Letters to Jessica by Ashleth89
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Letters to Jessica by Ashleth89
Genre: Angst + Friendship
Characters: SNSD Members
Status: Completed
Notes From Reviewer
I'm extremely sorry for the inconvience and wait regarding this review!
Title (7/10)
The title is not particularry eye-catching but it suits the story extremely well.
Description & Foreword (5/10)
Description is not quite interesting. It's plain and simplistic but in a bland way. I'd recommend trying to improve this area by trying to add more flowery vocabulary or perhaps slightly more details. You could try a more angst and emotional approach in this area.
Plot (17/20)
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