Thoughts of Home

Promise
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Jaehwan spent the rest of the evening helping Aron to clean up the galley, though he did get the distinct feeling that he was in the other man's way. After helping the scrub the stew pot clean and set out Aron's ingredients for making the next day's bread, the cook told him a weighted thank you: it was obviously a dismissal. Jaehwan felt his spirits sag a bit as he realized that no, it was not a perfect fit in the galley, but he bowed to the cook nevertheless and left to go to his cabin.

He settled on the bed, rubbing his bare feet from where they had formed sores on the sanded deck, his toes red from being unused to walking around barefoot. He made a mental note to ask for some of the soft shoes the crew wore, then lay back into the bed. Once again he was the only one in the officer's chambers, and he fell asleep long before the others came in. He slept fitfully, his dreams once again plaguing him, and he woke once in the middle of the night after a particularly vivid dream of drowning.

Pushing back his privacy curtain, he saw that the magical lights were dimmed, casting an almost eerie glow on the room. It seemed that the crew must be sleeping because there was hardly any noise, and he had the momentary urge to wander the ship in the more private moments of the night. He quelled that urge, knowing it might look suspicious to be out when everyone else was sleeping, and so settled back into his bed to sleep.

It didn't come easily, though, not this time. He lay awake for long hours, thoughts of the people he had left behind coursing through his mind. He knew that the sister's had promised to return him when they could, but there was no assurance that his loved ones were even still alive to return to. Besides, with what he had seen during the day, he had to wonder if the crew of the Lion's Heart would be able to keep their word. They were on a mission, it was obvious, and the more he thought about it, the more he could assume it was a dangerous one. That, or he had read the mayor's adventure books too often, and was looking too much into things. But the presence of the magician, the tension amongst the crew, the secrecy with which Krystal had said they traveled in... it was all too much. 

What was that she said? That their actions could start a war if they weren't careful. That turned over in his mind as he tried to descipher the meaning behind it. They weren't from Arisan, surely... not with the way they had spoken of his King. He couldn't even remember the King's name, now, but he figured that was another clue. The sister's had spoken of him as if familiar with the man, and they weren't even from Arisan.

And then there were the cut off words, the things that crew members began to say but changed before they could complete it. He shook his head, trying to piece together the mystery, and it was a long time before sleep captured him.

He woke the next time to muffled sounds beyond his curtain, and he pulled it back to look out with bleary eyes. The ship's officers were out and about, most in states of half dress and looking like they would rather be sleeping. He caught sight of Dara's mostly bare legs, and flushed hotly as he dropped his curtain back in place. Didn't they have any sense of privacy?!?

He waited until the sounds of the officers faded, some heading up the hatch onto the upper deck and others out the door to the main deck, then took the chance to peek out again. This time the room was clear, and he breathed a sigh of relief before pushing his curtain back.

Then he mentally kicked himself for waiting. He had meant to ask for some of the soft shoes! With a sigh he pulled his borrowed white shirt over his head before he put his socks and boots on, deciding they were the better alternative than running around on the rough sand again. His stomach was grumbling as he finished doing up the laces on the boots, securing them around his ankles, then he stood, pushing his necklace back inside of his shirt to lay against his skin.his fingers lingered for a moment, sending up a prayer to whatever was listening that his family was safe. Then he made his way to the galley.

The room was packed with sailors, all once again sitting at their places along the wall-mounted tables, bowls or porridge in front of them. Daniel nodded at him as he passed, though he raised an eyebrow at the tall boots he wore and gave a smile and shake of the head.

"Good morn, Jae," Aron greeted, dropping the latter half of his name. Jaehwan gave a soft laugh as he bowed in greeting.

"Good morn," he returned, taking a bowl from the box nailed to the top of the bread counter and holding it out for Aron's spoon. As the cook dropped porridge in, Jaehwan ventured, "Would you happen to be able to use any help today?"

Aron's face took on an apologetic look that told what his response would be. "No, I'm sorry. I've already got the bread baking and I only need to cut vegetables." He shrugged as he finished. "Maybe Daniel could use you?"

"Maybe," Jaehwan responded, keeping his smile in place though he knew the older man's answer would be no. He took the bowl and turned to find a place to sit, and nearly ran into Sohee. 

Her red lips twisted into a sardonic smile as she looked up at him. "Going to run the Magician over, are you?"

"I'm so sorry," he said quickly, trying to take a step back to bow his apology to her, but his back hit the brick fire pit. He gave a sharp cry at the heat and leaped forward, once again almost knocking her over, and this time the crew began to laugh.

Sohee's cat eyes crinkled in amusement as she covered with one hand. "An assassin!" she teased, then motioned to the side. "Stop bowing and move, yes?"

He did as she asked, his cheeks now heated with embarrassment, and

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 13: I'm glad they were able to find Yunho, but I feel so bad for him. I hope he'll make it, for his and also Jessica's sake. Also, I guess I've now seen someone that will pull emotion out of Joe. Now I hope Krystal and Jaehwan can catch Changmin before it's too late.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 11: First of all, with the last chapter you really know how to write a good battle scene. It was very intense.

Now onto this chapter. The pain and anger that the crew and princesses felt was very real and it left me almost emotional, especially when it came to Daniel's death. He was such a good man, and also so brave. I hope that Jaehwan won't carry the guilt for too long, especially since this wasn't actually his fault. Now I also how everyone will be okay and get through this okay.

That fiery being was very well written and I could imagine it well as I was reading about it, so good job. I'm glad it did accept the fallen into the afterlife.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 8: Okay! I thought they might be princesses from the way they were revered by the crew and with such high respect. I also quite enjoyed the way you explained about the world and how they are trodden on and ignored by King Sooman. This chapter really answered some questions and put things into perspective, so thank you for that. But now I'm worried about Jaehwan and Krystal's friendship, so I hope that doesn't change.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 4: I like this story so far. I do hope that Jaehwan will learn to trust them and know that they're concerned about taking care of him, instead of treating him the same way the slavers did.
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 17: Okay I've caught up with this story and I just have to say WOW, I really liked it. If I had to pick between other stories, I'd say my favourite story of all time will always be Cursed, and I've really loved Depths of Reason too. I will reply to your reply soon enough one day! So, this makes me sad as now I've totally caught up with every story from Myths of Calceryn. Hence, I will go and search for other stories I can read off you in the meantime!

So back to Promise -- I really liked the ending, and King Sukjin proved that he was a just man. As for Krystal and Jaehwan, I thought that was a brilliant wrap up to their bonding. Jaehwan really cares about her but I got a bit emotional when Krystal delivered him his father's message. I think no matter what, Jaehwan really wants to go home -- maybe this will change in future chapters but for now, no matter where he goes, he will always want to return back to his family. Changmin deserved what got to him but I can tell from his POV that he was just doing the best for his country. Unfortunately, he was young and foolish and shouldn't have put politics into his own hands.
Now then, it appears that Sohee got something important -- it is the dang scroll about the dragons I just know it! I had a look a the timeline and noticed that Promise occurs before Depths of Reason, so I think Sohee has been called to discuss the plot. I'm glad Jaehwan will get to experience some more adventures with Krystal but this does come to the question -- will he bump into Leo and Joy on the way considering they are also crossing Noria?

Now, it was mentioned that Sohee saw an Elemental's touch on Jaehwan. I think this was the Elemental that Leo summoned in Cursed, rather than Jaehwan having any magical capabilities. I understand what you mean that it's hard to fill in the background of what's going on when you have a character who's not involved in the politics. It's nice in a way and Final Fantasy 12 does that too -- have an ordinary guy get caught up with people involved in politics. I can't help but wonder how the story would have turned out if it was from Krystal's POV. i feel like there I would have experience so much more as a reader.

But otherwise, brilliant story as always Tigress. You never fail to impress me and leave me at the edge of my seat! Myths of Calceryn have a special place in my heart :)
gaksitalGaksital
#8
Chapter 13: Welp, Siwon surprised me too!! I didn't think he'd actually be a thoughtful guy, but damn, so Eldresan had nothing to do with this at all? Now I'm fishy about Kelsar! I guess we will find out about Changmin's true motives when he's caught and brought to justice. This is getting so intense. I just want to keep reading the next chapter eventhough it's so late T.T
gaksitalGaksital
#9
Chapter 12: Did I just see Changmin there in the story!? Okay, I'm super curious to know what role you've given my bias xD In any case, it seems like he's definitely an antagonist in this story if he's escaping the city. I should add that Eric and Victoria probably feel a lot of burden if they since they are the next to take over the ship now that Daniel's gone T.T

As much as Jaehwan's lining the pieces seemed plausible. I think the Tower they are speaking of is the one where the Magicians strut their stuff in. Interesting to see that the Elementals are more than just summons. It seems that they are the energy of the planet: wind, water, fire, air and I'm guessing you might put in spirit or ether if we're going with the Greek Elementals. I like it! Yunho T.T Go get him ladies!

I'm curious as to why Changmin is in all this? It really is a delicate situation as Krystal puts it. Surprising still, he didn't kill of Yunho so he must also be aware of the cracking politics. I sort of like that you made the main character of this story a clueless lad from a village, and who was spontaneously saved from a slave ship. I feel so bad for Jaehwan at this point, but I can't help wonder if he has a role other than being the clueless village boy. Everyone else is so integral to this world, even Joe (who seems to be warming up to Jaehwan).

Oh wait, the tower really is Changmin's tower! You had me there :O Joe seems like he's on edge. He's just so angry about what's happening to his Prince. what a loyal guy to the end. I underestimated him. I sort of like the loyal guys. Poor Jaehwan -- we know clearly well who wears the pants in this ship xP
Eh? Siwon!? Damn you're really surprising me with these cameos haha. In any case, I never trusted Siwon in any stories xD But his clothes sound weird. I can't remember if I read about those robes anywhere else but I've a feeling he might be a Magician? And how the hell did Changmin burn down a whole tower made of stone!? He must have some wand at his disposal or something that powerful.

Siwon is slimier than I thought! Not sure if I will trust him. There's something very off about him. My gang better watch out! But his words leave a chill. What things is he talking about? I can't help but feel like it goes back to that Emperor with the dragons in Obarsan -- the name of his country eludes me. But damn, Changmin had some nerve! I dislike him already and he hasn't even made an appearance yet >:(
gaksitalGaksital
#10
Chapter 11: Wait what!? Not Daniel! :(( I feel so empty inside. Who will say "Jaewan" now. I can tell things are getting serious, really serious. All the initial banter and good will is gone. The question is, what and how? Who led the ambush? How did they do it? Is there a traitor on board? It's like these guys KNEW when and where the Lion Heart would be.
Interesting bit of law there. I like how you added that aswell to the worldbuilding!
Ah, so that was where Jessica was, and also Sohee. That explains why they were away from the battle. At first, I thought that Sohee would only fight based on her orders from the Tower. But her reaction to Daniel tells that she really considered him as a friend at the least. :(

I just want to protect Jaehwan right now! It wasn't his fault what happened to Daniel. In the bigger picture, he saved the rest of the crew because he woke up :(

That ending gave me chills. Didn't think Magicians would have that much power. She must be very powerful. I'm also intrigued by the ritual? Did she call upon a being that takes away the bodies of the dead? Was it a cremation? I really want to know!