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The Survivor Kim Minsu Love Interest
BanaWarrior Bana Chosen
Review page is up! Here is were I will give you the official feedback. x3 As always, your status can be one of the four:
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Pending - There are some things to fix in your app.
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Chosen - Your Character was chosen to be in the story. Yey!
To see the apps, just click on the names. :3
My baby is finally ready! xD I think the basics is pretty much done, if anything, maybe I will add something to his background if I remember everything xD
The Shadow Chae Hyungwon The Ghost (fc:Luna)
mellamodummy dummy Accepted
Attention, long a*s review! Hello Dummy, first of all, thank you for your interest in the story! n.n
The Basics: I think it's cute that he mumbles his name too fast. I really loved that you used Hyungwon! Like, REALLY! He's so huggable! <3 -run- Ok, sorry. This part is pretty much on point.
The Boy Next Door: His traits are interesting because they work a very specific image in my head about him, and it would be interesting to see how he would deal with having to live and work with a bunch of other guys. His personality is really detailed, and I thank you for that. It's cool to see how he is an opposite of Iljung in the day-to-day point of view. And man, he doesn't like to do uncertain things? I'm feeling bad for how much this kid will suffer and worry in the hands of this mission idealized by Mister Uncertainty Himself, Kim Namjoon xD About his powers, I really liked how you described them. I can already imagine how he can grow with it and how he can be uniquely usefull in the mission. As for his trivia, I just loved all the ninja feels he gave me! Yas we have a ninja guys. I searched some of the weapons that I didn't know, and his fighting style must be really brutal! (the suntetsus man!) I liked it! 8D -run- I probably would make him focus more on the blades than the long range weapons, just so you know. And the fact that he makes his own weapons was really unique.
Home is Where Your Heart is: I really liked the "secret ninja training" that was his life, and this alongside the fact that he always had his Seventh Sense active really explains a lot about his personality. His runaway trip to New Seoul is something I would like to write about. I appreciate how his parents personalities' reflects on his own. And if he's chosen, I will keep in mind his impressions about the rest of the guys (Yas! to his interaction with Namjoon. I was waiting to see if you would write it or not xD)
The One and Only: First of all YAS IT'S LUNA! <3 I really like how you worked her powers, really. it's simple but work well, and definitely explains her nickname "Ghost" xD And I see here that she and Joyong are the case of opposites getting attracted to each other. Her background was really sad (I kinda already hate her grandparents) and the "Story Together" was really cute. I felt my heart broke with Joyong's when he saw her name on the list.
Last Words: Don't worry about the gif nor his personality, it was really ok (in fact, I really liked the gif xD).
Thank you for modifying things. You're now accepted. :3
The Gunner Oscar Isaac The Riddle (fc:Eunbin)
UrangUtang Shay Accepted
Long review again! Sorry. Hey Shay! Yey Gideon is here! X3
The Basics: Something that I noticed myself just a long time latter, was that when I put “non-asian” faceclaims, I was unconsciously thinking about The Gunner xD haha So yeah, thank you for that. I really don’t see anything wrong here and oh man, I will have fun with the Spanish and Portuguese 8D Oh yeah.
The Boy Next Door: With Gideon’s age, it would be more fitting “man next door”. Sorry Gi :’) Oh man, he’s so much of an encrusted tsundere that I can’t stop grinning -run- xD Everything is explained and thank you for that. I should be careful to keep in mind all his sides, but that’s a challenge I accept if he’s chosen! Tho it would probably be a bumpy ride with him, it’s clear that the one that would probably take everyone out of the sticky situation is him. xD His powers are lowkey awesome. Quite literally x3 His personality seems everything but subtle, but ‘subtle’ is the word that describes his powers quite well, in my opinion. There is so much ground to work and improve! I will love it! xD With all this trivia I already pictured him and Iljung drinking, he swearing all the time -that will be so funny to put Spanish ones tho! xD-, and really, those jokes. Made me think if he is not a teenager instead of a man on his 30s. lol
Home is Where Your Heart is: SKAHDKJADHJAD HE WORKS/WORKED FOR THE BLACK DRAGON!? My mind is swarming with ideas, no kidding!!! I need to ask some of them to you in private. Or do you give me a green pass to do anything I want? 8D And I think Gideon’s mom and Iljung’s grandpa would get along pretty well xD Ok, I think I’m in love in a family-love way with his mom OTL And Soledad and Nat would DEFINITELLY get along with Grandpa Kim. I need to write it. His team! Oh his team! To me Beau is the most dangerous for sure. Sijin APPRECIATES Gideon’s jokes?! Kid, I’m worried about you. xD “How many fingers am I holding up” to Namjoon? Ok I just understood Gideon’s personality on a whole new level! xD And If I can, I would like to write this feud between him and #101 8D
The One and Only: Hayan is quite a twist of what I had in mind for The Riddle, I admit. But the more I was reading, the more I noticed that well, she was not THAT different. XD I think that the new info helped a little? And I really really like that her revenge is against the Black Dragon. I will have great use for that! 8D About their meeting, I twisted some things -time wise- in my mind so the dates could be coherent, but it’s nothing that I can’t adapt. And I like the possibility of they inspiring each other. I think having the others around could help too.
Last Words: It’s okay. I think I can handle Hayan. I think. Again, the Spanish tho <3 xD I will have fun with it if he got in :’)
The Mutant Kim Jaehyun The Assassin(fc:Sowon)
Ruby2000 SC Pending
Long review, again. Seems that I can't keep things short. Hello SC, thank you for applying! n.n
The Basics: Jaehyun really looks like a cheeky troublemaker, so let’s see how this will turn out! xD All in all, this part is ok, I would just appreciate if you tell me why Jaehyun learned Chinese. And a broader description of his style. Unless you want him to only have the same pieces of clothes over and over again on his wardrobe. That’s ok too. xD
The Boy Next Door: What I like about his personality is that he’s clearly a sunny character! A cheerful and righteous guy in between the bunch of more serious people that we saw until now. X3 Tho, the only thing is that his trait of being always the last one to notice how critical things are is not what I would call “ignorant”, that seems more like he’s slow witted, what totally crashes with the part you said he has a quick thinking. So maybe he knows what’s happening but he wants to remain ignorant of the full situation for some reason? And you must choose if he’s quick witted or not. I also would appreciate if you could list his personalities traits right before the long explanation, like I did on my example app. This will make my life easier later if he’s chosen. n.n About his powers, invisibility is something unexpected, but it’s not a bad thing. X3 Only that partial invisibility sounds more like a part of the invisibility power than a power on itself. So, if you want, you can move the partial invisibility to the invisibility section and create a new sub-power related with the principle of his invisibility. And here I mean, HOW he gets invisible. He can bend the light rays around his body, making it return to others in a way that they can’t see him? Or do his cells can precisely copy any colors and textures of his surroundings (like a chameleon)? Or it’s by any other way? This really helps me to have a better grasp on how his abilities work. :3 Also can you explain why or give examples on his likes and dislikes, please?
Home is where your heart is: The things here is that he’s background is so… short. I will heavily depend on background to write the characters, and you gave me close to nothing ;w; His peaceful life came because he was from the rich district? Why did his family needed to move? How he lived all this time ignorant of what was happening with the Sevens, and why? (the Sevens have been casted aside for years now, decades even) How he found out about his powers, what he did and felt at the time? What he did that he was almost caught? How he was recruited (this one is not mandatory, but you can explain specifically if you want x3)? Did he ever tell his parents about the fact that he was a Seven? If not, what he came up to explain him leaving to who knows where when he left to find the Ones? All of those are just some questions based on what you showed me about his past. There are so much more to explore. If this helps, the background must be the base that explains who he is and why he acts the way he acts. So, I will ask you to complete his background, please. Also, all his relationships are very brief, but if anything, I can ask you things later if he’s chosen, so don’t worry too much about this now (I’m more worried about his background, really). A point that I think is very interesting is that he goes to school. Or went to school. This can be (or not) something central to his character that could make a big contrast with what he will have to face later (something along the lines that the real world is different from what he learned through the books? That’s just some brainstorming…).
The One and Only: First, do you want to have a backup plotline for The One too? If yes, just list it in “back up love interest” too. :3 Again, here you gave me basically nothing in “powers”. What is that stealth mode? What tracking evasion means? How this works? What she can do and what are her limitations with this power? And the same for the berserker transformation. What do you mean with that? How this work? What can she do with it? Besides, if that “berserker mode” is her second power, it probably will be an experience-induced power because it sounds like it doesn’t have the same working principle than the “stealth mode” at all (unless it’s something like she reverses her powers and it causes the “berserker mode”? I don’t know, just speculating and brainstorming again). Please, re-work and explain better her powers. Her personality is also rather short. Why she looks like a sweet and innocent girl? What are her actions that make other people perceive her like that? And how she knows her opponent weaknesses? She’s very observant or what? Can you please explain those things and expand on her personality a little? About her background, there are more information here, but I’m a really curious person, so I will ask some more. X3 Why her parents left her and how they contacted a rich family to adopt her? (were her parents without any money left?) What was that she felt that was missing? How did she discovered her powers? Why her parents were murdered? Did the Black Dragon found out that their children were Sevens? If yes, how they found out? And here you say that it was on this moment that her “berserker mode” woke up. If this is a natural power, you MUST make it related somewhat with her first power. If not, this should be a byproduct of the experiments on her. (also, both of her brother’s powers are not related too. Can you work it out?) And this seems unimportant, but how old was she when he went into hiding and when she was captured? So that I can know how long she stayed under the Black Dragon (btw, I forgot to ask how old is she). So, can you please answer this questions too? Her relationships are short but it’s okay. Their story together seems ok, I just have some questions (OTL I always have questions, sorry). There was any specific reason for them to fight and break up? And just so you know, he could know that she disappeared after some months when her name was put into the “disappeared” list from the government, but he would only know she was one of the Ones after they found them (also, they would be apart for a very long time probably). And, after he left to join Namjoon’s organization, he would basically live there and he wouldn’t have contact with his old life (or because it was some sort of training period for him, or because they would be on their way shortly after he joined the party, since he’s supposed to be the last one. You can tell me if you have some preference, after all, this can be part of his development). So yeah, can you work with this?
Last Words: Holy heaven, I’m sorry for so many questions. But I did it because I can see potential in both, but I need more information to properly understand those characters. ;w; I really liked that Jaehyun is a kid at heart and can I say how awesome it was that you used a Danny Phantom gif with a Soul Eater’s opening as password???? So yeah, for now you're on pending, but just complete the things I asked in the app and it should be alright. If it is not too much trouble, can you put it in another color, so I know what's new, please? Thank you, and sorry for the trouble.
park moonil
The MutantBoo SeungkwanThe Assassin (fc:Sohyun)
lavendermalibu Liv Accepted
I tried to keep it short, but seems that I realy can't :') Hi Liv! Thanks for applying!
The Basics: As always, I don’t see anything wrong here. Just yas someone that went to elite schools! xD And madam, that’s one of the most detailed appearance&style section I’ve seen. I love how everything is calculated to pass a certain image. :’)
The Boy Next Door: Omg Moonil is gold. He’s just pure gold. The way he crafts everything around him so things would always go the better way to him, how he’s used to play the games of power, and how he hides the real him, all of that just for one reason: surviving. But oh man, no matter what he’s a rich kid that had been sheltered his whole life and omg why I’m having so much fun just imagining all the plots that can come with him?! I’m feeling bad for feeling so excited to push his steady ground from under his feet. :’) And his powers. A YAS for gravitokinesis! With his poor control over it, I can already imagine him floating in the air, totally uncontrolled. xD And just from his likes and dislikes I’m already picturing so much fun for me with him interacting with the other guys. xD And he’s gay! I will do my best to work with this! X3 I do really like the contrast of how he presents himself to the people (colorful) versus how he sees the world (totally dark).
Home is where your heart is: First of all, the way he was born, it’s just awesome? Because that would totally make sense and this kind of world?? And how I didn’t think of something like that before??? I’m really happy with the way you used all the “special green zones” thing. Like, yey now I can use that in the story without looking like I’m filler-ing. Lol And it’s very cute to see how mother and son are so close. Makes sense tho, since it’s just both of them. And I’m like ‘dude, you’re ambitious or not?’ Because he wants to climb high, but not too high. Lol I guess he doesn’t like responsibilities’. And who is the giiiirl????? Aahhhh. And his awakening, it was really rude of his powers to show up in front of everyone. :’) Narae has a little bit of the mad scientist vibe, but it’s so cute how obviously she loves her son <3 And asdhakjdhkashdka HE HAS A CRUSH ON NAMJOON?! /dies/ what- what- You can’t just drop the bomb on me and run. :’)
The One and Only: IT’S SOHYUN! <3 A teleporter! And her second powers are really just results from the experimentations! I’m already liking the possibilities of exploring the differences between 101’s burning rage and her cold rage. :’) OMG she’s just so precious. Why they had to take her?? She still holds her morals even after everything, and that’s just super awesome! And her way of seeing just black and white is really a very interesting worldview. Maybe not the wisest, but that’s the fun. /run/ Man, she’s just really unlucky. Not only her awakening was as rude as Moonil’s (and she’s the girl!), but she really hadn’t any form of protection against the Black Dragon. Now I can understand why she depends so much on the others. And this black-&-white girl with this many-shades-of-gray boy. For sure there will be confrontations, but in a way I think they compensate for one another? I really like this idea.
Last Words: Although you have to me to decide some things, many others you gave me great things to work with. So I believe it will be all good. And oh yes, many ideas for plots (and plot-twists too, why not?) with Moonil, and some clashes with Mireo. I’m not so sure what I can do with the Moonil-Namjoon situation (especially because I kinda picture Namjoon as some sort of modern monk lol OTL /run/), but let’s see how things will go. :3 Btw, this gif is exactly like how I pictured Moonil floating xD lol And the song tho! So dope! (and I think I will listen to the whole album, after all, it’s called ‘Wild World’ 8D /run/)
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