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Reminiscent
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(1)

 

‘Want a mint?’

 

The sound of Seunghyun’s husky voice derails Jiyong from his train of thoughts. He can no longer pretend to be entertained by the sight of his gruff Timberland boots. Jiyong gulps and plucks up the courage to cast a glance in his direction.

 

It’s not the first time Jiyong has snicked a glance at the dashing man, that he’ll admit. But it’s the first time Seunghyun will consciously notice Jiyong’s eyes on him and—

 

Seunghyun’s standing. More specifically, leaning against the concrete surface of the red-brick wall, outside their dormitory vestibule. He has hands half-tucked suavely into the pocket of his navy trench coat.

 

An enigmatic half-smile plays upon his lips when their gazes lock.

 

Why Jiyong feels his heart race and his mouth run dry, almost dropping the cuppa he is holding, he chooses not to consider. He blames the numbing chill of that early spring morning.

 

‘You don’t seem to like me much.’ Seunghyun lets out a heavy, mock sigh, retracting his offer slowly. ‘Doesn’t matter. You’re cute. And I think I like you anyway.’

 

Jiyong’s so flustered he almost chokes.




 

(2)

 

 

‘So, you write. Do you write write songs? Think through every single word? Do you borrow ideas from books or do you usually write from real life experience?’

 

‘A little bit of both.’ Jiyong mutters, shoving the last of his lyric sheets into a clear folder. It’s been two weeks since the older boy had started trailing him around the campus. He wonders and thinks, maybe, just maybe he is interested in forming some sort of lasting friendship. Just friendship of course, nothing more.

 

Nothing more.

 

‘That’s cool. I’ve never really met anyone who has talent like yours.’

 

Jiyong thinks that Seunghyun probably hasn’t met enough people to tell. He wants to remind Seunghyun that he has read nothing more than two verses of Jiyong’s creation.

 

‘Even if I had,' Seunghyun pauses thoughtfully, as if reading his mind. 'They’d probably pale in comparison to yours.’

 

Jiyong gets that Seunghyun’s trying. (Even though his compliment lacks much logic)

 

So Jiyong tries too.

 

He tries, by not trying to hide that frequent, dreamy smile that hangs past his lips ever since that day.



 

(3)

 

 

‘Youngbae says I’m overdoing it. Collecting art. But it’s a second nature to me now. Ever heard of Warhol? Andy Warhol?’

 

‘Not really. Does he have any particular prominent pieces?”

 

‘Campbell’s condensed tomato soup.’

 

‘What? Say that again.’ Jiyong pauses mid-writing, looks up from his music sheet, perplexed as he meets the other’s gaze. The mischievous glint in Seunghyun’s eyes come alive like embers.

 

The older boy makes the slow show of hopping off the latch, drawing closer to Jiyong as he slings an arm over Jiyong’s shoulder. The warmth from Seunghyun’s digits send a novel spark of electricity coursing past his veins. Jiyong feels like he’s suffocating and learning to breathe at the same time.

 

Gliding his tongue across his lips in a pathetic attempt to allay his whirl of emotions, Jiyong tightens his grip on his pen. He proceeds on to write his music, as if his earlier train of thought hadn’t already been derailed by the unforeseen physical contact this dangerously attractive man is making at a dangerously late hour.

 

His awareness is all the more heightened when Seunghyun’s mocha hues fixated upon him. Unbeknownst to him, they have been ensorcelled by his petal red lips for awhile now.

 

‘I said, Campbell’s condensed tomato soup. Red…and all’ His voice is rough, deep and velvety, now only barely above a whisper.

 

‘Delicious…’

 

Jiyong gulps.

 

‘I’m sure it taste, you know...delicious… like something that I haven’t been able to stop thinking about.’

 

Jiyong will be lying if he says he isn’t already acutely aware of Seunghyun’s piercing gaze on his rosemary lips. He loses his hearing for a while, the thumping heartbeat from within reverberates throughout his body. It’s all he hears for abit.

 

“O-Oh.” Jiyong manages, eyes timidly shying away from everything Seunghyun. They scan over the messy floor, linger a little too long on the crushed balls of paper atop his desk, then his red mitten gloves lying on the edge of the coffee table and—

 

Seunghyun leans in. Leans his face all the way in, until his own lips are aligned with Jiyong’s ears, hands cupping his cheek, and then, he whispers.

 

“I really really like that… also, I, really really like…” He pulls back, making sure their gazes lock.

 

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bluedandelions #1
Chapter 3: Oh my heart! It hurts so beautifully, I can see Jiyong being reticent with his feelings, shying away from revealing too much. So much beauty in this angsty GTop. Love how Jiyong's thoughts are filled into the story with some many nuances. . Just love it!!
bootyful #2
this is absolute perfection. your writing is beautiful. i'm completely blown by this. you've very cleverly woven in jiyong's thoughts and feelings throughout this story. thank you for sharing this, really. im so in love with every part of it, right up to the end.
frozen-autumn #3
I just want to say that this story was really really good... I don't have all the words to put this comment out, but I think it really did encompass the feelings of GTOP, and yeah, even with the rather.. sad ending, it really felt like it was right. With the lyrics and all... So thanks sooo much for writing! ^^
irrelevance
#4
Chapter 3: Very well written. I love the plot and the ending, it was really painful but so rightly so. I love hate this story so much, you have no idea!!! But still, glad that you've written this. Truly one of the best GTOP fanfiction by far!

If only I could upvote this more than once lol
primrosepath #5
Chapter 3: This was a heartbreakingly beautiful read. It hurts so bad... but I really enjoyed your characterization...it makes me feel all the things i haven't felt in awhile. I hardly ever come across break-up fics like yours?? God this is so sad!! i think you should post the chapter covering the reading. Oh and upvoted, by the way. Thanks for writing such a masterpiece, author-nim.
didoe84
#6
Chapter 3: Oh god I really want to know more about your mind as author behind the choice toy made for this story. .. the end is so bitter (has it any link to the tomato soup or mint ?? ) the regrets are tainting the mood and touching the heart I love it as I hate it (and that's a compliment)
HeavyRxyne
#7
Chapter 3: This story is one of the best Gtop stories by far.

The characters develop alot during the whole thing and I feel like even at the ending Jiyong is still doing jt half heartedly as always.

I know the symbols all connect nut I would like to know how as I am eager and trust me. It wouldn't even stop me from feeling all the emtions I felt.

This si sol good, I can't wait for you to write a longer gtop story like this because it will be brilliant :D
lovedusts
#8
Chapter 3: wow. just wow. that ending really killed me. exactly how well can you write???? wow. i'm speechless and trying so hard not to cry right now..... and i never knew the 'halfs' were so symbollic. whoa this is a really really deep story. i loved every single part of it. thank you so much for posting this. i think you should explain the ending to us ...cuz i can't help but to feel sad for gd :(
Queen-Jiyonce
#9
Chapter 3: I would love to leave a proper comment,but there are literal tears clouding my eyes and I can't even think straight. Thank you for stabbing me in the chest with feelings.
ibgtop
#10
Chapter 2: update soon urgh i hate being left hanging ;;