Task 5
Project Trainees
After a short break, the fifth task has finally been given. The contestants need to write a oneshot based on the movie, The Mortal Instrument: City of Bones
_written: knight in the shadows
Judge's comment: Oh God yes, the feels...the feels. It feels so strangely good imagining Lay as a shadowhunter. Even if you never read the books you made quite a good job here. Lovely, now I shall imagine Lay the whole day long. Dammit....Anyway, it was a short one-shot, but just the right amount and also you didn't give up too many details, which on the one hand is good and on the other makes me wish you wrote a bit more. But all in all a high five from me Canada
lefemui: Surprise
Judge's comment: Yeeey TMI. The writing in general was pretty decent, again I was missing some details about the appearance and movements, but I am so used to reading those stupid novels for school that I forget how nice simple things like your one-shot are. You did a very nice job, just maybe it's not the best idea to put non asian characters on Asianfanfiction. I mean I don't think it's forbidden just we don't see that often here. Oh and Jace is a cocky and cheeky bastard which I missed in this story. He is amazing and perfect but you showed him from a sweeter side. Of course that is nothing bad and you might have not read the books, it's not bad thing don't worry honey
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