A Promise Broken

Promise
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The soft touch of fingers in his hair pulled Jaehwan from a fitful sleep, and he blinked his eyes open to see Krystal. The Princess was looking down at him, her eyes soft in the dim light, her beautiful lips curved into a gentle smile. That was when he realized he was seeing her from a strange angle, and it dawned on him that his head was in her lap.

"Oh hells, I'm sorry," he blurted, moving to get up. His leg burned in pain, though, and he gave a short yelp as he remembered about the wound.

Then Krystal's hands grabbed his shoulders. "Easy, it's okay. You were bouncing around so I figured this would be the easiest position for you to rest in." Her tone said it was totally unpersonal: her eyes said otherwise. Unsure what to say in return, Jaehwan only nodded and she helped him to sit up slowly and carefully.

They were back in the city, it seemed: he could see rooftops out of the high windows on the carriage. It was much quieter than Jaehwan had expected, but when Krystal stepped out then turned to help him out as well, he realized it was because they were in a courtyard of sorts. She wrapped an arm around his back to grasp his side, becoming a makeshift crutch for him, and then they turned.

And Jaehwan's breath caught in his throat. They weren't in just a courtyard: they were in the King's palace! He turned to gape at Krystal, but she shook her head ever so slightly, her smile seemingly pasted on her face. "Don't stare, they'll treat you better if you act like you're used to this." Her words were a mere whisper for his ears only, and it was then that he noticed the two men in pale clothing coming toward them.

"Your Majesty," one greeted, bowing to Krystal before he turned to Jaehwan. "And sir. We're here to take you to the hospital." His face stayed perfectly impassive, but his eyes did jump between Jaehwan and the Princess as if looking for something deeper.

Krystal didn't let him have anything from her demeanor, though. The cool, collected Princess mask was back, and she gave the orderly a gracious nod as she helped Jaehwan to hobble toward him. "Thank you," she said. "Take good care of him, he served me well."

Though he knew it was what she was expected to say, and that she had to be the Princess of Remasan and all that entailed, the words did send a reminder to his heart. He was below her status, and there was no way that it could work. Jaehwan avoided meeting her eyes as the orderly ducked under his opposite arm, taking his weight off of Krystal. As soon as the woman let go of him, the other orderly took her place, and they were off, practically carrying Jaehwan away.

Even though they were in the palace courtyard, they did not enter the massive stone building. Instead they took him to a small, one-storey building that was painted pure white. As soon as he stepped in the doors the scents of herbs hit him, threatening to make him sneeze with the intensity. One of the orderlies, the one who had yet to speak, wrinkled his nose and shook his head.

"I know, it takes getting used to," he told Jaehwan. "I've been here a month and I have yet to be able to enter with making that same face!"

"Kyungsoo," the other warned, as if in a reminder that they were not supposed to speak to Jaehwan. The first one clamped his lips shut and didn't say another word, but he didn't look very happy about it.

The two orderlies helped Jaehwan to a bed, just wide enough for him to fit comfortably and decked out with white sheets and a blanket to ward against the winter chill. As they helped him settle in, Jaehwan realized that yes, it was winter now: he wasn't sure on the exact date, but he did know that the Solstice was near when he was taken and that it had passed probably a week earlier. Sadness ran through him as he thought of his family, but he shook his head to stay clear of that path, focusing instead on the room he was in.

A long, rectangular chamber, it was all in white with many beds lining the walls. He was the only occupant though, and for a brief moment he wondered why until he realized that Kelsar likely had its own magician. Said mage would be able to heal anyone who came, and he perked up with the thought that he would be healed and well soon.

And yet he ended up waiting nearly an hour before a woman came in, followed by three more orderlies all dressed identically to the first two, who had left when he was caught up in his thoughts. She had a few grey hairs streaking through her black braid, and lines at the corners of her eyes that crinkled when she smiled at him. "Welcome to Kelsar, Sir Jaehwan." He could hear the implied title, but he didn't think he ought to correct her after the warning Krystal had given. "I am Doctor Sunghee, and I am here to see about that arrow in your leg." Before he could ask, she continued, "Usually we have our Magician care for the injured, but she is otherwise indisposed, and I am trained well in battle healing. You're in good hands," she added with a kind smile.

Jaehwan nodded, slightly scared, but he had to trust her. Two of her three orderlies stepped forward then, and they helped Jaehwan off of the bed and to another room with a long metal table. It gleamed from the light that reflected off of it, magical globes similar to the ones on the Lion Heart hanging off the ceiling in strategic places to cast the entire room in bright light. The table was cold when he was eased onto it, but he wasn't going to complain. One orderly, a young woman with a sweet face, removed the makeshift bandage with deft fingers, not even flinching when she saw the mess beneath. As she carried the rags away, the young man cut the leg of Jaehwan's trousers above his wound, clearing away the fabric so that the doctor could work.

The third orderly stepped forward then, a woman about his sister's age that gave a warm smile that made him miss home. "Drink this," she said softly, holding up a sma

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 13: I'm glad they were able to find Yunho, but I feel so bad for him. I hope he'll make it, for his and also Jessica's sake. Also, I guess I've now seen someone that will pull emotion out of Joe. Now I hope Krystal and Jaehwan can catch Changmin before it's too late.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 11: First of all, with the last chapter you really know how to write a good battle scene. It was very intense.

Now onto this chapter. The pain and anger that the crew and princesses felt was very real and it left me almost emotional, especially when it came to Daniel's death. He was such a good man, and also so brave. I hope that Jaehwan won't carry the guilt for too long, especially since this wasn't actually his fault. Now I also how everyone will be okay and get through this okay.

That fiery being was very well written and I could imagine it well as I was reading about it, so good job. I'm glad it did accept the fallen into the afterlife.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 8: Okay! I thought they might be princesses from the way they were revered by the crew and with such high respect. I also quite enjoyed the way you explained about the world and how they are trodden on and ignored by King Sooman. This chapter really answered some questions and put things into perspective, so thank you for that. But now I'm worried about Jaehwan and Krystal's friendship, so I hope that doesn't change.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 4: I like this story so far. I do hope that Jaehwan will learn to trust them and know that they're concerned about taking care of him, instead of treating him the same way the slavers did.
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 17: Okay I've caught up with this story and I just have to say WOW, I really liked it. If I had to pick between other stories, I'd say my favourite story of all time will always be Cursed, and I've really loved Depths of Reason too. I will reply to your reply soon enough one day! So, this makes me sad as now I've totally caught up with every story from Myths of Calceryn. Hence, I will go and search for other stories I can read off you in the meantime!

So back to Promise -- I really liked the ending, and King Sukjin proved that he was a just man. As for Krystal and Jaehwan, I thought that was a brilliant wrap up to their bonding. Jaehwan really cares about her but I got a bit emotional when Krystal delivered him his father's message. I think no matter what, Jaehwan really wants to go home -- maybe this will change in future chapters but for now, no matter where he goes, he will always want to return back to his family. Changmin deserved what got to him but I can tell from his POV that he was just doing the best for his country. Unfortunately, he was young and foolish and shouldn't have put politics into his own hands.
Now then, it appears that Sohee got something important -- it is the dang scroll about the dragons I just know it! I had a look a the timeline and noticed that Promise occurs before Depths of Reason, so I think Sohee has been called to discuss the plot. I'm glad Jaehwan will get to experience some more adventures with Krystal but this does come to the question -- will he bump into Leo and Joy on the way considering they are also crossing Noria?

Now, it was mentioned that Sohee saw an Elemental's touch on Jaehwan. I think this was the Elemental that Leo summoned in Cursed, rather than Jaehwan having any magical capabilities. I understand what you mean that it's hard to fill in the background of what's going on when you have a character who's not involved in the politics. It's nice in a way and Final Fantasy 12 does that too -- have an ordinary guy get caught up with people involved in politics. I can't help but wonder how the story would have turned out if it was from Krystal's POV. i feel like there I would have experience so much more as a reader.

But otherwise, brilliant story as always Tigress. You never fail to impress me and leave me at the edge of my seat! Myths of Calceryn have a special place in my heart :)
gaksitalGaksital
#8
Chapter 13: Welp, Siwon surprised me too!! I didn't think he'd actually be a thoughtful guy, but damn, so Eldresan had nothing to do with this at all? Now I'm fishy about Kelsar! I guess we will find out about Changmin's true motives when he's caught and brought to justice. This is getting so intense. I just want to keep reading the next chapter eventhough it's so late T.T
gaksitalGaksital
#9
Chapter 12: Did I just see Changmin there in the story!? Okay, I'm super curious to know what role you've given my bias xD In any case, it seems like he's definitely an antagonist in this story if he's escaping the city. I should add that Eric and Victoria probably feel a lot of burden if they since they are the next to take over the ship now that Daniel's gone T.T

As much as Jaehwan's lining the pieces seemed plausible. I think the Tower they are speaking of is the one where the Magicians strut their stuff in. Interesting to see that the Elementals are more than just summons. It seems that they are the energy of the planet: wind, water, fire, air and I'm guessing you might put in spirit or ether if we're going with the Greek Elementals. I like it! Yunho T.T Go get him ladies!

I'm curious as to why Changmin is in all this? It really is a delicate situation as Krystal puts it. Surprising still, he didn't kill of Yunho so he must also be aware of the cracking politics. I sort of like that you made the main character of this story a clueless lad from a village, and who was spontaneously saved from a slave ship. I feel so bad for Jaehwan at this point, but I can't help wonder if he has a role other than being the clueless village boy. Everyone else is so integral to this world, even Joe (who seems to be warming up to Jaehwan).

Oh wait, the tower really is Changmin's tower! You had me there :O Joe seems like he's on edge. He's just so angry about what's happening to his Prince. what a loyal guy to the end. I underestimated him. I sort of like the loyal guys. Poor Jaehwan -- we know clearly well who wears the pants in this ship xP
Eh? Siwon!? Damn you're really surprising me with these cameos haha. In any case, I never trusted Siwon in any stories xD But his clothes sound weird. I can't remember if I read about those robes anywhere else but I've a feeling he might be a Magician? And how the hell did Changmin burn down a whole tower made of stone!? He must have some wand at his disposal or something that powerful.

Siwon is slimier than I thought! Not sure if I will trust him. There's something very off about him. My gang better watch out! But his words leave a chill. What things is he talking about? I can't help but feel like it goes back to that Emperor with the dragons in Obarsan -- the name of his country eludes me. But damn, Changmin had some nerve! I dislike him already and he hasn't even made an appearance yet >:(
gaksitalGaksital
#10
Chapter 11: Wait what!? Not Daniel! :(( I feel so empty inside. Who will say "Jaewan" now. I can tell things are getting serious, really serious. All the initial banter and good will is gone. The question is, what and how? Who led the ambush? How did they do it? Is there a traitor on board? It's like these guys KNEW when and where the Lion Heart would be.
Interesting bit of law there. I like how you added that aswell to the worldbuilding!
Ah, so that was where Jessica was, and also Sohee. That explains why they were away from the battle. At first, I thought that Sohee would only fight based on her orders from the Tower. But her reaction to Daniel tells that she really considered him as a friend at the least. :(

I just want to protect Jaehwan right now! It wasn't his fault what happened to Daniel. In the bigger picture, he saved the rest of the crew because he woke up :(

That ending gave me chills. Didn't think Magicians would have that much power. She must be very powerful. I'm also intrigued by the ritual? Did she call upon a being that takes away the bodies of the dead? Was it a cremation? I really want to know!