Two

Midnight
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Two

You wake up feeling a biting sting in your neck and a terrible pounding in your head. As you groggily awaken your senses, a voice takes you out of your drowsy reverie as it whispers out,

“Hyung, she’s awake what do we do? Should we call Tae-ssi?”

You hear another higher pitched voice reply and your eye’s widen as you realize both of the voices are definitely masculine.

Shooting up from the bed in alarm, you stare warily as you get a good look at the two in front of you, clutching the throbbing mark on your neck.

You look at the first boy closer to your bed, who shifts his gaze towards you. He seems young, perhaps in his late teens. The boy’s ears stick out prominently from his dark brown locks and you continue to look to his face. Staring at his eyes, you are shocked by their bright colour, electric blue eyes piercing back into your own.

Then you realize with a start you’ve been staring at each other for a while, and you shift your gaze away from the young boy in unease to focus on the other male in the room.

Bad mistake.

A shudder of terror crawls through you body as crimson orbs stare back intensely. Flashbacks begin to reel through your mind of haunting red eyes and you almost scream, if not for the hand that clasps around your mouth.

“Please don’t scream Miss. We’re not going to hurt you.”

You whimper, but as you struggle in his grip, you realize he isn’t going to release his hand until you agree, so you nod slowly. It makes sense anyway. So far they haven’t harmed you yet. Still, you stare at them warily, tensed and ready to bolt. There’s no way you can trust them yet. Especially with features like that.

Cautiously, you ask,

“Why am I here?”

You see the blue-eyed one about to speak, but the opening of a door interrupts his voice as you look towards the entrance to see another boy.

Another pair of red eyes, this time however, it is blonde hair. The boy has a long, straight nose and pretty almond shaped eyes. Then, he speaks,

“Hello Darling. How was your sleep?”

And you can’t help the scream that escapes your mouth because memories of last night come back, and you realize you recognize that voice. That deep, alluring voice that stole you away at the of midnight. And in front of you stands it’s very owner. You remember the name now. Kim Taehyung.

Before you even register it, a breath is behind your ear once more and a hand is cupping your mouth, muffling your voice.

“Dear, didn’t Jimin tell you not to scream?”

Tears begin to prickle at your eyes and you shake your head, willing for them to stay in your eyes. You hope he can’t hear your quiet whimpers of fear. You’re guessing Jimin is the other boy in the room with red eyes. Fearfully, you wonder how long this man had been eavesdropping for.

Then, a quiet voice speaks,

“Hyung, stop. Can’t you smell her fear?”

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Akrinias
#1
Chapter 2: Damn this is giving me creepy vibes. Hope you update soon :)
july-pupetta #2
Chapter 3: hiii i just found your story and i think it's very interesting :)
i'm looking forward to your next update :D
-DaeButt #3
Chapter 3: aRRGGg hANGING U LEFT ME HANGINGG JUST WHEN I'M HOOKED INTO THIS STORYY GOSHHH WHYY lol sorry but no sorry tho BUT please author-nim ... . .. are u still in hiatus? i mean i understand as always life being an and all.. butbut i really like your story tho.. really reallyyyyyyy hooked i wanted to know what happen nextþtttt but if you still busy and stuff i could understand IMEANT I WILL WAITTT YAAE
blackwonderer #4
Chapter 1: Nice! I love creepy-handsome man n i love fantasy.
AliceKim365 #5
Chapter 1: Alright,this is nice. I'm anticipating the next chapter!
DanceMonster98
#6
Chapter 1: This is amazing!
Can´t wait the next chapter!!!!!! ^^
ZeAnonymousWriter
#7
Chapter 1: Okay, be ready for a huge comment XD

First things first, wow. Wow for many things, like the pov of the story. I expected for it to be third person were I would be reading a character in the story along with Taehyung but I was pleasantly surprised when I found out its written in a way that I, myself am the lead. I've really read stories with the reader being the lead because I found them quite awkward and I couldn't for the life of me get attached to the story because of the things the lead would say and do but I have a feeling I'm going to like this one.

Secondly, hun, remember that while writing you can't please everyone, so if someone doesn't like or won't like the story, don't be sad. Even the best of authors experience hate because every person has an opinion and sometimes they express it in a more mean way.

Thirdly, can we talk about the story for a sec? Excuse my language but damn. I'm a little confused about the beginning though, it says I felt moisture under my feet but I was asleep? So I was standing and sleeping? And by the way, maaatiinnngggg is going to be in this, excuse my fangirling heart, I'm a er for mate stories. I'm curious to find out what type of creature Taehyung is that he has blood red eyes, fast on feet, *realization hits me* Could he be a vampire? Or maybe a werewolf? But if he were a werewolf wouldn't she be able to smell him? I mean, its not like werewolfs are the cleanest of creatures so they are bound to have some kind if scent.

Oh my, enough of my ramblings ^^. Stay healthy, Byyeee ^^