Teaser - "Life down here is like hell"

Wild World
 

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"life down here is like hell"

104 was sleeping when a guard uncerimoniously woke her up.

 

"104! Wake up! Dinner Hall, now!" How great, be woken up in the middle of the night for some unknow reason. Well, not like she hadn't been used to it already. Or that it was actually night. She had lost the sense of passing time a long time ago.

 

The guard opened up the cell's door and put her up roughly, pushing her out the door and down the corridor, toward the main halls. While she passed by the other doors, she noticed that all of them were dark and that there were no guards in front of any of them. Strange.

 

But when she arrived closer to the compound of the Dinner Hall, she could see guards and more guards running toward the secured doors, the alarm ringing. Fear gripped her being. What could have happened? The guard didn't gave her too much time to panic, because he quickened his pace and soon enough she was being rudely pushed inside the doors of the Dinner Hall. What she saw there, explained all the ruckus. The blazing inferno looked like Hell itself, and in the middle of it, a ragging demon.

 

"104! Stop 101!" A voice blastered through the speakers system, before it got destroyed by a fire ball.

 

104 looked around her, trying to understand why 101 had gone out of control. She was alright the last time she saw her. Through the moving brightness of the flames, she could see some burnt bodies by 101's feets, and 105 retracted into a ball behind her legs, like she was being protected. A movement on the sides of her vision caught her attention, and she saw 102 holding 103 back, the eyes of the last giving away that she was close to also losing control.

 

104 took a deep breath and used her powers, containing 103 first, so she could give 102 a break, and then 101. The instant 101 was contained the fire troops stormed inside, extinguishing the fire. She then walked to her crazy enclosed friend, looked right into the other's eyes, and when those eyes just looked straight back, before going from the burnt corpses to 105 that was still on the floor, 104 just nodded and then crouched next to the bodies. One of them was still recognizable and she knew very well who he was. 'Stupid moron' she tought. Those were the same guys that had bullied 105 before. Seems that 101 finally lost her patience with them.

 

When she got up, 102 was next to her and went to help the shaken 105. The guards came right after and the Commander just nodded to the door. She started to walk, and with her the two enclosed ones went behind, without much choice. 102 and 105 followed right after and the guards took the formation around them. They walked all the way back to their cells, 105 being the first to be put inside it. 102 gave her hand a comforting squeeze before the younger entered. 103 was the next, and 104 let go of her hold on the other just after the door was closed and secured. 102 then calmly entered her own cell and while her door was being closed she gave a nod of aprove to 104. 101 was the last one. 104 entered the cell with her and saw the guards putting the special shackles on her friend. When they let go and left the cell 101 lifted her head and smiled crazily to the other woman, a morbid pleasure on her eyes.

 

"We will leave this hell soon my friend."

 

104 just shook her head.

 

"Just don't kill yourself in the process."

 

"104! Get out! Back to your cell!" Some guard barked. She waved to her friend, got out and walked to her own cell. After being locked, she laid on her bed and finally let go of the hold on 101. The overwhelming tiredness took over her body and while she was falling back into the arms of sleep, she thought.

 

'They think that today they saw hell. Little they know the real hell my friend will bring out to them.'

 

authors note

Just a little teaser about "the ones" while they are in captivity. I hope this shows a little how I imaginned their interaction. It's more on 104's point of view, but I think she was the best to use in this demonstration. You can see that they are already planning they escape ;3 Also, my character app is finally available and you can check it out here or in the main page in the Updates window.

Also, thanks the "Tron: Legacy" soundtrack for helping me writting this x3

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Ruby2000
#1
Chapter 5: Thank you for the review! ^-^ It's ok. I don't mind you asking questions! I'm just really glad you like Jaehyun and my password! Danny Phantom is a show I watched when I was really young while Soul Eater is one of my favourite animes, so I've got to put them in. Especially with them being so fitting to my password. :D Also, I will make the required amendments soon!
ps. Sorry that I took so long to respond to the review. >.<
UrangUtang
#2
Chapter 5: Ah I totally forgot to reply to your review sorry! I'm really glad you like him! I had the idea for Gid and then I saw you're Brasilian so I added the Portuguese in there too! I thought you'd like that xD He is suuuch a tsundere omg but he's also a person so that's a lovely combination. Oh Gideon. He basically makes dad jokes if dad jokes were highly offensive xD You're always welcome to ask me anything about him if you need! But you're also free to make decisions yourself, whatever you're more comfortable with.

Oh man his fambam is one of my favourite parts of the app too. Beau is defintiely the most dangerous one, she's a loose canon. Sijin just endulges Gideon and lets him make his dumb jokes xD Gideon's really pretty simple, a head who hides any and all doubts and weaknesses under layers of ty humour. Of course he'd make a blind joke! God I've made such a head I'm so sorry.

I'm glad you like Hayan too! She's definitely not what /I/ had in mind when I started working on her but it just happened. And yeah dw about twisting things to suit the story, I tried to keep things vague so you can do whatever you want and you're really free to twist anything to fit. Honestly you can change anything about their first meeting to suit you, I just pulled that out of my really xD
Ruby2000
#3
Chapter 3: Hey there! ^-^ Just wanted to ask if it's possible that the one can be my character's ex girlfriend but they don't know that the other has powers and after that when he finds her, they learnt that the other had powers? Because you mention something about if the character already knows her but has to keep his powers a secret from the one.
YukiBoo
#4
after looking at technology manipulation...it has a lot of sub-powers and applications. I am trying to narrow it down, so he doesn't seem two powerful.
YukiBoo
#5
Chapter 3: Hey, I am applying for the scientist. My power is Technology Manipulation, can my character learn other languages just from a touch with the computer?
kattirompa
#6
I'd love to know more about the ones!

Argh. I'm having so many creative issues!! Maybe the extra info will help?
lifestyle
#7
Chapter 3: i've been so lazy w apps and i've only done guy apps like one time all these years lmnao
but i'm really feeling this story!!
gunna try my best to hand in a form :)
UrangUtang
#8
I will. Finish. Gideon. Goddamnit. I swear.