Chapter 1: Kyaaa, I am so happy that they had a happy ending. <3
I liked what name you gave her, it was really wonderful that her name meant lock. :D
I like this part a lot - "Even though he was an irritating brat and didn't seemed to deserve the energy I spent on talking to him, I got to admit, he brings out the excitement in everyone."
I also liked her remarks about him and about the girls who wait every morning for him to get his signature. It made me laugh when she revealed her ideas about collecting his signatures. :)
Although she didn´t like him too much, it was nice that she spent some energy/time on him. XD
And I adore the ending, Key was manly and I really liked his approach. Haha, yeah, girls usually don´t like such teasing, Key! XD But I am glad that he kissed her and that was the right thing to do! :D
lately i have been interested in one-shots and .... aww i like this...<br />
i LOLed cuz my bro's friend came in the room when i was reading and was annoying me the i shouted 'brat' at her, then looked back and read the word 'brat' rigth after, dunno why but made me laugh...<br />
niwayyy....<br />
keep writing<br />
luv this work...<br />
aish~~ i hope the reason why boys are freking annoying is that they like you and wants you to notice them but NOOO!<br />
LMAO!<br />
niwayy...<br />
well done^^<br />
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-yoomi <5
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