The pick-up line guy

Description

 

  the new barista keep hitting on jin with the cheesiest, the most cringe worthy, disgustingly saccharine sweet pick up lines jin had ever heard in his twenty four years of existence and Jin wants to roll away and DIE .

Foreword

HAD TOO MUCH COFFEE AND MY SYSTEM IS ON OVERDRIVE SO I WRITE LIKE THIS . CRACKKKKK PURE CRACKKKKK WITH SOME DEEP HOLY AESTHATIC BULL ONLY SOMEONE LIKE RAPMON WOULD SAY INCLUDED . 

 

 

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Peony3011 #1
Chapter 1: beautiful .. both he story and the writing
XOXIUMINXO #2
Chapter 1: Oh taehyung, im gonna bite you cause you’re so cheesy to my jin!!!
Beautiful story and im gonna read it over and over again until i get bored (but i know i wont *wink)
Hana-12 #3
Chapter 1: So good and so cheesy
And don't mind other people opinions about u they can't know us like we know ourselves
xxxfrseyo #4
Chapter 1: OMG SO FLUFFY SO CHEESY BUT WHATEVER I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!! ugh i love you, really, you wrote such an amazing story with such an amazing intention. The amazing message, i got it! How i also wish everyone reading this fic would also get the positive message you are trying to give. You are such one amazing person, authornim. I do really love you <3 uh i hope you will write more taejin fics in the future >< that'd be another great fics HEHE. Anyway fighting authornim❤
bluebird17 #5
Chapter 1: I am drowning in FLUFF!!!
This was so adorable had me laughing throughout the the whole story; this really made my day thank you author nim \=^♢^=/
Andhara #6
Chapter 1: OMG! I'm gonna die with Jinnie because of cheesiness! XD
i remember Taejin moment when Jin celebrated his graduation day with six member some weeks ago.
Tae said to other member while hugged Jin, "Stop say that Jin-hyung old. He's the most handsome guy ever."
and next minutes Tae stared at Jin intently, wiped Jin's lips and then it. XD
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I understand your nice messages, authornim. But i've never found someone like that, who love me as myself..
Pnenda #7
Chapter 1: This is my FAVORITE ONE-SHOT EVER!
So cuteeeeeee
So much TaeJin~
So much love~
I liked it. In every aspects.

Saranghae <3
Chubii #8
Chapter 1: This was so cute and positive :'-)!!! I loved the real story that inspired you to write that character as well. We're indeed not worthy of the beautiful angels that are dogs. It makes me happy to know those babies were there to cheer you up!
LeTrollchenRoll #9
Chapter 1: I seriously loved this *-*
iamkookie #10
Chapter 1: OMFG IM LOVING THIS STORY.
CHANTS FOR A SEQUEL BC asdNHFUGRJEHFKJQEBHJKHK
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