Perfection

Angst, Slice of life ::: KillerGal ::: Title [9/10] Choice of words 4/5 A simple, common word that making more sense as the story expand; indeed, it shines uniquely on its own. I seriously couldn't come out with a better title but personally I would still be a bit hesistate to agree that it'll be the best title for this fic. PERFECTION. Isn't it very normal to think that perfection itself would never exist amongst human? At a glance, already I've had high expectation for this so-called perfection. Moreso, I think that was why, there was a distant feel that refused to wear away even after reaching the last words.. Relevance 5/5 It was relevant.  Description [12/15] Introduction 5/5 With such a short intro and yet in no time, the words have tugged my heart in a good way. Simple, relevant, and heartstrings.  Flow& Pacing 2.5/5 I'm less devastated about the flow than the pacing. If I came as a reader, the pacing would be one of the reasons why I'd have given up reading this wonderful story. Everything lies in our level of understanding. which I supposed was very subjective to anyone. Thank god, I've let go of all the pretense that I didn't know, and kept reading. Theme 4.5/5 From what I read, angst didn't seem to be  the main theme. Sliceoflife yes. Admitedly, every phrase, and each word has a great attachment to psychological .  Kai's characteristic and presentation were very much fit to the condition termed as 'Obsessive Compulsive Disorder'. It just clicks in, ha. Plot [31/40] Originality 9/10 I really, really  was struggling to understand. To align everything in place was almost impossible, and while keeping those at the back of my mind, questions regarding originallity hardly affect me much. Development:   1st 9/10 Kai's world started to change bit by bit after meeting with someone by the name of Baek. If you already knows what first, middle, and final arc of story's components, then I wouldn't have to say much, in which I reckoned you knew.  So, what exactly is the 'thing' that changing or threatening to change our MC (main character)'s world?  It was Baekhyun. One's life has to change because of someone else -- how many times do we experience this, even in real life? I'm telling you, although your storyline appear original, but the subplot are not one that we never see before. 2nd 8/10 The of this story revolves around our MC. Of how he's going to search for the road of perfection. I've been questioning myself, 'what exactly is Kai looking for?' 'is it...really perfection?' It might sounded weird, but I've these feelings that the thing Kai is looking for is none other than something that could break his so-called perfect image. He needs flaw. Flaw that could make him feel like a person, just like everyone else. From my point of view, Baekhyun