Task 5

Project Trainees

 

After a short break, the fifth task has finally been given. The contestants need to write a oneshot based on the movie, The Mortal Instrument: City of Bones

 


 

_written: knight in the shadows

Judge's comment: Oh God yes, the feels...the feels. It feels so strangely good imagining Lay as a shadowhunter. Even if you never read the books you made quite a good job here. Lovely, now I shall imagine Lay the whole day long. Dammit....Anyway, it was a short one-shot, but just the right amount and also you didn't give up too many details, which on the one hand is good and on the other makes me wish you wrote a bit more. But all in all a high five from me Canada

 

lefemui: Surprise

Judge's comment: Yeeey TMI. The writing in general was pretty decent, again I was missing some details about the appearance and movements, but I am so used to reading those stupid novels for school that I forget how nice simple things like your one-shot are. You did a very nice job, just maybe it's not the best idea to put non asian characters on Asianfanfiction. I mean I don't think it's forbidden just we don't see that often here. Oh and Jace is a cocky and cheeky bastard which I missed in this story. He is amazing and perfect but you showed him from a sweeter side. Of course that is nothing bad and you might have not read the books, it's not bad thing don't worry honey

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MeikoM01 #1
Chapter 1: Okay, I got the answer (TOT)(TOT)
Hope I'll be here on the next season
MeikoM01 #2
I'm interested(T_T) is it still open?
orkedsulaiman #3
Chapter 2: Hi..can I join too?
lefemui
11 streak #4
Chapter 1: Okay so I wanna join. Is it too late?
ILoveMyWIFI #5
what if i was intrested in writing and want to learn i mean i have imagination and i mkae lots of one shots and tel my friends but thats basically it can i become a contestant as well? and if yes how? thank you so much for ur time and this idea :)
Classy_Wasabi #6
this actually sounds so cool!!!! how would someone be able to become a contestant? or will that be said in a later chapter?