The Welcome to Redrian

Promise
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Krystal stepped up beside him where he stood gazing at the city drawing closer. The sun was close to the horizon then, casting the ship's shadow out ahead of them: he hadn't realized they had changed direction in sailing since the previous night. They had been traveling in a northern track, but now they headed almost due east and the sun was setting behind them. "That's Redrian," Krystal told him. "There, on the hill, that is the King's Palace."

It was a stone structure she pointed out, something that looked nothing like the castles of the stories. No looming towers, no spires reaching for the clous, just a massive hulking structure on the hill. From it, streets wound down toward the harbor, each one lined with more stone buildings in shades of brown or grey. There were many ships in the harbor, anchored not at a wooden pier but intead strange stone structures that stretched out into the bay. "Kelsar's main export is stoneware," Krystal told him as she noticed his scrutiny of the piers. "They're master stone workers, and they have incredibly productive gem mines somewhere that they keep a great secret. That's the biggest reason Eldresan wants to conquer them," she added with a shrug.

"So. Why are we here?" he asked finally, turning to look her in the eyes. She stood so close that he would only have to take on step forward to kiss her... and then he mentally smacked himself for that thought and took two steps away.

A small smile edged on her lips when he moved away, but it faded as she looked back at the city. "The truth? I shouldn't tell you," she said softly.

Oh. "Okay. So it's not something safe, then?" He was disappointed that she couldn't tell him, but he supposed he could understand it. They were still strangers, despite that he felt so comfortable around the tall princess.

She shook her head slowly, chewing the inside of her cheek as she thought. "It's... delicate. My sister's husband, Yunho. He's missing and he was last here in Kelsar as an ambassador for my father, but we were sent word that his ship was wrecked." She shrugged then and shook her head once again. "That just doesn't sound right for anyone in my father's court. Remasan is too skilled with sailing and he did not send word that he would be returning home. But things are delicate, we can't just let alliances fall apart, so we need to know what happened. Likely, he was taken by someone wanting to force his mother into action. And so," she turned to him with a wry smile, "We are here, with just one small crew and one powerful magician, to find some answers."

"Thats why you said this could start a war," he breathed, wondering what exactly he had stepped into, but she shook her head.

Her arms crossed over her chest, she stared at the approaching city as if it were a viper about to strike. "No. Remasan is not allies with Kelsar, but we have a common enemy in Eldresan. King Sukjin won't start war with us, but we can't just sit by and accept that Yunho is dead. His mother is the Queen of Maklar, he's too tempting a target to just assume he's not being used as a piece by a third party. So we're here, as a surprise guest, to play the idea of a grieving widow looking for answers of her husband's death. And this," she smiled then, a truly sharp-edged smile that almost made Jaehwan want to step back from its ferocity. "This is why I'm here. To help find the leads as Jessica keeps the attention on her. No one pays attention to a second daughter."

Jaehwan took a deep breath, trying to process all of what she had told him. But... "Why did you tell me? I mean, if you're not supposed to."

She laughed, very softly and almost as if to herself, and shook her head as she looked up at him. "I'm... I can't explain it. You're so, I don't know, so pure. So naive, I don't mean that as an insult," she added quickly when his expression shadowed. "I mean, you don't have any of the taint that the people of the court or of the cities have. It's like being around you makes me feel like I'm just Krystal, because you're not watching every move and weighing every word as you look for some crack in my armor. And you wear your heart on your sleeve," she added softly, looking down at the floor and allowing her hair to fall to shade her face. "I guess it just makes me feel like I can trust you."

Warmth bloomed inside of his chest, and, especially conscious of it after her words, he hoped it didn't show on his face. But to have her say that she trusted him, after so little time they had spent together... "I won't betray that," he told her quietly. She didn't look up at him, though, and so he took a step toward her, reaching out to touch her shoulder-

And the map room door opened. He dropped his hand immediately and turned to see Dara standing there, her already thin lips pressed tightly together as she looked between them. "The Captain wants you," she told Krystal.

"Thank you," the tall Princess said, raising her head and tossing her dark hair over her shoulder. "We'll speak more later, Jaehwan," she promised, then crossed the room to slip out the door past Dara.

The short officer watched him for a long moment, then she shook her head. "She's out of your league, villager," she told him softly. Then she closed the door behind her and left him to himself.

He knew that she meant well by the words, and he also knew that she was likely right, but he couldn't help but to wonder. His father had always said that when he met his wife, Jaehwan's mother, that he had known that she was who he was meant to love. Jaehwan didn't know much about love, and he certainly didn't think he was falling in love with Krystal, but he realized now that he could. It wouldn't be that hard to do, all he had to do was let himself fall, and as he realized that, he gave a soft curse.

He didn't need this to come in and confuse him! He wanted to return home... but the nagging voice in his mind said, 'yes, but what then?' Would he work in his father's butcher shop for the rest of his life, splitting the work and income with his brothers? Marry and raise a family there, to teach them the same thing? Was there even anyone in his village that he was interested in? He had dallied, of course: he was past teenage years after all! But he couldn't think of a single time he had been so drawn to someone, so comfortable with a woman, as he was with Krystal.

But Dara was right, she was a Princess and Jaehwan was far beneath her. And yet he couldn't stop the thought that it was better to live than to regret. Maybe he would take this path and see where it headed, even if that meant heartbreak and parting ways after the adventure was over.

 

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 13: I'm glad they were able to find Yunho, but I feel so bad for him. I hope he'll make it, for his and also Jessica's sake. Also, I guess I've now seen someone that will pull emotion out of Joe. Now I hope Krystal and Jaehwan can catch Changmin before it's too late.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 11: First of all, with the last chapter you really know how to write a good battle scene. It was very intense.

Now onto this chapter. The pain and anger that the crew and princesses felt was very real and it left me almost emotional, especially when it came to Daniel's death. He was such a good man, and also so brave. I hope that Jaehwan won't carry the guilt for too long, especially since this wasn't actually his fault. Now I also how everyone will be okay and get through this okay.

That fiery being was very well written and I could imagine it well as I was reading about it, so good job. I'm glad it did accept the fallen into the afterlife.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 8: Okay! I thought they might be princesses from the way they were revered by the crew and with such high respect. I also quite enjoyed the way you explained about the world and how they are trodden on and ignored by King Sooman. This chapter really answered some questions and put things into perspective, so thank you for that. But now I'm worried about Jaehwan and Krystal's friendship, so I hope that doesn't change.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 4: I like this story so far. I do hope that Jaehwan will learn to trust them and know that they're concerned about taking care of him, instead of treating him the same way the slavers did.
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 17: Okay I've caught up with this story and I just have to say WOW, I really liked it. If I had to pick between other stories, I'd say my favourite story of all time will always be Cursed, and I've really loved Depths of Reason too. I will reply to your reply soon enough one day! So, this makes me sad as now I've totally caught up with every story from Myths of Calceryn. Hence, I will go and search for other stories I can read off you in the meantime!

So back to Promise -- I really liked the ending, and King Sukjin proved that he was a just man. As for Krystal and Jaehwan, I thought that was a brilliant wrap up to their bonding. Jaehwan really cares about her but I got a bit emotional when Krystal delivered him his father's message. I think no matter what, Jaehwan really wants to go home -- maybe this will change in future chapters but for now, no matter where he goes, he will always want to return back to his family. Changmin deserved what got to him but I can tell from his POV that he was just doing the best for his country. Unfortunately, he was young and foolish and shouldn't have put politics into his own hands.
Now then, it appears that Sohee got something important -- it is the dang scroll about the dragons I just know it! I had a look a the timeline and noticed that Promise occurs before Depths of Reason, so I think Sohee has been called to discuss the plot. I'm glad Jaehwan will get to experience some more adventures with Krystal but this does come to the question -- will he bump into Leo and Joy on the way considering they are also crossing Noria?

Now, it was mentioned that Sohee saw an Elemental's touch on Jaehwan. I think this was the Elemental that Leo summoned in Cursed, rather than Jaehwan having any magical capabilities. I understand what you mean that it's hard to fill in the background of what's going on when you have a character who's not involved in the politics. It's nice in a way and Final Fantasy 12 does that too -- have an ordinary guy get caught up with people involved in politics. I can't help but wonder how the story would have turned out if it was from Krystal's POV. i feel like there I would have experience so much more as a reader.

But otherwise, brilliant story as always Tigress. You never fail to impress me and leave me at the edge of my seat! Myths of Calceryn have a special place in my heart :)
gaksitalGaksital
#8
Chapter 13: Welp, Siwon surprised me too!! I didn't think he'd actually be a thoughtful guy, but damn, so Eldresan had nothing to do with this at all? Now I'm fishy about Kelsar! I guess we will find out about Changmin's true motives when he's caught and brought to justice. This is getting so intense. I just want to keep reading the next chapter eventhough it's so late T.T
gaksitalGaksital
#9
Chapter 12: Did I just see Changmin there in the story!? Okay, I'm super curious to know what role you've given my bias xD In any case, it seems like he's definitely an antagonist in this story if he's escaping the city. I should add that Eric and Victoria probably feel a lot of burden if they since they are the next to take over the ship now that Daniel's gone T.T

As much as Jaehwan's lining the pieces seemed plausible. I think the Tower they are speaking of is the one where the Magicians strut their stuff in. Interesting to see that the Elementals are more than just summons. It seems that they are the energy of the planet: wind, water, fire, air and I'm guessing you might put in spirit or ether if we're going with the Greek Elementals. I like it! Yunho T.T Go get him ladies!

I'm curious as to why Changmin is in all this? It really is a delicate situation as Krystal puts it. Surprising still, he didn't kill of Yunho so he must also be aware of the cracking politics. I sort of like that you made the main character of this story a clueless lad from a village, and who was spontaneously saved from a slave ship. I feel so bad for Jaehwan at this point, but I can't help wonder if he has a role other than being the clueless village boy. Everyone else is so integral to this world, even Joe (who seems to be warming up to Jaehwan).

Oh wait, the tower really is Changmin's tower! You had me there :O Joe seems like he's on edge. He's just so angry about what's happening to his Prince. what a loyal guy to the end. I underestimated him. I sort of like the loyal guys. Poor Jaehwan -- we know clearly well who wears the pants in this ship xP
Eh? Siwon!? Damn you're really surprising me with these cameos haha. In any case, I never trusted Siwon in any stories xD But his clothes sound weird. I can't remember if I read about those robes anywhere else but I've a feeling he might be a Magician? And how the hell did Changmin burn down a whole tower made of stone!? He must have some wand at his disposal or something that powerful.

Siwon is slimier than I thought! Not sure if I will trust him. There's something very off about him. My gang better watch out! But his words leave a chill. What things is he talking about? I can't help but feel like it goes back to that Emperor with the dragons in Obarsan -- the name of his country eludes me. But damn, Changmin had some nerve! I dislike him already and he hasn't even made an appearance yet >:(
gaksitalGaksital
#10
Chapter 11: Wait what!? Not Daniel! :(( I feel so empty inside. Who will say "Jaewan" now. I can tell things are getting serious, really serious. All the initial banter and good will is gone. The question is, what and how? Who led the ambush? How did they do it? Is there a traitor on board? It's like these guys KNEW when and where the Lion Heart would be.
Interesting bit of law there. I like how you added that aswell to the worldbuilding!
Ah, so that was where Jessica was, and also Sohee. That explains why they were away from the battle. At first, I thought that Sohee would only fight based on her orders from the Tower. But her reaction to Daniel tells that she really considered him as a friend at the least. :(

I just want to protect Jaehwan right now! It wasn't his fault what happened to Daniel. In the bigger picture, he saved the rest of the crew because he woke up :(

That ending gave me chills. Didn't think Magicians would have that much power. She must be very powerful. I'm also intrigued by the ritual? Did she call upon a being that takes away the bodies of the dead? Was it a cremation? I really want to know!