Crossing The Line

Description

Hello this is Yunjaesick or Niluh again XD, this is my third oneshot... actually i wanna write chaptered story soon. I hope you still like my story ne ^^ and keep comment~ 

 

disclaimer: This is Boy X Boy story if you don't like it, you just can close your tabs ^^ . This story has been posted in Bahasa in my facebok and my blog, so i'm not a plagiat. 

Foreword

CROSSING THE LINE
 
What do you do if you love someone who can not deserve you love?
 
He knew right if he had crossed a line that should be, the limit where the norms that he should learn and understand all this. He knows is true, may have a feeling like this is a great sin does. He fell too deep in her feelings, she did not know how to stop all the feelings that are now spreading in him. And he chose to escape.
 
But, in reality to avoid any feeling he had all the forms-in can not just disappear. So what should he do?
 
While even the parents will not be able to understand and comprehend the feelings that churned in his heart now.
 
Knows that and he is well aware, people who make it have a feeling like this was probably not going to want to understand about their own feelings. And the best way he could do now is avoid, avoid until at least the feeling can be lost.
 
== CROSSING THE LINE ==

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teddiebears #1
popping in to some older fics to say hi .u.
yunjae777
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Good
mimi_san #3
actually, i like how the story goes...but the typos dear...its kinda disturbing...did u use google translate or somethin'?you could ask someone to beta-read your fic you know...i believe lots of people would want to do that...anyway, keep writing coz practice makes perfect, yes?fighting!!!!!!
chullie_samonim #4
So sweet, i like it.<br />
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But... A lot of typo in bahasa/malay mixed w/ english. ^^ jadinya aneh.<br />
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mar1adyve5sa #5
so this is happy ending??XD
wishyy #6
erm quite a number of typo and i also notice some malay<br />
did u like did a translation for this FF?<br />
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wil be a good story i feel if u gona make it to a long chap fic :)<br />
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yunjae ending is always the best :)
grutugomuk #7
love it....... n finally they'll able to be together..~ <3<br />
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but i just noticed some MALAY words in this fic..hehehe..or is it just me?