonal and then mask for your characters? i'll stand corrected if my assumptions were wrong though) clearly differentiated the characters' photos from the background. even when you may have intended it to be action themed, it should still blend. the placing of sehun and the girl's photo was a bit odd too, especially because it left a blank spot on the middle (in between their heads). lol yeah anyway, great job! overall, the beauty of the graphic stood out more than it's flaws (well no one is perfect. we all do something wrong every time so yep).
sent by: jennie

I like the colors. the placement. the stocks. the images used. together, it works well and looks good. although, the cutting or blending, if you may, of the characters' images looks odd especially their hair (the girl's hair). also, i do not know which is the title and which is the quote. the quote is the one with the quotation marks, i assume. lol. but it's more noticeable than "like a missle" and it takes the focus from the title. remember, the characters and the title, the focus must be on them. meaning, when you first glance at a poster, the first thing one must notice is those two. :DD overall, great job~ and good luck!
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Solbee
#1
Chapter 43: I'm little late and I missed this. Been spitting through the older posts and I looked at the finale entries. Personally ... for me... Stark would've won all the way, but then again I don't know the background and what the assignment was, but technically looking this poster was the strongest in colors, composition and overall feeling :) .. The others did great too. I wish I had the guts to participate graphic contests, so I have a huge respect for all involved designers. Keep it up. You guys make AFF visually acceptable <3
infinfic
#2
Chapter 35: I really like BlackSugar's designs eventhough she/he didn't enter the final initiation~ ♡
infinfic
#3
Chapter 28: I've voted~!! Good luck for all entrants in wildcard round~!!
mizusora
#4
Chapter 27: This is honestly so cool and I am enjoying the watch of this contest. <3
kkoschei
#5
I've register!
https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1181659
My weapon of choice is the shuriken ^^
Katakatica
#6
Chapter 4: I just registered:
https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1181422
choice of weapon is the shuriken
xxxtrack
#7