A Letter to Oh Sehun

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Title: A Letter to Oh Sehun

Authors: NoonaYoung and MollieHenson

Status: Completed

Tags: Angst, Original Character, Heartbreaking Love

Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1195525/a-letter-to-oh-sehun-angst-originalcharacter-ohsehun-heartbreakinglove


Personal Opinion


I, for one, appreciate letters - they request sincerity and a glint of insanity. You would expect that the fore mentioned letter would be a love one - who could have guessed differently? "A Letter to Oh Sehun" - the title itself leaves a lingering trail of enigma. Why "A Letter"? Have there been many others? Was this the first one, was it the sole one? Why this particular one, why this particular person?

The story intrigues me. It was a letter - true to its sense. It was heartbreaking and raw, as anything written to an old love. Maybe it's about love, too, but mostly about suffering and sacrifice. The author of the letter says it all without any fear, writes it all black on white, pours it all - from the moment he met her until the moment he didn't wish to see her again, from the moment he salvaged her until the moment he abandoned her. The experiences are traumatic - for her, for anyone, at that point, but somehow, it's a silent letter of a survivor. The main character is strong, she doesn't write it as an apology, she doesn't write it for an explanation, but mostly as an ending of a chapter in her life. She writes to the man she had loved, but also to the man she had fallen out of love. She end with wishes of happiness, not with bitter regret. She has found her path despite it all. She wishes for him to find the same.

There are some beautifully crafted scenes, I don't know if they were intended to be so - the reference to the three rooms of doom, as I call them, depicting the society's vices. The three days the woman spends in each room were almost biblical in a sense, gathering strength to move to the other one. The prayers she makes to a higher divinity are also heartbreaking, wishing to be able to endure such misery and atrocities, just for the sake of a dear one.

Oh Sehun remains a mysterious character - we don't know whether he loved her or not, whether he regrets the choices he had made, whether he's an angel or a demon and sometimes, as a reader, you doubt yourself from the lack of information.

I enjoyed the story, it was something else, or maybe I read too much into some things - that's for the author to decide. The only thing I have to say is that the wording and grammar could be improved, but that could be arranged.

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snow7ys
#1
Hey chinghu..I would like you to review my story
Title: Mr/Miss. Jung
Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1203341/mr-miss-jung-comedy-jungyonghwa-parkshinhye-romance-yongshin

Story status: on going

I'll appericate your honest reviews....It would help me to write better stories in future...
Take your time...
Blessed 2017...
SheirynFiya
#2
Hello! Im the author of this humble fic. Do give it a try if you love thriller angst fics :)

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1169236/stranger-danger-action-drama-romance-thriller-exo-baekhyun-jongin
MissMinew
#4
Chapter 1: Name the Story: LoveGame
Link the Story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1188994/lovegame-key-onew-romance-shinee--onkey-girlee
Give the Main Reason on why you enjoyed it: It's .. uh, it's my story and the reason I like it is very very simple, it's the first and romance story I've ever written and felt was somewhat satisfying. I'm normally an angst-writer and this story was just .. the beginning to new genres for me uwu I really really like it, even if the language is kinda flat. I'm still exploring. (Also, I never thought I would manage to write a story that long without a ton of angst. xD)
RavenUchiha
#5
Chapter 1: Title: Last Song 2 - Song Fic
Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1017665/last-song-2-song-fic-junhyung

This story is based on a Japanese song of the same name "The Last Song" by Japanese singer Gackt. I actually made an original song story without names. This was to promote this story in a story event, that's why it has a 2 next to the name. The Japanese lyrics are at the end of the story, while the translated words are within the story.
worldofmyown
#6
Chapter 1: Hi. First off I wanted to say this is really nice of you. It's a cute idea! And you've kinda inspired me I can do something nice on AFF on Christmas myself, didnt give too much thought before.
Next I wanna submit something :3 thanks for the chance.
1. The Quick, The Dead and the Divine
2. I'm gonna put the link in a reply to my comment, my phone is not letting me paste right... lol weird
3. This is actually my own story so imma tell you why I enjoyed writing it. Actually it's a strange one, I was inspired during my cultural analysis class in university. And also inspired by the aesthetics of Humanoid by TVXQ. I wanted to explore the notion of the fourth dimension, and it was waaay more challenging than I first anticipated, because conceptualising 4d when your brain works in 3d is really hard xD
I hope you enjoy it ^^
Joorin-sshi
#7
Chapter 5: Oh... wow.
Honestly, I don't even know what to say in response to your review. I'm truly amazed, I wasn't expecting such a positive response, to be honest. Thank you so much! You have no idea how much it means to me and I'm extremely happy that you enjoyed Forbidden so much!
This actually fuels my will to keep thriving to make this story worth it. Really, thank you from the bottom of my heart! <3
kitana
#8
Title: The Sins of Kim Hanbin
Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1085610/the-sins-of-kim-hanbin-bigbang-gdragon-romance-winner-hanbin-bobby-ikon

This is not written by me but I honestly think this author needs more recognition! This is my favourite Hanbin fanfics ^^