The Cheater Catcher

Romantic comedy ::: Sonnatra ::: Title Who's the çheater'? and, what's with the catcher thingy? — with only these, you've turned my reader's mode on; you made me realized, what I don't know, and how much I needed to know. The title was wisely chosen and fitted well with the story. Maybe it's just me but I found the title as you read along it, sounded a bit awkward. If I happen to scroll through, I don't think I would've notice your title. This was one title that makes one thinks, and usually if one is in rush, it could've not appeal to them. I've always preferred one word title, that's why. Anyhow, it doesnt seem to affect your story generally. Description It was well written, provided more than enough substances for one to invest into the story. You were able to pour out the main conflict of the story neatly. I applaud you for that. It wasn't a flaw, but it could've been better if you shorten up the sentences. Furthermore, I think the last sentence with 'This is a Love Story...' was redundant, or else, you could've just use it for the description instead. Very straight forward and presented just enough drama to entice, I think it'll work out well nevertheless. And, the 'Love Story' part, there is no need to capitalize the 'L'and 'S'. Also, ellipsis '...'has either three dots or six. Plot Admittedly, I've encountered few similar plot premise like yours but I would say, the plot twists were something that deserved to be called as yours. It might not the most original plot out there but you rocked it! I was impressed at how the main characters (MC) were connected with the çatcher'job so inherently. Right from the start, you managed to pave a distinct road for each of your characters, successfully lead me into their world. It was lively, intense, and heart-warming. As I read, I couldn't stop pondering upon how hurt the MC (Luna) must have been for her to possess such a determine heart in doing this kind of job so earnestly. Like a flash, she grows onto me and I've becoming more than glad to root for her. Not only that, the main conflict of the story also elaborated in such a way that 'feels'so relatable and memorable. The existence of everything, and every scene in the story seemingly to hold their own significance, and that one scene leads to another, literally, the plot was so justly written that I barely had the time to breath on my own; at the back of my mind, I was bombarded with more and more curiosity, and to some extend, I really can't handle it! However, there were a few thing(s) like the relationships between the MC's, like how Chanyeol was helplessly fall for Luna gave me a sense of dissatisfaction. The way their destiny unfold were undeniably beautifully written but