Task 3
Project Trainees
Third task: The contestants need to write a sci-fi oneshot
lefemui: Revival
Judge's comment: Ahhh I cried reading the end. I liked Hongbin and his crazy side which you detailed out very well. Of course it has a bit of a suspense theme to it due to the dark moments but I think it has big potentials of a whole fanfiction about it - yeah my crazy mind thinks of Hongbin's 2nd return. But despite that, you did very well and I really hope that you'll write much more in the future
_written: antinony
Judge's comment: Nooooooooo I demand another chapter, no I demand a whole fanfiction with that plot! It was amazing!! It reminds me of a oneshot I wrote yeaaaaars ago. Anyway, you've done amazingly well I kept reading it over and over again because it was so well written and I couldn't help but notice the little details such as the numbers of the subjects, which is so cute and remind me of the Wolf era. It is a sad ending of course, due to that plot. But I'd like to see some happiness in your stories in the future too.
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