A Spark of Light

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The realm of Light was ruled by a benevolent power, who gave freely to the people of its world. In a fit of jealousy over the Light's solitary rule, four beings of Dark killed the Light, tearing it to pieces and scattering it about the world so that it could never return. Then they turned humans against one another, sewing mistrust and hatred into the hearts of men, rewarding those who would turn in worshippers of the Light. In the midst of this, one is chosen, to bring Light back to the hearts of those who need it.

Foreword

Written for gaksitalGaksital's Bridal Mask Prompt Contest, using prompt #31

 And it won first prize!

 

Entered into the Come to the Dark Side contest, using the prompts Autumn, White, and #18,
"There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle or the mirror that reflects it." It did not place.

 

Entered into Round Ten of

It did not place.

 

Entered into the writing contest...

 using the prompt 

 

AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL POSTER (with 6 shards!!!!) Made by YuYuan ♡♡♡

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DGNA_Forever #1
Chapter 9: This story was just as good as I remembered and I loved the morals in each of the chapters. It was an interesting story and the way you portrayed the Light in different views and tests for Hoya were fantastic. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to reread it.
DGNA_Forever #2
It's been four years since I last read this story, and now i get to read it again and maybe have a different perspective on it. Who knows? I look forward to it, regardless.
DGNA_Forever #3
Chapter 9: This story was beautiful, and I love the way you described each shard differently and how Hoya learned from each of them. Now I see that throughout the entire trial, he was being tested and trained to be what the world needed most: the Light. The ending was perfect, too, and you wrapped this up nicely. Thank you for giving us a great story with such a powerful message to all♡.
DGNA_Forever #4
Chapter 6: Goodness! This monster gave me the creeps, but I did have to laugh at the beginning of the fight, because it reminded me of a Boss fight in a video game. I loved that, honestly!
The pain and compassion Hoya felt for the dying boy was great, but also sad. He will be undoubtedly rewarded for this act someday, and already WAS, in a way, with regaining compassion and the feeling to help people again. I think I know who this Light shard was, too. I think maybe Sungjong? He was who I imagined through it.
DGNA_Forever #5
Chapter 5: After the kind way Hoya has treated people, it's nice to see it being recognized and rewarded, even if it's just in a warm meal and reassurance that there is still hope. Now he'll just have to BELIEVE in it. This was a great way to show the Light. I loved it♡.
DGNA_Forever #6
Chapter 3: The way Hoya is trying to stay true to the Light is so wonderful and it's great to read him as one of the only good people left. I feel terrible for him, though. The betrayal he's gone through...I hope he can stay on the right path. Poor guy=(.
DGNA_Forever #7
Chapter 1: Wow, this opened with a bang, didn't it? It's sad how quickly people will compromise and throw their values out. I hope all hope isn't lost already! Great beginning!
DGNA_Forever #8
This sparks (no pun intended) so many questions, so I'm glad I can read it now!
contaminated #9
Chapter 9: :o
So now, in the end, Hoya has become the Light? Or the Light has become Hoya? Or the Light has absorbed Hoya or something like that??? >.< this was a rollercoaster! D: I really enjoyed it though. (I'm just going to guess the injured boy was Sungjong.)
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