White Winter Hymnal

Description

Winter is eternal and has become increasingly brutal for the people that have managed to survive the end of days.  

Luhan believes the only path to humanity's survival is with the total control of the rebels.

However, division among the people has always been a hinderance to any possibility of change.

 

And the rebels have become impatient- it's time to send up the flare.

 

 

If you're one of my beta readers for "Fleur de Feu", this spin-off is my gift to you.  It's a prequel of sorts as it offers a glimpse into how things were before the official division between Fleur and Cristal occurred.  

If you haven't read "Fleur de Feu" yet (it will be released in chapters starting 2016), like I've stated, this is a sneak peek into the world I've created.  Happy holidays everyone!

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Reviews:  

Score: 98/100

"I LOVE THIS STORY 200%! IT CAPTIVATED MY ATTENTION AND WHEN THE ENDING CAME, IT BLEW MY MIND. I AM DEFINITELY GOING TO READ FLEUR DU FEU ONCE IT COMES OUT!"

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one in a million: a review shop

Score:  180 + 2/200 ; 91%

"...despite the concept of the story itself being something I don't enjoy too much, you were able to win me over with your great writing.  I'm not sure if it's something I would re-read, but it's definitely something I would reccomend to others and I would even be interested in checking out Fleur De Feu when it is released."

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Score:  89.5/100

"I really had so much fun reading it!  You also gave me a challenge since this plot is quite new to me and I'm not actually that interested in this kind of plot but you made me go reading it all the way!  Good job!

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Score:  90/100 (My story was featured :D)

"I love your writing style and all, especially your awesome vocabulary, but the plot does not suit my taste so I didn't think I could enjoy as much like your other readers. Like I said in the Plot/Originality, it would have been better if you have explained a little bit more what was happening in the beginning, make it into a chaptered story, sprinkled it with a bit of romance, I would have love it then."

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Score 1:  98/100

 I loved it! While reading it you get the feeling of peace yet war. It leaves you in a state of  just staring at something but you don't know why you are staring at it. I can assure that many people would love this is they read to the end! I overall enjoyed it too much!

Score 2:  91/100

Overall, this was a pleasing read. Your plot was interesting and I feel like your writing style successfully conveyed it. Compliments on the layout and organization. I had no problems with it. The anticipation built from reading the foreword was not deflated as your story managed to keep me with the same level of thrill throughout. Good job. I would recommend this to people looking for this type of story but personally would not re-read or go on to reading the second installment.

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cutiexiumin #1
Chapter 1: oh my god
no
LUUUUUUUUU HANNNNNNNN WHO GAVE YOU PERMISSION TO DIE
ah~~ your writing has gotten so much better ^^
but don't forget to use commas instead of periods before quotations ends since the 'he said' is part of the sentence too.