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Reminiscent
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(6)

 

“You’re so pretty,” Seunghyun whispers and pulls Jiyong closer in, swinging their arms together as they walk.

 

Jiyong, glances up at him, pouty lips pursed in indignance. “No! You’re more dashing than anything else!”

 

Seunghyun emits a soft cooing sound, delighted to hear Jiyong playing into his game.

 

“You’ve got lips that are redder than coral. The prettiest pair I’ve ever seen.”

 

“Well.” Jiyong says, smiling gracefully. “I can’t disagree with that, Campbell tomato soup connoisseur.”

 

Seunghyun laughs, pushing Jiyong lightly at his shoulder when he shrugs. Jiyong lets Seunghyun pull him into his arms, snakes his own against Seunghyun’s waist and doesn’t resist when he’s pushed roughly against the wall of the brick-red school building they’re walking past.

 

For once in Jiyong’s life he doesn’t care who sees.



 

(7)

 

 

Dinner at my place? I’ve restocked the supply of Campbell Soup ;) - CSH

 

Jiyong reads off the sticky note on his fridge, lips curling to form a small smile when he peels it gently off the surface,

 

“Jiyong?” Youngbae’s voice lulls Jiyong’s attention back to the present.

 

“Yeah?”

 

“The producers would like to meet you over dinner tonight. Bring in the best you’ve got,” Youngbae says.

 

“You’re a lucky chap, you know? They don’t usually include freshmens in their list of potential signings. I’ll tell them you’ll be there over dinner tonight, yeah?”

 

“Oh. Yeah. Uhm. It’s great. I know. Thanks...”

 

It’s the first time Jiyong misses out on a dinner date with Seunghyun.


 

(8)

 

 

I miss you.

 

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bluedandelions #1
Chapter 3: Oh my heart! It hurts so beautifully, I can see Jiyong being reticent with his feelings, shying away from revealing too much. So much beauty in this angsty GTop. Love how Jiyong's thoughts are filled into the story with some many nuances. . Just love it!!
bootyful #2
this is absolute perfection. your writing is beautiful. i'm completely blown by this. you've very cleverly woven in jiyong's thoughts and feelings throughout this story. thank you for sharing this, really. im so in love with every part of it, right up to the end.
frozen-autumn #3
I just want to say that this story was really really good... I don't have all the words to put this comment out, but I think it really did encompass the feelings of GTOP, and yeah, even with the rather.. sad ending, it really felt like it was right. With the lyrics and all... So thanks sooo much for writing! ^^
irrelevance
#4
Chapter 3: Very well written. I love the plot and the ending, it was really painful but so rightly so. I love hate this story so much, you have no idea!!! But still, glad that you've written this. Truly one of the best GTOP fanfiction by far!

If only I could upvote this more than once lol
primrosepath #5
Chapter 3: This was a heartbreakingly beautiful read. It hurts so bad... but I really enjoyed your characterization...it makes me feel all the things i haven't felt in awhile. I hardly ever come across break-up fics like yours?? God this is so sad!! i think you should post the chapter covering the reading. Oh and upvoted, by the way. Thanks for writing such a masterpiece, author-nim.
didoe84
#6
Chapter 3: Oh god I really want to know more about your mind as author behind the choice toy made for this story. .. the end is so bitter (has it any link to the tomato soup or mint ?? ) the regrets are tainting the mood and touching the heart I love it as I hate it (and that's a compliment)
HeavyRxyne
#7
Chapter 3: This story is one of the best Gtop stories by far.

The characters develop alot during the whole thing and I feel like even at the ending Jiyong is still doing jt half heartedly as always.

I know the symbols all connect nut I would like to know how as I am eager and trust me. It wouldn't even stop me from feeling all the emtions I felt.

This si sol good, I can't wait for you to write a longer gtop story like this because it will be brilliant :D
lovedusts
#8
Chapter 3: wow. just wow. that ending really killed me. exactly how well can you write???? wow. i'm speechless and trying so hard not to cry right now..... and i never knew the 'halfs' were so symbollic. whoa this is a really really deep story. i loved every single part of it. thank you so much for posting this. i think you should explain the ending to us ...cuz i can't help but to feel sad for gd :(
Queen-Jiyonce
#9
Chapter 3: I would love to leave a proper comment,but there are literal tears clouding my eyes and I can't even think straight. Thank you for stabbing me in the chest with feelings.
ibgtop
#10
Chapter 2: update soon urgh i hate being left hanging ;;