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Weirder Than Aliens
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Reviewed by: StoicBread from Traverse Shop - Review & Proofread

 

 Title: 4/5 

The title appealed to me when I first saw it, especially that Taehyung (he was called a 4D Alien for you non-ARMYs there xD) was involved in the story. When I first saw this, I was like, "Weirder than Taehyung?"

'Weirder Than Aliens' has some kind of nice ring in it too. It's somehow eye-catching(?) since it starts with an adjective.

 

 Description/Foreword: 10/10 

Even though it's short, the Description is okay because there can be nothing more to add or it will be plot-revealing. I can say the same for the Foreword, too. Also, I just want to point out that the green highlighted texts in the Description and Foreword matches the tone/vibe of the story.

 

 Plot: 9/10 

The story's so sweet, that my laptop was swarming with thousands and thousands of ant colonies when I woke up the next morning. No joke. When I was proofreading this story, I created a mantra inside my head, "Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff, Calm the  down, I ain't goona die from fluff yet, I have requests to still finish :("

In other words, the story exists for the sake of fluff and it served its purpose well: to kill the living Taehyung stan in me. The fluff in here is very, very extreme. i dare you V stans to read this xD

 

 Writing Style: 4/5 

First of all, the characterization's good, since you focused on one particular characterizati

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Hey, ARMY. Check out Impossible Sun which features V as the main hero.

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Heart_Bangtan
#1
Chapter 2: OMG V, PLISE I NEED TO STAY LOYAL TO MY BIAS, YOU WEIRD HUMAN. Sorry, getting too emotional right there. Phew, anyway. THIS IS SUPER DUPER GREAT. And to be honest I'm a Lil shock by the ending but! It makes me make my own storyline after it XD I felt the fluffiness till the end Good job as always, our purrrfect author ^^
Heart_Bangtan
#2
Chapter 1: LOL HOW IN THE WORLD YOU THOUGHT V IS A FATHER OF TWO? But on the second thought, he could be a great father. And super hot one too *smirks*
lovelypikapi #3
Chapter 3: This was so cute! I want more
hamsterboo
#4
Chapter 2: Aweee that was adorable!! :D Thank you for posting this on my wall~ lolol
I would like to see this become a full length story :P
Vtae84 #5
Chapter 2: U have to finish it..what happen after looking outside the window..hehe..
wallla
#6
I wanna upvote it but it say " this page is not available" do you know why ?
wallla
#7
Chapter 2: aaaaaawwww authernim the story is gooood and well writen and fluffy and cute and V and the kids OH MY GOD it's cute ,,,really good job
wallla
#8
Chapter 1: the little kid " call me oppa " he's so cute