Chapter 1

|| THE SPIRE: A TALE OF MANY WORLDS || ARCHIVED

chapter 1


The divorce was arranged and Robert Cohn went out to the Coast. In California he fell among literary people and, as he still had a litt 


There was nothing Malik hated as much as finding new Seekers. It was like finding a handful of sentient needles in a very, very large haystack. Sure, the Keeper had a general idea of where potential Seekers were, but it still involved a lot of Malik walking around aimlessly and seeing if anyone noticed her. It consumed so much time that could otherwise be used to actually try to find Pi.

Malik sighed and accepted the coffee from the little shop at the metro station. She hadn't paid for it of course - being a Seeker wasn't exactly a paid position - but the suggestion that she had paid was enough for the confused barista to prepare her order. She took a sip and grimanced. Ugh it was weak. Next time she'd make her own coffee and bring a thermos or something, this sugary crap hardly tasted like coffee at all. 

As annoying as walking around doing nothing was, that wasn't the worst part of finding new Seekers. The worst part was having to explain what was going on and waiting for them to get past the stages of disbelief and denial. Honestly Malik usually skipped those, they came to the Spire when they were ready and this way she didn't have to deal with their . 

She knew she should be kinder to them. Nadira had walked her through it when she'd woken Malik, but Nadira had always been a better person than Malik could ever be. Malik just didn't have the patience to put up with it all, not when she was probably just going to lose them all soon enough anyway. One established Seeker and 3 newbies meant 2 of them would be going through the portals alone and let's be real they weren't going to make it back. They were canon fodder. But what the Keeper said Malik did.

She drained the last of her crappy coffee and headed towards the university in Daejeon, one of the places where the Keeper had told her a potential Seeker would be. Better get this over with, the faster she could get back to the job at hand.

~*~

Shin Seungchae packed up her laptop and headed out the lecture hall. This lecture had been the worst, all about Sigmund Freud and his 'theories', man did that guy have issues. Ah well, at least she didn't have to think about those until exam time.

She joined the friends who were waiting for her outside. Miyeon was talking about the date she was going on this weekend. She was apparently panicking about her outfit being either too y or not y enough. Next to her Alexandra was rolling her eyes, she looked so done with Miyeon's ramblings. "I want to look great but I don't want to look too easy you know?"Miyeon said. 

"You can borrow my soft pink dress if you like, you know, the one that's a little low cut but the soft colour will keep it feminine" Seungchae offered.

"Oh really?" Miyeon's face lit up. "Oh I love that one, yes please!"

Alexandra shot Seungchae a look fo gratitue and quickly changed the topic to today's bull lecture. As they turned to leave Seungchae tensed and quickly turned toward where she'd seen white tower from the corner of her eyes but now- nothing. She shook her head, this was not the first time that had happened but there was never anything there. Must be a trick of the light. 

As they made their way home she happile chatted with her friends. They stopped for a hot drink at the campus café (ginseng tae for Seungchae of course, her one true love). Alexandra went on an amusing rant about the class while Miyeon fretted some more over her date. All was as it should be.

Until it wasn't.

The barista had just given her her tea and she was waiting for the others to be done but something felt off. There was a girl sitting at a table in the back sipping from a cup and looking unimpressed but as soon as they locked eyes the world seemed to stop. They stared at each other for a little while, and Seungchae didn't really know how to react. The girl was staring at her so intently it was unnerving. After what felt like an hour she finally managed to tear her gaze away and turned to her friends, but they walked right past her. Seungchae hurried up to them and tapped Alexandra on the shoulder. "Hey wait for me. Do you see that girl over there?"

Alexandra and Miyeon looked at her for a moment, clearly confused. Miyeon scrunched up her nose like she always did during a test when she was trying to remember the answers but they weren't coming to her. "W-what was that?" she stammered. "Who? What?"

"That girl," Seungchae pointed at the girl who was now getting up from the booth. 

Miyeon looked at the bench and back at Seungchae, looking even more confused. "Who? What?" Seungchae didn't think her nose could scrunch up more.

She shook her head. "Nevermind let's just go."

"I don't-" Miyeon backed away. "I don't... think... I know you. I'm just- I'm just gonna go." Miyeon half-dragged Alexandra out of the door while the latter was still looking from Miyeon to Seungchae like nothing in the world made sense.

Seungchae was frozen for a second by the absurdity of it all and when she followed them out the door they had been swallowed by the mass of students goinghome. She heard the creak of the café door and looked back to see the girl coming out of the shop as well. "Who are you?" she asked, though more like she accused. 

"They don't know you anymore," the girl said, still clutching the hot drink.

"Excuse me?"

"You woke up," the girl said with a shrug. "You don't belong in their world anymore. You belong to the Spire."

"The Spire? What are you talking about? And you didn't answer my question."

"I'm Malik and that-" she nodded in the direction just to the right of Seungchae, "-is the Spire."

Seungchae looked  and gasped. There before her was a tall pristinely white tower reaching up into the sky. A tower just like she'd seen in her peripheral vision countless times. But it was here now, right before her. Impossibly white and impossibly tall and impossibly there. There were so many questions swimming in Seungchae's head. What was it? Why was it there? What did it house? Who was this girl? Why did her friends walk away from her like they didn't know her?

So many questions that had so many answers for her to uncover. The situation was bizarre and surreal, but at the same time she found herself curious. She wanted to know more. She had to know more.

"Pack your bags and go to the spire," the girl -Malik- said. She put her hands in her pocket and started to walk away.

"Wait! You can't just leave me like this," Seungchae protested.

"Pack only the essentials and come quick." Malik said ove r her shoulder. "You won't need much where we're going and we don't have time to waste. The fate of the worlds depends on it." With that she walked into the stream of students.

"Hey!" Seungchae yelled after her. "You can't just leave like that! What do you mean the fate of the worlds? What do you mean worlds, plural?! Hey!" But Malik was already gone.

For some seconds she just stared dumbfounded at the way Malik had gone. What was going on? Was this a joke? Was this real? She shook her head, this was too much to take in and she had to think. And dammit her tea had gone cold.

 

author's note

 

Here's the first chapter I hope you guys liked it and sorry for the delay. Hopefully I'll be quicker in writing the others. So here's Seungchae, our first Seeker. Thank you Thelandofbrownsugar for this wonderful character and I hope I did right by her. I wasn't going to put a Malik POV in there but I realized that you guys needed some insight into how all this works before I toss you in head-first along with your characters haha. Anyway hope you guys enjoyed it and more to come soon!

And as usual thanks Lils for proofreading and fixing up the wordvomit I wrote at 2 in the morning xD

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TheLandofBrownSugar #1
Hi, it's been a little while since the last chapter. I don't mean to sound impatient, but is everything alright with you two? The lack of activity (on this) has caused me to wonder, so I just wanted to see if everything was well. :)
experimentallyexotic #2
Chapter 11: Oh no Nari! D: Ugh this one hits straight to the heart, this poor girl. Her life was going just fine and then EVERYTHING CHANGED WHEN THE FIRE NATION ATTACKED! No but seriously my heart ;; </3 Malik wasn't even trying to wake her up she just wanted to go home, and of course in true Malik fashion was not super helpful (but she did try at least a bit more with Nari! That counts for something probably.) I thin the transition is definitely going to be hardest for her the poor thing :(
experimentallyexotic #3
Chapter 10: Namsun! My child! I still can't get over how perfectly you write him, seriously. And of course there's Zhei being an awesome friend and Hadon trying to be nice even though he's confused and I'M STILL CURIOUS HOW HE RECOGNIZED NAMSUN THOUGH.
Also the way Malik interacts with the Seekers continues to amuse me, it's a great way to show her personality honestly. She plays off each person differently since they're all so different, but the her-ness is still there~
experimentallyexotic #4
Chapter 9: Oh nooooo Jian D: This one gets me right in the feels, from the first paragraph you can just feel how hollow he is, and everything that follows is just a spiral downwards until he hits rock bottom. And by that I mean meeting Malik and her not being helpful whatsoever. Malik is amazing, it is really interesting to see her interacting with the new Seekers and this one really hits the hardest for me. You can feel that anger and desperation growing in Jian from the start of the chapter and then it just explodes at the end as everything around him just shatters.

Shoot gotta go get foods but I WILL BE BACK.
experimentallyexotic #5
Chapter 8: Seungchae! That last line about her tea always makes me laugh, your priorities are in line Seungchae. You can really see her curious nature in this, and honestly I think I'd react the same way as she does so she's super relatable for me ^-^
Also the first paragraph is seriously heartbreaking. Malik, have some faith in the new kids! You'll be sad forever if you don't make any friends D:
experimentallyexotic #6
Chapter 7: Bad guys away! I love these guys, did I ever say that I adore you for showing what the bad guys are thinking too? Like I know they're evil terrible people but Kai and Hana's interactions made me laugh and Myungjun is adorable and Kiro... I'm not sure about Kiro actually. He's a tough nut to crack I think. I'm looking forward to learning more about him for sure, and seeing these guys pitted against our heroes!
experimentallyexotic #7
Chapter 6: Ah I missed Malik and her snarkiness! And the Keeper and his mysteriousness! Eeee I remember reading this teaser a few million times and it still gets me super hyped up! On to the next chapter!!!
experimentallyexotic #8
SO MANY UPDATES. Hi! Sorry I've been MIA for so long but I'm going to comment on every chapter to make up for it!!
Soonyangel
#9
Chapter 20: You're on fire, wow !! :D I'm glad to see this back !

On to the chapter then~ Jian, no, don't do that, no-- who's cutting onions ?? This was so heartbreaking, even though there was no hope, man, my little heart hurts so much seeing him so broken. And Daehwan who forgets who he is noooooo ;u;

Kiro's team is one of a kind seriously, I wonder how much of a 'team' they really are, at least for Kiro. He doesn't care that much, he's just using most of them-- but Zhu seems to be using him as well. He trusts her enough not to ask, but ther's something more hiding in there... What do you have in mind, Monkey ? I'm curiouuuus. Poor Namsun is somehow forced to give information though ;u; I wonder what more he told them, considering we didn't really see what took place. And yeah, a rescue mission ! I knew Malik would arrive at some point. It's totally the new Seekers' style to go back and help their new friend, but it's nice to see that they're starting to influence her as well. I can't wait to see more of the changes they'll provoke in her ! Oh my Sigma, don't mention Jota, they're going to trick you now. You should know better than to mention your weaknesses in front of the QuSEF members. This screams trouble. Malik is so badass though, I'm totally cheerleading right now. Go go team Malik ! I do love Kiro though, he's a lovely . That kick in the stomach was totally deserved though haha xD

Man, this was so great, I'm so happy to be able to read more of this. Good luck though, with both this and Do or Die, you'll have a lot to work on. You can do it ! :D
TheLandofBrownSugar #10
Chapter 20: I actually thought about this the other day, and I seriously wondered whether or not this would go on. It's sad when you're really into a story, only for it to be discontinued--without the author giving any reason why. At least, then, you know not to expect more from it.

Regardless, I am very happy to see this story back. I understand how it is to be away from a creation for a while only to come back later, but I am glad you have returned! ^^

As for the chapter itself. Well, I expected a rescue mission, but this had me on the edge of my seat. Usually, I am a stickler for grammar and spelling, but I was so immersed that I didn't notice much until the very end (with 'mising' of all things). I really enjoy reading Jian's point of view just because he has so much to say! Poor guy, watching his best friend succumb to the world of the unconscious ones (again!). It's hard to lose, or come close to losing, someone once. Having to see it again can change someone. I wonder how this will affect Jian down the line. I am very intrigued by his potential development--I try to avoid the apps in terms of development to be in the same boat as the others.

Namsun is a sweetheart. He didn't have too big of a role in the second half, but I can understand his terror. Sometimes, there is a need for exchange to ensure your own survival. Not exactly survival of the fittest, but survival of the smartest? Not sure yet, it's too early (8-9 AM) for evolutionary mental tinkering. I love his friendship with Seungchae. I thought they would become friends at some point, and not just because they are both vertically challenged. x) When I imagined Seungchae, I imagined this cheerful, but kind of sneaky characters, but I love the way you're taking her so far. She isn't really in her element just yet, but none of them have had the best chance to show off their strengths just yet. I am waiting with bated breath! :DD