Unexpected

Promise
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Jaehwan's legs felt like they weighed a hundred stone each as he climbed the stairs, emerging from the filthy hold to see chaos. A battle raged, though it was obvious that the slavers were losing. Their ugly, nocked swords were no match for the gleaming silver weapons of the attacking party, and the raiders went down in a swath of blood. Jaehwan felt a thrill of satisfaction roll through him when he saw the man who had captured him in his village fall and not rise again.

The slaver's ship was a ugly thing in Jaehwan's uneducated opinion, the deck worn and the railing looking like it needed repair thirty years ago. But it was really the comparison to the ship that accosted it that made up his mind in that area. The other ship was sleek and well-painted, with a set of three masts that stood tall into the gathering storm clouds and sails that were edged with tassels. There was no flag that he could make out, but he would guess that was because the sky was darkening rapidly, the sun already having fallen past the horizon. 

The woman paused at the top of the stairs, just in front of Jaehwan, and pulled another thick arrow from the quiver at her hip. She took next to no time at all to load her weapon, though Jaehwan had read that crossbows could be a pain to draw. She sighted in one of two raiders who were getting ready to cross to the ship next to them - what Jaehwan assumed was her ship - and shot him in the back just as he swung off of the rail. His grip faltered in his dying moment and he let loose a shriek as he fell into the ocean between the vessels.

"Retreat!" she shouted, a clear ringing tone in her voice that meant she was used to giving orders. She stepped out onto the filthy deck as her sailors disengaged as they could and drew back toward her. Jaehwan made to step out to follow, but just as he lifted his foot over the threshhold, the ship lurched to the side.

He fell, sliding several feet on the deck before he came to a stop against a sailpole. To his embarrassment, he found that he was the only one who had fallen: the rest of the woman's crew took the motion in stride and now a few looked at him in wry amusement.

And yet a man stepped up to Jaehwan, his eyes wrinkled with smile lines, and held a hand down for the younger man. "Not used to sea?" he asked, not unkindly, as he helped to steady Jaehwan on his feet again. "Come on, this old girl is sinking."

Jaehwan didn't need to be told twice: the woman and the rest of her crew were already swinging back to the beautiful ship. He took one last look around, noting the dead and wounded slavers, none of which were still standing, and felt a moment of pity for the fact that they would drown.  "They've led hundreds to the slave blocks," the man told him, seeming to note the pause within Jaehwan. "They deserve this fate. Now come, we need to disengage before true dark sets in. Our ship will be pulling back and I intend to be on it."

He caught one of the corssing lines and held the rope out to Jaehwan, an indication that he should take it and swing himself over, but when he noted the raw red wounds on his wrists the man frowned. "Here," he offered, as if to wrap an arm about the slender young man.

And while he was greatful for the offer, Jaehwan couldn't take it. "Thank you," he said earnestly, but took the rope into his own hands. He caught a slight smile on the other man's face as he steadied himself, took a deep breath and a firm grip, and shoved off. It wasn't unlike swinging into the waters off the shore with his brothers.

He landed and stumbled on the other deck, the only thing keeping him upright being the rope that he held firmly in hand. As he wavered, he heard a woman's voice come from his right side. "And who do we have here?"

He expected it to be the one who had saved him, but when he turned, it was a shorter, more delicate featured woman. The sharp expression on her face didn't look delicate at all, though, and he realized he might want to speak up before he got thrown overboard. Yet even as he opened his mouth, the man who had spoken to and helped him came up to his side. "Your sister found him in the hold, Captain. A prisoner. He was the only one," he added, and her face seemed to fall at those words.

She pushed aside whatever bothered her and focused on Jaehwan once again. "Very well, you are welcome about my ship. While here you must abide by my rules and..." she glanced at his wounded arms and seemed to change what she was going to say, "Stay out of the way. Daniel," she added, and the older man stood a bit straighter. 

"Captain."

"Take him to..." her brow furrowed as she obviously thought of what to do with him. He knew what he looked like - too tall, too slender, wounded and mal-nourished and seasick. He was about to open his mouth to say he could pull his weight, even if he didn't know the slightest thing about actually sailing, when someone interrupted.

"He can have my cabin. I'll stay in the map room." The woman who had saved him stepped up to the small gathering, brushing at a spot of blood on her dark clothing. When she looked up he was startled to see that she had removed her eyepatch. And she had both eyes, dark and sharply tilted over sharp cheekbones and small lips. He realized he was staring only when she raised one long, slender brow at him, and he dropped his gaze and flushed in embarrassment.

The shorter Captain nodded slowly. "Alright, that will do. Daniel, take him to Krystal's cabin. Joe!" she called sharply, catching the attention of a short and slender man who had been passing. "Make sure a hammock gets set up for Krystal in the map room."

The slender sailor saluted as he hurried away, and both women seemed satisfied, the small Cpatian giving a small nod. As they began to turn away and Daniel reached for Jaehwan's elbow, he figured this would be his only chance to speak up.

"Thank you," he said sincerely, reaching a hand toward the taller of the women - the one they called Krystal. He didn't touch her, though, knowing it wasn't a stranger's place to do so. "You saved my life, I'm sure. If you could somehow return me to my village I would be even more grateful, or even just to Arisan, I could make my way back." He didn't know exaactly where they were, but given that it hadn't been too long ago that he had been captured, maybe a week if he had gauged time correctly, they couldn't be too far from the Arisan shores. Or at least, that's what he assumed.

And yet the short Captain shook her head slowly, a grim look appearing on her face. "I'm sorry, ah...." she paused, raising one brow as if in inquiry of his name.

"Jaehwan," he supplied hurriedly.

She nodded and continued. "I'm sorry, Jaehwan." She stumbled a bit over the name as she spoke it. "We have important business to attend to and for now, you're just going to h

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DGNA_Forever
#1
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 17: I'm really glad that thing turned out well and also that Krystal and Jaehwan did fully fall in love with one another. I could see it happening the entire time, and the way you wove their relationship was absolutely beautiful. I really liked this story and the adventure it offered, and I hope you had as much fun writing it as I had reading it. Now I'll need to read The Depth of Reason;).
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 13: I'm glad they were able to find Yunho, but I feel so bad for him. I hope he'll make it, for his and also Jessica's sake. Also, I guess I've now seen someone that will pull emotion out of Joe. Now I hope Krystal and Jaehwan can catch Changmin before it's too late.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 11: First of all, with the last chapter you really know how to write a good battle scene. It was very intense.

Now onto this chapter. The pain and anger that the crew and princesses felt was very real and it left me almost emotional, especially when it came to Daniel's death. He was such a good man, and also so brave. I hope that Jaehwan won't carry the guilt for too long, especially since this wasn't actually his fault. Now I also how everyone will be okay and get through this okay.

That fiery being was very well written and I could imagine it well as I was reading about it, so good job. I'm glad it did accept the fallen into the afterlife.
DGNA_Forever
#5
Chapter 8: Okay! I thought they might be princesses from the way they were revered by the crew and with such high respect. I also quite enjoyed the way you explained about the world and how they are trodden on and ignored by King Sooman. This chapter really answered some questions and put things into perspective, so thank you for that. But now I'm worried about Jaehwan and Krystal's friendship, so I hope that doesn't change.
DGNA_Forever
#6
Chapter 4: I like this story so far. I do hope that Jaehwan will learn to trust them and know that they're concerned about taking care of him, instead of treating him the same way the slavers did.
gaksitalGaksital
#7
Chapter 17: Okay I've caught up with this story and I just have to say WOW, I really liked it. If I had to pick between other stories, I'd say my favourite story of all time will always be Cursed, and I've really loved Depths of Reason too. I will reply to your reply soon enough one day! So, this makes me sad as now I've totally caught up with every story from Myths of Calceryn. Hence, I will go and search for other stories I can read off you in the meantime!

So back to Promise -- I really liked the ending, and King Sukjin proved that he was a just man. As for Krystal and Jaehwan, I thought that was a brilliant wrap up to their bonding. Jaehwan really cares about her but I got a bit emotional when Krystal delivered him his father's message. I think no matter what, Jaehwan really wants to go home -- maybe this will change in future chapters but for now, no matter where he goes, he will always want to return back to his family. Changmin deserved what got to him but I can tell from his POV that he was just doing the best for his country. Unfortunately, he was young and foolish and shouldn't have put politics into his own hands.
Now then, it appears that Sohee got something important -- it is the dang scroll about the dragons I just know it! I had a look a the timeline and noticed that Promise occurs before Depths of Reason, so I think Sohee has been called to discuss the plot. I'm glad Jaehwan will get to experience some more adventures with Krystal but this does come to the question -- will he bump into Leo and Joy on the way considering they are also crossing Noria?

Now, it was mentioned that Sohee saw an Elemental's touch on Jaehwan. I think this was the Elemental that Leo summoned in Cursed, rather than Jaehwan having any magical capabilities. I understand what you mean that it's hard to fill in the background of what's going on when you have a character who's not involved in the politics. It's nice in a way and Final Fantasy 12 does that too -- have an ordinary guy get caught up with people involved in politics. I can't help but wonder how the story would have turned out if it was from Krystal's POV. i feel like there I would have experience so much more as a reader.

But otherwise, brilliant story as always Tigress. You never fail to impress me and leave me at the edge of my seat! Myths of Calceryn have a special place in my heart :)
gaksitalGaksital
#8
Chapter 13: Welp, Siwon surprised me too!! I didn't think he'd actually be a thoughtful guy, but damn, so Eldresan had nothing to do with this at all? Now I'm fishy about Kelsar! I guess we will find out about Changmin's true motives when he's caught and brought to justice. This is getting so intense. I just want to keep reading the next chapter eventhough it's so late T.T
gaksitalGaksital
#9
Chapter 12: Did I just see Changmin there in the story!? Okay, I'm super curious to know what role you've given my bias xD In any case, it seems like he's definitely an antagonist in this story if he's escaping the city. I should add that Eric and Victoria probably feel a lot of burden if they since they are the next to take over the ship now that Daniel's gone T.T

As much as Jaehwan's lining the pieces seemed plausible. I think the Tower they are speaking of is the one where the Magicians strut their stuff in. Interesting to see that the Elementals are more than just summons. It seems that they are the energy of the planet: wind, water, fire, air and I'm guessing you might put in spirit or ether if we're going with the Greek Elementals. I like it! Yunho T.T Go get him ladies!

I'm curious as to why Changmin is in all this? It really is a delicate situation as Krystal puts it. Surprising still, he didn't kill of Yunho so he must also be aware of the cracking politics. I sort of like that you made the main character of this story a clueless lad from a village, and who was spontaneously saved from a slave ship. I feel so bad for Jaehwan at this point, but I can't help wonder if he has a role other than being the clueless village boy. Everyone else is so integral to this world, even Joe (who seems to be warming up to Jaehwan).

Oh wait, the tower really is Changmin's tower! You had me there :O Joe seems like he's on edge. He's just so angry about what's happening to his Prince. what a loyal guy to the end. I underestimated him. I sort of like the loyal guys. Poor Jaehwan -- we know clearly well who wears the pants in this ship xP
Eh? Siwon!? Damn you're really surprising me with these cameos haha. In any case, I never trusted Siwon in any stories xD But his clothes sound weird. I can't remember if I read about those robes anywhere else but I've a feeling he might be a Magician? And how the hell did Changmin burn down a whole tower made of stone!? He must have some wand at his disposal or something that powerful.

Siwon is slimier than I thought! Not sure if I will trust him. There's something very off about him. My gang better watch out! But his words leave a chill. What things is he talking about? I can't help but feel like it goes back to that Emperor with the dragons in Obarsan -- the name of his country eludes me. But damn, Changmin had some nerve! I dislike him already and he hasn't even made an appearance yet >:(
gaksitalGaksital
#10
Chapter 11: Wait what!? Not Daniel! :(( I feel so empty inside. Who will say "Jaewan" now. I can tell things are getting serious, really serious. All the initial banter and good will is gone. The question is, what and how? Who led the ambush? How did they do it? Is there a traitor on board? It's like these guys KNEW when and where the Lion Heart would be.
Interesting bit of law there. I like how you added that aswell to the worldbuilding!
Ah, so that was where Jessica was, and also Sohee. That explains why they were away from the battle. At first, I thought that Sohee would only fight based on her orders from the Tower. But her reaction to Daniel tells that she really considered him as a friend at the least. :(

I just want to protect Jaehwan right now! It wasn't his fault what happened to Daniel. In the bigger picture, he saved the rest of the crew because he woke up :(

That ending gave me chills. Didn't think Magicians would have that much power. She must be very powerful. I'm also intrigued by the ritual? Did she call upon a being that takes away the bodies of the dead? Was it a cremation? I really want to know!