Just a Little Jealous

Description

Chanyeol just wanted to see Kyungsoo act in person. It wasn't asking much, yet one time was enough to regret every time he begged. What could possibly make the Happy Virus not-so-happy and maybe "'Just a little jealous'". 

Foreword

CY: "I'm not."

'I can't be. It's not who I am."

 

KS: "I hope not." 

'It can't be. It's not who he is.'

DISCLAIMER: EXO is not  mine. No matter how much I wish it was.

I hope you anticipate the first chapter. It's my first story ever!

*Please tell me if I . Your feedback will help me improve my rookie writing skills. 

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lenasorensen
#1
Chapter 1: The word you were looking for was probably "improvising"! A little tip I could give you is to actually not improvise. Make your chapters longer and add a little description (environment, appearances, and most crucially feelings, how much Chanyeol loves Kyungsoo so when he gets jealous the readers might have those "feels" you know). I'm absolutely not the best writer out there, far than that I'm not very good myself but I'd be happy to help you out to improve your writing and creativity! A work done by two people can't be worse right? Contact me by Private Message for more details! ♡ have a nice day!
Fanetha #2
Chapter 1: Love it,can't wait for next chapter