Chapter 10: I've just found this and it's so wonderful! Please update soon!

Chapter 10: There's so much I should comment on and so much that crossed my mind while I probably inhaled this story... But I definitely forgot, like, 90% of it...

So, to make it short: I really loved this story so far! I like the powers you picked for everyone!
Poor Minghao for having to say goodbye to his family, but I'm also glad that Jun gave him the chance to truly say goodbye and not just disappear from them, even though this might be more heartbreaking for Minghao's parents in the short run...
The training really was brutal, but I guess they all still have to learn. Somehow it's good to know that Seungkwan tried to help Minghao and that Wonwoo really just slipped, that he tried to stir everything back to a clear coast but that he just plainly couldn't, that means it hasn't been completely meant like this, though I can also understand Jihoon's motives for making posing a more difficult challenge for Minghao. I really can't wait to read about their talk/apology/whatever it may end up being eventually.
I feel sorry for Jun and Minghao for being in this state right now, both of them feeling too much, having too much pride, and not knowing how to cope with any of it when they really just want to make up again.
I can't help but wonder if this last sentence in the end really does mean what I'm hoping for, that Jun is indeed there and that it's not just a fantasy of Minghao. It would be so sweet! I hope they'll be able to talk soon...
And I'm so glad that Chan has an important role here, somehow in all the other FFs I've read so far about Seventeen, Chan has never really been a big part of the story (probably because he is still so young...) I'm happy that he and Minghao got some bonding time here and that he helped Minghao so much!

I can't wait for your update, whenever you will find the time to write this and to publish a new chapter. I'm really looking forward to it! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us~ <3

Chapter 10: Are you going to update? :/

Chapter 3: This... kicked me right in the hart being honest

Chapter 10: (2/2)


and meanie's relationship in this fic is so, so cute. i cant get the idea of puppy!mingyu trying to woo wonu over until wonu was like "fine, fine, lets be together" they're so domestic. and i'm super happy junhao's relationship is at least emotionally improving; they both know they are whipped for each other. i hope things progress more in the future ^w^



anyways I really hope you will update soon; reading this fic felt like entering a new world in my imagination when this AU takes place; such a dangerous, but thrilling and exciting world ;__; so many moments of this fic are mentally illustrated in my brain as i read it; ie the house (even without given to many details) i have a glimpse of it in my brain. good luck! <3

super bummed out now that i didn't read this earlier ;__; i'll make sure to comment more in the future. this fic made me so happy! <3

Chapter 10: hey there author nim ;nn; it's been kinda long since last update so hopefully you'll read this comment!! btw i've subbed both here (yay) and ao3 AHAHAH hohoho

i usually already love mutant/powers AUs so much (to the point i want to write my own one) so seeing this story and its description made me so excited to click onto it. from the very beginning the entire story felt like a rollercoaster of emotions, and it was just so exciting to follow haohao on his journey after discovering his (super awesome) powers!! and maybe it's just me but finding out which members had which powers were so exciting for me, i couldn't help ticking down mentally in my head like "ok so joshua has this..... seungcheol has this..." etc etc. my fave for now has def to be wonwoo's illusions. must be such a great power to have. although mingyu's shape shifting is also extremely cool ahaha (and i loved the part when hao was excited at jeonghan's power and jun was like "but i can be invisible!!" so smooth, jun. so smooth)

the way hao approached this entire thing was so realistic, and honestly if it was me i think i'd be just like him. the part when he called his parents was so heartbreaking, i really wanted to hug everyone regarding the situation. T____T and i've so glad jun is so whipped for him LOL.

tbh this fic kinda made me dislike jihoon (only fic jihoon ahaha) because how can he be so tough on hao ;___; and when he was asked did he have anything personal against minghao, i really wonder if it's going to be something that's explored in the future! (AND OH I SEE U JICHEOL. I SEE U)

(uhh comment too long..so this is 1/2)

Chapter 10: Omg you~ updated and gave us a heart break

Chapter 3: Why is minghao calling junhui, "junhui ge" what does it mean?

Chapter 10: This chapter had me crying :(((( don't be hard on yourself, okay?? Love this fic btw <333

Chapter 10: It feels really good to see an update of a long awaited fic.. the fic is really good n the way is write is beautiful.. i wud jst request u author-nim to update d chps soon if u possibly can.. n a huge thnx for such a beautiful fic..