Chapter 1: Very interesting take on vampires here. And the world you set up between them was quite believable for sure. Took me a second to figure out what Hakyeon was exactly but then it made sense shortly thereafter. I was also highly amused by Hakyeon and Taekwoon's relationship: the vampire and the magician. That was delightful, especially with the mention of Hakyeon exploding and Taekwoon not wanting to see it again.

It was also interesting how you made Hongbin here with recently being turned and having to deal with it. Given those tidbits of explanation, I would love to see under just what circumstances he was turned, and the confrontation that Hakyeon and Taekwoon had to pull him away from, but it was a wonderful piece of writing to read. A little jarring sometimes with the tense switches but very enjoyable all the same.

Hakyeon and Hongbin's relationship was just too precious and I really liked how things just were in this world: vampires cry tears of blood and it doesn't bother Hakyeon in the slightest. That 'break in' was also a neat little bit of intrigue that certainly helped to soften the tone of the story. Very nicely done and quite a pleasant read. Excellent gift too, if I do say so myself. ^_^

Chapter 1: SCREAMS I love love love it. It's so sweet, a little angsty though but that justs heightens the love and fluff. Hng thank you thank you so much for writing this ><