Five

A Spark of Light
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When next he woke, he knew immediately that he was not in the same place. The fire was gone, the rock overhang was gone, even the smooth stone beneath him was gone. Instead, he found himself in a desert, sand stretching before him for as far as the eye could see, the sunlight making ripples appear on the ground that weren't really there.

He rubbed his eyes with the back of his hand, and the urge to move ran through him. He obeyed sooner this time, taking a step forward: immediately something thumped into his leg and he looked down to find that he had a sword strapped to his waist. A real sword, like the ones that the Rulers carried, the likes of which Hoya had never touched before. He reached down to touch the handle, wrapped with leather worn smooth by use, then pulled his hand away. He would be more likely to hurt himself than do any good with it, and so he left it alone and turned to check the bag hanging from his back.

It wasn't of a make he recognized: it was long and slender with a drawstring at one end. The strong came out and looped over his right shoulder, then down under his left arm to attack to the bottom of the bag. Something long, hard, and slender was within the confines of the small bag, but even as he began to draw the string up over his head so he could investigate the bag, a shrill scream cut through the air and he froze.

He ought to go see if the screamer needed help, and yet the old man's reaction gave him pause. Would this be yet another thankless effort? Another scream sounded, this one seeming closer, with a cry for help at the end, and Hoya's mind was made up. Let them curse him afterward all they would, he couldn't just stand by and let someone be harmed.

Breaking into an awkward run, he struggled up the side of a large sand dune, the unsteady footing giving him more trouble than he had thought he would have. By the time he reached the top he was winded and he had scraped the palm of his left hand on the course sand. Those grievances left his mind almost immediately as he looked down at the situation unfolding below him.

Something, a creature too unearthly for his mind to make sense of, towered over a human figure who had fallen to the sands. Even from the distance between them Hoya could tell that the boy was injured, blood coloring the sands around him red, but he still tried to dodge the creature's advances. Without a second thought, Hoya lunged into action, the tumbling sand only expediting his trip down the side of the dune as his right hand drew the sword from its scabbard. He might not have experience with it, but he sure felt better having it in his hands as he reached the beast.

It stood twice his height and probably five times his width, with long arms of which the knuckles nearly brushed the ground, three thick fingers and a thumb protruding from it. It was fac

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 9: This story was just as good as I remembered and I loved the morals in each of the chapters. It was an interesting story and the way you portrayed the Light in different views and tests for Hoya were fantastic. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to reread it.
DGNA_Forever
#2
It's been four years since I last read this story, and now i get to read it again and maybe have a different perspective on it. Who knows? I look forward to it, regardless.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 9: This story was beautiful, and I love the way you described each shard differently and how Hoya learned from each of them. Now I see that throughout the entire trial, he was being tested and trained to be what the world needed most: the Light. The ending was perfect, too, and you wrapped this up nicely. Thank you for giving us a great story with such a powerful message to all♡.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 6: Goodness! This monster gave me the creeps, but I did have to laugh at the beginning of the fight, because it reminded me of a Boss fight in a video game. I loved that, honestly!
The pain and compassion Hoya felt for the dying boy was great, but also sad. He will be undoubtedly rewarded for this act someday, and already WAS, in a way, with regaining compassion and the feeling to help people again. I think I know who this Light shard was, too. I think maybe Sungjong? He was who I imagined through it.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 5: After the kind way Hoya has treated people, it's nice to see it being recognized and rewarded, even if it's just in a warm meal and reassurance that there is still hope. Now he'll just have to BELIEVE in it. This was a great way to show the Light. I loved it♡.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 3: The way Hoya is trying to stay true to the Light is so wonderful and it's great to read him as one of the only good people left. I feel terrible for him, though. The betrayal he's gone through...I hope he can stay on the right path. Poor guy=(.
DGNA_Forever
#7
Chapter 1: Wow, this opened with a bang, didn't it? It's sad how quickly people will compromise and throw their values out. I hope all hope isn't lost already! Great beginning!
DGNA_Forever
#8
This sparks (no pun intended) so many questions, so I'm glad I can read it now!
contaminated
#9
Chapter 9: :o
So now, in the end, Hoya has become the Light? Or the Light has become Hoya? Or the Light has absorbed Hoya or something like that??? >.< this was a rollercoaster! D: I really enjoyed it though. (I'm just going to guess the injured boy was Sungjong.)