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   tally board

the spoiled child.  00
the nice one.  02
the logical.  01
the mysterious.  01
the maknae.  01

the review will be here ^^ The face-claim image will directly lead you to their blog post.


--- know what,I think I've ruined the layout T^T

 
 
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  kang hamyung  

Hello there ^^ Seems like you're in hurry as you didn't put your nickname.But it's perfectly fine cause I"M EXCITED TOO.Thank you so much for applying and congratulations on being the first appliciant.Can you add his plotline above the personality traits part? I forgot to add it and appearence and style part.You can refer to the turn in post .I assume that his plotline is The nice one though?Anyway let's start the review ^^ ::

x — "He's a stubborn piece of crap that smiles stupidly at everything and everyone" hHAHAHAHA I CAN TOTALLY IMAGINE THAT! and another one "You're better off believing that God and Satan are bffs than that" Hamyung can be scary then 0_0
"Just standing up to get the remote gets him into a sweat" Same boy,same.it'S FREAKING HARD TO DO ;;;
-- He will wash vegetables with soap -- i'm pretty sure Jungnam ajussi is willing to teach him .. a proper cooking class / not sure tho if it will change Hamyung's cooking skill/
Their love story is so cute and sort of y.Romantic y guy Hamyung!

I enjoy most of the entire apps but i have some small things to ask-- 
- can I know where is the 4Quadrant usually performing? or is it the cafe where Hyeri works? or anywhere else?
- i didn't really understand their status part.Can you tell me what happen after Hyeri finds another boyfriend?


** don't worry! I found this is so funny and since the things I ask is just small one,you can answer this in the comment section.No need to change anything except for the things that i said above.Take your time sweetie! Thank you again for applying! ily <33

x — Yeayy !! Hamyung is accepted now! Thank you again for applying and have a great day! <33

  idkanamewtf : accepted : seo kangjoon : lee hyeri

 
 
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  park sohye  

Hello Lara !Thank you for applying.I love youu <3
It's okay,you don't have to change colours or anything as it's already beautiful wit Eunseo's gif.KYAA >.< It's hard to see people using Eunseo as face claim.Well,wjsn is still a rookie so yeah.So,let's get review now !! Go Go Go ~!!

x — It's okay till the personality part cause I'm a bit confused when the negatives are more than the positives XD.It's nothing wrong cause I know Sohye is a girl full of femanine traits.You don't need to change though ^^
But for the background,it's stated that she want to study in Seoul,so what's her brothers and family reaction?She 's barely 20 years old so i don't think her family would let her alone study in Seoul.I have a suggestion here! If you make her parents know Lee Jungnam,then i don't think it's a problem.But it's just a suggestion ! Use it is you want ^^
Whooa,Cha Hoon is just like Haneul character in Entertainer! I know itt! IT'S FREAKING KANG MINHYUK!But i have a question here,Hoon work in animal shelter as part time job right and so one day Sohye go to the shop and meet Hoon?
jThat's all I want to ask.Overall it's a good app and I did enjoy Sohye's trivia.
Price tags is her enemy XDD
Thank you again for applying and have a nice day!! <33

x —  Yahoo ~~ Now Sohye is accepted!! Thank you once again for applying and I hope you're having a great day now! <3

  glakshi : accepted : wjsn - eunseo : cha hoon

 
 
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  cha iseul  

Hello there,Vanilla ~~ What a sweet name >.<.First off,thank you so much for applying!The app is so pretty OMG.I'm so excited to review this! Let's start it now ~~

x — Uwaa,Sujeong looks so pretty in that gif.It's pretty hard for me to imagine that Sujeong being quiet when she's enjoyed talking too.But it's okay as she's just a face claim though. -- -- let's move to other section as the basic part is perfectly fine c:
The personality part,I'm a bit confused when you state that "
She admits that she can see ghost that's why she scared of it" I don't see anywhere you state that she can see ghost except for that.Can you please elobrate more if it's true?.I don't want to see Jungnam ajussi faint after hearing this.He's old enough 0_0
Poor this kid,her parents died when she's so young.Hearing that,she may be close with the orphanage owner?Or maybe no?Nah,you can tell me if you want ^^

That's all for now c: You can fix it or just tell me in the comment section.Have a nice day,sweetie!

x — Yayyy!! Iseul is accepted now! ^^ Thank you once again for applying and I hope that you'll have a great day! c:

  mira_vanilla__ : accepted : Lovelyz - sujeong : none

 
 
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  kim najung  

x — Hello there ~ Thanks a lot for applying! I love yaa ~~ And sorry for this late review T^T School life hunting me >.<.So,let's start this review!!! c:

First of all,I notice that you missed the username and nickname part right above comment.Can you please fill it as i don't know what to call you dear 
---- It's just a small one though <3
Her nickname though.'Know it all' . She has a unique nickname tho --- The basic part is fine and nothing's wrong with it c:
Awwoo,she has a sad background,I can totally understand her feeling,being isolated and ignored by the entire family. >.< How sad her life.
But .. but .. but .. our ajussi loves group hugs.Hope that Najung wouldn't hate it ^^'
However,can I know at least her parents' reaction when she ran out from the house?I don't think that parents didn't care at all about their children's life.
I honestly don't mind writing a biual character but,i afraid that you would dissapointed with my writing T^T I may write them as totally bestfriend though but a little sweeter,closer than just a bestfriend.

That's all for now,and I did enjoyed you app ^^
Thank you so much for applying and have a nice day,sweetie! ^^
p/s : OMG,I love your password >.< I miss them T^T

x — Yayy!! Najung is accepted now!! Thank you once again for applying and I hope that you're having a great day now! ^^

  DefineImaginary : accepted : ioi - yeonjung : kim miyoung 

 
 
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  kang woohyun  

x — Hello there Eunbin~ ^^ What a nice name~First of all,thank you so much for applying ^^ The colour is so beautiful . KYAA >.<

I can't wait to tsart this review,so let's go now ~~~

Girl,I love you ;; Woohyun is life ;; With his solo promotion now UGHH ---
'woohyunie' HAHAHAHAH a cute devil boy XDD and aegyofairy? OMGGG
'his eyes look like poo, at least in his opinion' what? LOL
Move to the background part,when you stated that he stayed with his second family i get confused a bit.Can I know whether the second family has some relation with his biological family?
That's the only thing I want to ask.Overall,your app is really good!I love how you potrait Woohyun's character.
Thank you again for applying and have a great day dear~~


x — Yayy!! Woohyun is accepted and thank you so much for applying <33 I hope you're in state of happiness now ^^

  saythenameseventeen_ : accepted : infinite - woohyun : n/a

 
 
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 USERNAME : STATUS : FACE-CLAIM : LOVE INTEREST

 
 
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  character name  

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  username : status : face-claim : love interest

 
 
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Mira_Vanilla__
#1
Chapter 5: I love the first chapter!! It seems like Lee Jungnam-ssi is a loner but don't worry the house will fill with the teenagers soon x)
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^ Fighting author-nim <3
saythenameseventeen_ #2
Chapter 3: Hi :) Thank for a wonderful review ^^ I've fixed my mistake, I bolded in orange in the background section..
Anyway, yeah! Woohyun is life >< I just ken't, his solo is JJANG, DAEBAKK!! I love his voice /melting/ I'm sorry ^^"
One more thing, I heard that Infinite will comeback after Woohyun's... I think I'm gonna die sooner x))
DefineImaginary
#3
Chapter 3: Hi there! I edited my app, and I bolded in black what I fixed so you can find it much easier.
Mira_Vanilla__
#4
Chapter 3: Hi ^^ Thank you for the nice review :) I've fixed my mistake and let you know that she didn't close with the orphanage owner because she didn't want to close with anybody .. Let me know if I need to fix anything again ;) Fighting author-nim <3