[1] LONDON'S BURNING

Punks In Pink: Death Match | A Graphic Contest
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PROMPT NUMBER: #07 BLACKPINK IN YOUR AREA
TOTAL KISS MARKS: 6
sent by: LONDON'S BURNING
receiver: audience & themob
sent by: rose

everything is good. the positions of the characters look a bit awkward. the grunge disturb the characters face making the characters seems blend to the poster. for me the characters should stands out but still it should nicely blend with the background too, know what i mean? x)
sent by: lisa

This might be a bit too grunge for me. the pictures used, though fitting, aren't blended well nor positioned in an appealing manner. i do like your use of the font but i think you could have done more to make it 'pop'. the credits aren't visible and look more like random blotches. A decent design but it kinda fell off the mark for me.
sent by: jisoo

i like how you managed to get the essence of the prompt and incorporate it in your graphic, and how you used grain. other aspects including the photo choices would make your graphic better. take note of the focal point and the placing of all the images. tone the grunge down for a bit too. great job tho!
sent by: jennie

blackpink, check! grunge, check! however, that's just that. except for the ocean stock and the quote, there's nothing going on. consider trying different placement for the characters' images (try and try!) and playing with different textures, stocks, and coloring(just put random things you think weill go well, if not, then undo then try again!) to make it more alive. nice job! ^^ p.s. i love your alias' crest. ugh. so pretty.
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Solbee
#1
Chapter 43: I'm little late and I missed this. Been spitting through the older posts and I looked at the finale entries. Personally ... for me... Stark would've won all the way, but then again I don't know the background and what the assignment was, but technically looking this poster was the strongest in colors, composition and overall feeling :) .. The others did great too. I wish I had the guts to participate graphic contests, so I have a huge respect for all involved designers. Keep it up. You guys make AFF visually acceptable <3
infinfic
#2
Chapter 35: I really like BlackSugar's designs eventhough she/he didn't enter the final initiation~ ♡
infinfic
#3
Chapter 28: I've voted~!! Good luck for all entrants in wildcard round~!!
mizusora
#4
Chapter 27: This is honestly so cool and I am enjoying the watch of this contest. <3
kkoschei
#5
I've register!
https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1181659
My weapon of choice is the shuriken ^^
Katakatica
#6
Chapter 4: I just registered:
https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1181422
choice of weapon is the shuriken
xxxtrack
#7