Revelare

Drama, Mystery, Romance ::: nightlock08 ::: Title [10/10] From 'The Heiress' to 'Revelare', I don't know what thought(s) you have in mind while doing the changes but either one, it still eye-catching. I made believed, Revelare is concerned with the character's past and Jiwon's true identity that would unveil as the story unfolds. Description [5/5] This might sound random but with each word that my eyes catch on, I keeps on forgetting that initially I came to REVIEW. Let alone the prologue, with only description, I've already attracted to the story. Whirling in my head was the anticipation of what would come next. The prologue served as another spikes of adrenaline rush and from then onward, I was happily willing to trade my trust. Conflict began to piling up as I continued with the prologue. Aside from the settings, attention grabbing flow, cascades of tension, I was really fond of the emotion being displayed on each scene. Who are the people attacking them? Why are they doing it? You have given us just enough teaser to click on the 'next' button. Plot [35/40] At the back of my mind, a seemingly haunting plot of korean drama 'Princess Hours', 'My Princess' and even fantasy fiction like Harry Potter keeps finding its way for comparison. But the good part is, it didn't seem to rob the excitement away. The outcome from every chapter conveyed a deja vu's settings, a somehow realistically ordinary plot but effortlessly grasped one's attention despite of its 'I-kind-of-heard-this-scenes-somewhere-someplace-sometimes' plot. Chapter One: Maybe not for all, but I've eyes on Shinhye's character instead of Jiwon's. The story kickstart with a you-know cliche scenes. I wouldn't categorize it as memorable yet but the subsequent pacing was smoothly on track. I was amazed that I didn't even realize the whole chapters were already finished. Their imaginable gestures, relatable conversations presented in such a way for one to keep yearning for next. To sum it up, it was convincing and foremost, absolutely worth for one's time and emotional investment. Han Groo, since her debut 'Killer K' show, I have always keeping track of her. It was a pleasure to see her in this drama-like story, opening a new window in my heart, added the more reasons for me to stay on board. In this chapter, you gave every character a fairly amount of scenes for them to engage with the readers. I admires this rare quality in writer because most of the time, writer can't help but to put more emphasize on their main character because this way, readers might've able to love the main character more but from my point of view, it could carry the possibility to ruin a potential good reads. I can see that you're pouring tireless efforts and is very careful about choosing every details of a scene. You're expert at making others to develope series of curiosities into each of your characters. This only proved that you valued each and every one of your characters and inherently, people with insight will be able to point that out. At this phase onward, I was readily but nervously wanting to fall in love with not only the present characters but the yet undisclose ones because deep within, I know for sure, it's not going to disappoint