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인생이란 ┊ LIFE AFTER COLLEGE — apply open!
[ aftercollege ]
first step to adulthood

total app: 1 (4 oct)
enterpreneur: 0 | education: 0 | passion: 0 | despair: 0 | freedom: 1
kim mira
responsibility / kim myungsoo / chosen

SHORT PROFILE

INTELLIGENCE    •••••••••
SOCIAL NEEDS    ••••
UNDERSTANDING   •••••••
COURAGE         •••••
APPEAL      •••

So this is my character and how the review will looks like. The reviews will more likely be overall review about your character rather than detailed one per section, and I will ask you a few more questions if needed! The app status will be one of these; reviewing, accepted, and pending. I will not reject any app, but I will point out the mistakes and/or which points you need to fix to get accepted. Tbh I'm really happy with the fact that you apply to my story, so I don't think it's necessary to be harsh on reviews? Thank you in advance, and have fun applying! I will wait for your app~ <3

lee yin
freedom / zhang yang (lay) / PENDING

SHORT PROFILE

INTELLIGENCE    ••
SOCIAL NEEDS    ••••••••••
UNDERSTANDING   •
COURAGE         •••••
APPEAL      ••••••••••

Hello, first applicant! Thank you so much for applying in really short amount of time. And omg you're right, i feel like slapping Lee Yin lol she's really the definition of spoiled rich brat in drama XD I think using Naeun is a better choice than Suzy tbh, well at least Naeun has that natural resting b face lol. Oh I first think how she could be chinese when her parents' are both Korean but then I re-read the background and realize his dad is actually Chinese lol his name sounds really like Korean! But it's fine tho. Move on, imagining Yang being such a sweet guy is just like his faceclaim (I love Yixingggg omg). Anyway, you stated that Yin was crying one day when Yang saw her, but what actually made her cry? If you can be more detailed about her breakdown and why she wants to do better it will be great! Oh, and is Zhang Yang chinese too? I'm sure you didn't mention about it but correct me if i'm wrong. Your app will be set as pending for the mean time but it'll do fine once you have clarified few things I mentioned! Once again, thank you for taking your time applying, Hana! <3

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AFTERCLG: IMPORTANT UPDATE ON CHEATSHEET-FAQ PAGE! i forgot where to put plotline name OTL and thank you for the first applicant! c': review out soon i promise!

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maiyaa #1
seems Quite interesting *_*