Fourth task: The contestants are required to write a oneshot starring Jimin (BTS) and an OC

lefemui: Wrong Number

Judge's comment: Reading your oneshots makes me realize how much of a lazy I am. I should really start writing again. Back to the main topic. You did extremčel well. I chose Jimin for you guys so I'd see what you'd do with such a popular idol. And you managed it pretty well. I liked how you put the spaces between the texts whenever a time gap happened, it makes it a lot easier to read. A little tip from me would be that whenever you're not writing a dialog, but describing something do not use couldn't and instead use could not. It makes it sound much more professional and it will bring you up to an even higher level. Not that you're low now, you're amazing as you are

_written: when and hows

Judge's comment: Yeeey college theme....my nightmare right now...but just because I am a freshman and a mess. Anyway, your idea was pretty nice and well written. I liked how you put gaps between the time skips, however you usually write all the parts in one text without any gaps between the dialogs. It makes it look like a big letter, and as you might notice in all books the paragraphs are parted by a space, so try to put more of them into it. But beside that you did very nicely.