Story's Review
Weirder Than AliensReviewed by: StoicBread from Traverse Shop - Review & Proofread
Title: 4/5
The title appealed to me when I first saw it, especially that Taehyung (he was called a 4D Alien for you non-ARMYs there xD) was involved in the story. When I first saw this, I was like, "Weirder than Taehyung?"
'Weirder Than Aliens' has some kind of nice ring in it too. It's somehow eye-catching(?) since it starts with an adjective.
Description/Foreword: 10/10
Even though it's short, the Description is okay because there can be nothing more to add or it will be plot-revealing. I can say the same for the Foreword, too. Also, I just want to point out that the green highlighted texts in the Description and Foreword matches the tone/vibe of the story.
Plot: 9/10
The story's so sweet, that my laptop was swarming with thousands and thousands of ant colonies when I woke up the next morning. No joke. When I was proofreading this story, I created a mantra inside my head, "Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff Don't die from Fluff, Calm the down, I ain't goona die from fluff yet, I have requests to still finish :("
In other words, the story exists for the sake of fluff and it served its purpose well: to kill the living Taehyung stan in me. The fluff in here is very, very extreme. i dare you V stans to read this xD
Writing Style: 4/5
First of all, the characterization's good, since you focused on one particular characterizati
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