Chapter 1: This was an interesting read. I was thoroughly entertained by how Yongguk ended up where he was, even if it did have to come at the cost of another heartbreak. I did want to say that everything after he ended up in the realm of the Fae happened really fast, and I was confused about him liking Daehyun so quickly in turn (gonna guess he's biual or something like that), but the way in which everything unfolded still made a fair bit of sense.

Admittedly, I didn't like Himchan at first, but after Yongguk and Jongup's fight, it made a bit more sense. I'm still not entirely sure why he would be willing to go to such extremes (that would hurt his friend mind you) but I do better understand his mentality. And Jongup throwing that fight was too cute. XD I laughed when he mentioned how he couldn't let Channie keep worrying so much. haha

You can be sure the ending was delightfully fluffy and enjoyable. It was somewhat strange that Daehyun too was so willing to throw away being a Fae for a mortal life himself but as many people have said, love causes us to do strange things all the time. lol If nothing else, it was certainly an interesting take on the story, and you gotta love a Fae tale anyway; it's not like there are that many around to begin with. ;)

Good job for finishing the Secret Santa and thank you for sharing. ^_^

The writing is great and the plot is developing nicely. But the ending is kind of rush. Although, the idea really catches attention it lack something towards the end. No worries about the writing style, it matches the story. Anyway, thumbs up! Lean more towards a wild end and unleash your imaginations. Keep going, and don't rush the next time. :) love love